話題1 個人情況（Personal information）

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一、命題預測

命題人可能要求考生寫應聘某個職位的申請信、競選某個職位的演講稿以及征友帖等，這些都需介紹個人情況。

二、常用短語

1. be born in ... on May 8， 1985 1985年5月8日出生于……

2. at the age of 20 / aged 20 在二十歲的時候

3. graduate from 畢業于

4. be good at spoken English 擅長英語口語

5. be fond of swimming 喜歡游泳

6. be determined to be a teacher 決定做一位教師

7. have patience and confidence 具有耐心和信心

8. look forward to working there 希望能在那里工作

9. have a good habit of study 有良好的學習習慣

10. in ones spare time 在某人的業余時間

11. meet your requirement 符合你們的要求

12. an open-minded and optimistic girl 一個開朗樂觀的女孩

13. apply for the position 申請這個職位

14. be popular with 受到……的歡迎

15. have all the qualifications for the job 有做這項工作的一切合格證書

三、套用句式

1. I ， the son of a poor family ， was born in Guangdong on February 12， 1809. 我，一個貧苦家庭的兒子1809年2月出生于廣東。（同位語）

2. In my life， I got many honours， one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award. 我一生中獲得很多榮譽，其中包括獲得“2005感動中國年度人物”的稱號。（定語從句）

3. Not only do I show interest in science， but also I have a gift for music. 我不但對科學極有興趣，而且對音樂也有天賦。（倒裝句式）

4. I sincerely hope you can accept my application. 我真誠地希望你能接受我的申請。

5. Im a beautiful woman， with long hair and big eyes. 我是一位長著一雙大眼睛，留著長發的漂亮女士。

四、習作修改（做短文改錯，背經典范文）

I am physics teacher. I am 1.75 meters in the height and I was born in November 4，1952. So I am a middle-aged man. I graduated from the Qinghua University in 1978. Before graduation， I become a middle school teacher. I have been taught physics for more than 20 years.

I am very successfully as a teacher. I have been given a lot of honor. I not only teach physics well but also speak English and Russian very good. In my spare time， I like reading books， collect stamps and listening to music. Also， Im kind-hearted.

五、課堂練習

假如你是李明，明天班會課你班將進行班干部競選，你將競選班長，請寫一份競選稿。

1. 介紹本人基本情況及參選的理由。

2. 獲選后的計劃。

3. 希望投票支持。

注意：1. 字數100左右。

2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

Hello， everyone. ...

[寫作指導]

第一步，認真審題。

1. 審文體：演講稿，應用文。

2. 審時態：以一般時態為主。

3. 審人稱：以第一人稱為主。

第二步，根據需要，增加細節。

本題是為競選班長而寫的一篇文章，考生可根據自己的經驗與要求來尋找和挖掘相關信息。1.基本信息：姓名、性別等。2.品性：性格、交際能力等。3.獲選后的計劃：為同學們做表率、為同學服務、開展各種活動等。

第三步，拓點成句，表達信息。

1. 我叫李明。是一個樂觀外向的男孩。

My name is Li Ming. Im an open-minded and optimistic boy.

2. 我想競選我們班的班長。

Id like to be monitor of our class.

3. 我不僅僅善于與人交流， 而且因為樂于助人，與同學相處融洽。

Im not only expert at communicating with others but also get along well with others，for I am always ready to help others.

4. 我各門功課優秀。是一個體育愛好者。

Im a sports lovers and I do well in all subjects.

5. 如果我獲選，我會表現好自己，做同學們的表率。

If I win the election， I promise I will behavior myself and set a good example to you.

6. 我會不遺余力的為同學們服務。

Ill spare no effort to serve classmates.

7. 我會組織一些課外活動來豐富校園生活。

I will organize some after-class activities to enrich our school life.

第四步，連句成文。

六、課外作業

假定你是李華，從互聯網上得知有一位名叫Tom的老板想為他11歲的兒子請一名家教。請寫一封電子郵件申請這個職位。

1. 介紹自己的基本情況。

2. 希望知道的有關信息。

注意：1. 字數100左右。

2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Tom，

Sincerely yours，

Lihua

參考答案與范文

四、習作修改

1. physics teacher前加a因physics teacher為可數名詞單數。

2. in→on 此處表示在某一天。

3. 去掉Qinghua University前的the 為習慣表達。

4. Before→after 根據上下文，此處意為在畢業以后而不是以前。

5. become改為became 表示過去行為用過去時。

6. taught→teaching 此處為完成進行時，時態結構的需要。

7. successfully 改為successful 形容詞作表語。

8. honor→ honors 因honor為可數名詞后加s。

9. good →well 此處修飾謂語動詞speak作狀語，應用副詞well。

10. collect→collecting 此處作謂語動詞like的并列賓語。

五、課堂練習

Hello， everyone， my name is Li Ming. Im an open-minded and optimistic boy. Id like to be monitor of our class.

As you all know， not only am I expert at communicating with others but also I get along well with others，for I am always ready to help others. Besides， Im a sports lovers and I do well in all subjects.

If I win the election， I promise I will behavior myself and set a good example to you. Ill spare no effort to serve classmates as well as organize some after-class activities to enrich our school life.

I would appreciate it if you choose me to be your monitor.

六、課外作業

Dear Tom.

My name is Li Hua and Id like to apply for the position. First Id like to introduce myself to you. Now I am studying in Zhongshan University which is one of the famous key universities in China. Im good at English and quite able to help your son with his English. Besides， Im patient， careful and outgoing. So Im convinced that your son will make great progress with my effective guidance and timely help.

Eventually， Id like to learn more about the job. How often should I give your son lessons？ How long can each lesson last？ How much can you offer for each hour？

Im looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua

（作者單位：廣東深圳市松崗中學）

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