話題5 校園生活（School life）

黃巍

一、命題預測

校園生活是指在校學習的課程，學校、班級或學生會等舉行的各項比賽或課外活動，包括聚會、野餐、燒烤、春游等課外活動；也包括學生的穿著、發型，還包括預習、復習、討論、歸納等學習活動或教師的教學方法。

命題者可能會要求考生就某項比賽或課外活動等寫一份通知，或就具體的聚會、野餐、燒烤、春游等課外活動寫一份通知或寫活動后的日記。可能要求考生就學生的穿著、發型、行為舉止等發表看法；就預習、復習、討論、歸納等課堂學習活動和教師教學方法等發表看法；就學生對任課教師開展評教活動發表看法；學校在節假日該不該補課；學生該不該參加校外各種形式的特長訓練，如鋼琴培訓、外語培訓、勤工儉學等。

二、常用短語

1. dining hall食堂

2. dormitory宿舍

3. sign up for 報名

4. have a good command of精通于

5. pass the examination通過考試

6. voluntary labor義務勞動

7. concentrate on 全神貫注；專心于

8. the Students Union學生會

9. physical activities 體育活動

10. keep... in mind記住

11. cheat in the exam考試作弊

12. prepare for lessons預習功課

13. make progress in ... 在……方面取得進步

14. after-school/extracurricular activities課外活動

15. enhance the students awareness of sth. 提高學生的……意識

三、套用句式

1. It goes without saying that education is of great importance to children. 毫無疑問，教育對孩子來說是十分重要的。

2. The reason why he did so is that he wanted to help her.他這樣做的原因是想幫助她。

3. Not only can it help us in our study， but also it can help us in our daily life. 它不僅能夠幫助我們的學習，而且還能夠在生活方面給我們幫助。

4. There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫無疑問我們的教育制度令人不滿意。

5. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我們再怎么強調保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。

四、習作修改（做短文改錯，背經典范文）

Dear Ms. Smith，

Im Li Hua. Chairman of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School， which is closely to your university. Im writing to invite you to be judge at our English speech contest to hold in your school in June 1st. It would start at 2∶00 pm and keep for about three hour. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the give topic “Man and the Nature”. We hope you to accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 446765560 because you have some questions.

I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

With best wishes

Li Hua

五、課堂練習

假如你是雷雨，你在湖南老家的朋友李俊今年也是高三， 他在和你的交談中表示現在的學習壓力很大。請你給他寫封信，給他提一些建議。

1. 將自己的問題告訴老師和同學，請求得到他們的幫助。

2. 要多想想自己在哪些方面進步了，這樣就會給自己自信。

3. 多做運動，運動可以幫助自己緩解壓力，并且有助于睡眠。

注意：1. 詞數100左右。

2. 可以適當添加細節，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭和結束語已為你寫好。

Dear Li jun，

There is no doubt that I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from ...

[過程指導]

第一步，認真審題。

1. 定文體：寫一封信，是應用文體。首先要注意書信的格式，特別要注意書信的開頭與結尾的常用句子。

2. 定時態：以一般現在時態為主。

3. 定人稱：以第一和第二人稱為主。

4. 定要點：認真閱讀所給信息要點，力求信息點完整。

第二步，考慮表達。

也就是打草稿：一擬定結構，二尋找關鍵詞，三確定要用的句式。

結構：你打算分幾段寫（一般是有幾個要點就分幾段）？段與段之間如何銜接？

關鍵詞：結構擬定后，迅速在草稿紙上寫下自己這篇作文可能用到的一些關鍵詞。包括一些漂亮的詞和自己可能會忘記的詞。主要是動詞和名詞。

第三步，連句成篇。

巧用關聯詞（連接，副詞）。

第四步，檢查核對。

漏詞，錯詞，如查動詞時態、名詞復數、主謂一致等是否正確。

第五步，規范書寫。

六、課外作業

葉良辰是一名即將進入高三的學生，他來向你請教如何安排高三的學習和生活，請給他提一些建議。內容包括：

1. 制定一個學習量適中的復習計劃，有張有弛，不要熬夜。

2. 注意鍛煉身體，加強營養。

3. 遇到問題多思考，勤總結。

4. 保持愉快的心情，和同學們搞好關系。

注意：1. 詞數100左右。

2. 可以適當添加細節，以使行文連貫。

參考答案與范文

四、習作修改

1. closely→close系動詞后要跟形容詞作表語。

2. 在judge前面加上不定冠詞a 單數可數名詞前一般要有冠詞。

3. hold →be held和 speech contest是被動關系。

4. in→on具體日期前應用介詞 on。

5. hour→hours數詞超過一，其后的名詞就應該用復數。

6. give→given應該用過去分詞做定語。

7. 去掉to accept 的 to 因Hope后面不能用不定式做賓補。

8. because →if這里應該是一個虛擬條件狀語從句。

9. some →any條件狀語從句中應該用any。

10. hear→hearing介詞后面的動詞要用ing形式。

五、課堂練習

Dear Li jun，

There is no doubt that I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. In an effort to deal with your problem， I suggest you tell your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time as it only makes you more stressed out. Instead， remind yourself of the progress you have made in your study， which will surely build up your own confidence. In addition， do more exercise in your spare time. Not only can it relieve your stress， but also it will help you sleep better at night. I hope you will get out of trouble soon and live happily.

Best wishes！

Yours sincerely，

Lei Yu

六、課外作業

As a senior high student， it goes without saying that we are suffering from great pressure. In an effort to deal with it， I advise you to make a review plan which is not too hard or too easy and youd better not stay late because it makes you tired and sleepy in the day. In addition， try to spare some time to take exercise which can make you healthy and relaxed. When you meet difficult problems， you must think about them carefully first and try to draw conclusions from them so as to get a clear understanding. Whats more， everybody knows a good mood is of great importance， if you can be in a good mood and get on well with your classmates， youll find everything becomes very easy and smooth.

（作者單位：廣東深圳市松崗中學）

責任編輯 蔣小青