讀寫任務中經歷感受類要點拓展

一、套用句式

1. 經歷。

(1) The author’s story/experience reminds me of my experience in my childhood. I was stealing green soy beans in my neighbors’ field when I was caught on the spot. How embarrassed I was! 作者的故事/經歷使我想起了我童年時的一場經歷。當時我正在鄰居的地里偷毛豆，突然被當場抓了個正著。我是多么尷尬！

(2) On reading the story， my mind began its search for a similar experience. Immediately it occurred to me that I was often laughed at by my classmates because I was the shortest in my class.讀了這個故事，我的頭腦開始搜尋類似的經歷。很快，我就想到了初中時我總是被同學嘲笑，因為我是班里最矮的。

(3) I also had an unforgettable experience. It was when I was doing my first chemistry experiment in Junior Middle School. 我同樣也有一場難忘的經歷。那是在我讀初中第一次做化學實驗的時候。

(4) What a/an embarrassing/delighting/fantastic/ unbelievable experience it is! In my case/ Take myself as an example/ For example/ For instance， I have ever faced the same situation. 這是一場多么尷尬/開心/新奇/難以置信的經歷啊!以我為例，我也曾經遇到過同樣的情況。

(5) After reading the story， I can’t/ couldn’t help remembering the earthquake that happened ten years ago. It was my neighbor who rescued me from the collapsing house. 讀了這個故事，我不禁想起了十年前的那場地震。正是我的鄰居把我從正在坍塌的房子救出來。

2. 感受。

(1) From this experience I learned/ realized/ firmly believed that time is so precious. Nothing can compensate for the loss of time. 從這次經歷中，我懂得了/意識到了/堅信時間是如此寶貴，光陰一去不復還。

(2) According to/ Based on my personal experience， it’s well worth the effort to make plenty of preparations. Just as the saying goes， “Grinding a chopper will not delay the work of cutting firewood.” 根據我的個人經歷，做足夠的準備是非常值得的。正如諺語所說，磨刀不誤砍柴工。

(3) From then on， I have tried to be determined in my work no matter what happens . Only if you persevere in work， will you succeed in the end. 從此之后，我努力做到在工作中堅定信心，不管發生什么。只有你對工作持之以恒，你才能取得最終的成功。

二、實例分析

拓展要點：你愿意獨處還是與朋友共處？請以你的經歷來支持你的觀點。（2011 惠州二模）

思路分析：首先立場鮮明地說清楚自己的觀點傾向，可由similarly，personally等引出并與之前的概要部分形成過渡；然后敘述自己的經歷，可由take myself as an example， in my case， I couldn’t help remembering等引出。敘述事情應言簡意賅，清晰自然，忌長篇大論；然后用一兩句話帶出從該經歷中得到的感受或經驗教訓，可由from this experience I realized...等引出。

參考范文：

Similarly， I would like to stay with my friends rather than stay alone. In my case， math was once my nightmare in my study. However， it was my friend， Wang， who gave me a hand as well as a chance to break this curse. Although I was rather slow， he guided me through tremendous math problems with great patience. And finally， I step by step learned to work them out myself and I think this attributed to the endless effort made together by him and me. And no words can express my gratitude to him. From this experience I realized a friend in need is a friend indeed. May all of us treasure friendship.

三、即時練習

1. 用你自己或你朋友的例子，談談壞習慣給人們帶來的影響。

2. 舉例談談你自己被表揚的經歷和感受。

3. 舉例談談你有沒有幫助過別人？有何感受？

四、綜合練習

閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

It was one of those cold winter nights in the Haight district of San Francisco. I was driving an ugly car. It was a difficult car to drive. In fact， the car was badly damaged when I bought it from a neighbor. The engine needed repairs and most of the oil I added would leak out along the way.

That night， the car died in the middle of Oak Street. There I sat， in busy evening traffic， as a number of cars flashed by.

In my rearview mirror (后視鏡) I saw a car stop behind me. I knew what was coming. Soon the horn (喇叭) would start and someone would be shouting at me. I thought I was in trouble.

But I was wrong. A stranger got out of the car and came to my window. He shouted， “Do you want a push?” I was amazed but must have nodded yes. He waved to his car and two teens came out. When I was safely taken to a side street， they went back into their car and joined the sea of cars.

I didn’t get the chance to thank them.

Over the years I’ve realized something about the stranger who stopped to help. I’ve noticed that every time I’m in trouble， he appears. He never looks the same. His age and race change， too. But he’s always there. I’ve started to understand he’s the best part of what makes us human beings. It is the unasked kindness provided by a stranger that makes life worthwhile.

[寫作內容]

1. 以約30詞概括短文的內容要點；

2. 然后以約120個詞寫一篇短文，包括以下要點：

(1)你是否相信人性的善良？

(2)請簡要說明原因，并以你的經歷來支持你的觀點。

(3)通過這件事，你獲得了什么感受？對你產生了什么影響？

參考范文

即時練習

1. I have very similar experiences to the author. I am so disorganized and lazy that I always leave my job undone until the last moment. For example， I never do my homework in the daytime of weekends but take hours only for happiness. As a result， I have to spend sleepless Sunday nights scribbling my homework， which leads to terrible marks in English because of no chances available to revise. Now I realize that a good habit is the basis of success and I must get rid of the bad habits which prevent me from succeeding.

2. Praise is really magical. Perhaps many of us had such an experience. Take myself as an example. I was very naughty in the primary school. Most of the teachers and even my parents felt headache of me. But it happened that I once got a very high mark in an examination and the head teacher reported this to my parents. My parents praised me crazily for quite a long time and told neighbors about that. I felt really happy and became polite to others from then on. In the meanwhile， I was determined to work even harder and made greater progress.

3. I still remember a good deed that I did when I was a small boy. One day， our next-door neighbors asked if I could take care of their pet dog as they were to go on holiday. I pleasantly agreed to take care of it. Every day， I fed， bathed and played with it. When my neighbors came back after the vacation， the dog was even reluctant to leave me! My neighbors thanked me， saying that I was a most helpful boy. From this experience， not only did I have a good time， but I also learned to be responsible.

綜合練習：

A stranger and his friends helped to push the writer’s broken car away from the main street without any complaining. The constant similar kindnesses from strangers make the writer moved by our human nature.

Just like the writer， I always believe that we are born kind to others. I can’t stand witnessing others suffer from misfortune and I can’t help reaching out my hand to help those in need. Actually I was also influenced by a stranger and thus strengthened this belief.

Once I was about to catch a train in Guangzhou Station. There was only an hour left before the train would leave， but I was still on my way to the station. In order to save time， I decided to take the subway although it was the first time I had ever taken it. After entering the subway entrance， however， I was completely confused by the directions and the self-service system. I had no idea but to walk up and down hurriedly. Seeing my anxious look， a stranger came up and helped me buy the ticket. Still not being sure of my catching the train in time， he even accompanied me along the whole way to the station. From then on， I have always tried to help those in need， known or unknown， if possible. I firmly believe that it is the little warmth among people that makes the world so beautiful.

(作者單位：河源市東源中學)

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