余愛(ài)香
一、命題預(yù)測(cè)
該話題寫作常出現(xiàn)在一些說(shuō)明性的應(yīng)用文中,如應(yīng)聘信、尋找趣味相投的交友信、或者寫信給外國(guó)朋友分享自己的興趣愛(ài)好等。
二、常用短語(yǔ)
1. be fond of / be keen on 喜歡
2. be crazy about sth. 對(duì)……著迷
3. be interested in sth. / show great interest in sth. 對(duì)……感興趣
4. in ones spare time 在某人的業(yè)余時(shí)間
5. be fed up with sth. / be tired of sth. 厭倦某事
6. enrich ones life 豐富某人的生活
7. broaden ones horizons 拓展某人的視野
8. prefer doing A to doing B 比起做B更喜歡做A
9. have a lot in common 有很多的共同點(diǎn)
10. develop an interest in培養(yǎng)在……方面的興趣
11. collect stamps / coins 收集郵票/硬幣
12. be of great importance / benefit 很重要/很有益
13. go to concert 去音樂(lè)會(huì)
14. benefit a lot from sth. 從某事中獲益很多
15. devote oneself to sth. 致力于某事
三、套用句式
1. I am so interested in this job that I am writing to apply for it. 我對(duì)這份工作非常感興趣,所以我寫信給你申請(qǐng)這個(gè)職位。
2. In my spare time,reading is my favorite hobby,because books are just like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life. 閱讀是我閑暇時(shí)最喜歡的愛(ài)好,因?yàn)闀?shū)就像我生活中聰明的老師和好朋友。
3. I am extremely fond of travelling because not only can it broaden my horizons and enrich my life,but also it helps me make more friends. 我很喜歡旅游,因?yàn)樗粌H可以拓展我的視野,豐富我的生活而且可以讓我結(jié)交更多的朋友。
4. I am so crazy about English that I often devote myself to practicing my spoken English in my spare time. 我對(duì)英語(yǔ)如此狂熱以至于我經(jīng)常在閑暇時(shí)間致力于訓(xùn)練我的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)。
5. As we know,good hobbies and interests are of great importance in our life,from which we can benefit a lot. 眾所周知,好的愛(ài)好和興趣在我們生活中起著重要的作用,從中我們可以獲益很多。
四、習(xí)作修改(做短文改錯(cuò),背經(jīng)典范文)
Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading so books are like wise teachers as well good friends in my life. As we know,books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great deal of from reading.
There is a variety of books for us to choose from,like history books,science books,literary books and so on. But what interests me most is to read literary books,especial those wrote by famous writers. For one thing,they helped to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another,they can not only enrich my life but also provide me for great funs. Isnt it the pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?
五、課堂練習(xí)
假設(shè)你是李華,你最喜歡的興趣愛(ài)好是運(yùn)動(dòng),你有一位英國(guó)筆友叫Tom,請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信分享你的課余愛(ài)好,并詢問(wèn)他在課余時(shí)間的興趣愛(ài)好。主要內(nèi)容包括:
1. 你的興趣愛(ài)好(運(yùn)動(dòng))以及原因。
2. 詢問(wèn)對(duì)方的興趣愛(ài)好。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右。
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
3. 開(kāi)頭、結(jié)語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
Dear Tom,
I have received your letter asking me something about my favorite hobby in my spare time.
…
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
[寫作指導(dǎo)]
1. 審題謀篇。
(1)確定文體:該篇要求寫_________。
(2)確定主體時(shí)態(tài):主要以____________時(shí)態(tài)為主。
(3)確定主體人稱:多采用___________ 人稱。
(4)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①_______________②_____________ ③________________。
2. 重點(diǎn)句式翻譯練習(xí)。
(1)我很喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng),我花了大部分閑暇時(shí)間在這方面,從中我獲益很多。(用so...that 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句)_________________________________________________
(2)當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)候,我會(huì)忘記困擾我的每件事情。(用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做后置定語(yǔ))
(3)經(jīng)常運(yùn)動(dòng)不僅可以幫助放松我自己,而且有利于我的身心健康。(用not only... but also 引導(dǎo)的句子)
(4)通過(guò)運(yùn)動(dòng),我有機(jī)會(huì)學(xué)會(huì)怎樣跟別人相處。(用強(qiáng)調(diào)句)
3. 連句成篇。
六、課外作業(yè)
假設(shè)你是李華,最近你從報(bào)紙上得知本地一家旅行社招聘一名兼職導(dǎo)游,要求能用英語(yǔ)溝通。你對(duì)這份工作很感興趣,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一封應(yīng)聘信。內(nèi)容主要包括:
1. 自我介紹(包括年齡、性別等)。
2. 你為什么對(duì)這份工作感興趣。
3. 希望獲準(zhǔn)。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右。
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
3. 開(kāi)頭、結(jié)語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
Dear Sir,
…
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
參考答案與范文
四、習(xí)作修改
作者主要講述了閱讀是自己最喜歡的愛(ài)好以及閱讀的好處。
1. so →because 根據(jù)句子的邏輯關(guān)系,此處表示原因。
2. 在as well 后加as 因as well as 固定搭配,表示“也;又,和”。
3. 去掉of 因此處是指從閱讀中獲得很多,介詞of 是多余的。
4. is→are 此處主語(yǔ)是a variety of books,要用are。
5. especial→especially 此處做狀語(yǔ),應(yīng)該用副詞形式。
6. wrote→witten 此處表示“被寫”,應(yīng)該用過(guò)去分詞做后置定語(yǔ)。
7. helped→help 與and 后面的broaden 時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該一致,通過(guò)全文可知,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
8. for→with 因provide ... sb. with sth.屬于固定搭配。
9. funs →fun 因fun是不可數(shù)名詞。
10. the→a 此處表示“一種快樂(lè)”,所以用冠詞a。
五、課堂練習(xí)
1. 審題謀篇。
(1)確定文體:該篇要求寫與朋友分享興趣愛(ài)好的信件。
(2)確定主體時(shí)態(tài):主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)為主。
(3)確定主體人稱:多采用第一人稱。
(4)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①寫信目的:分享興趣愛(ài)好 ②具體描述你最喜歡的興趣愛(ài)好以及原因 ③結(jié)束語(yǔ):希望對(duì)方分享他的興趣愛(ài)好。
2. 重點(diǎn)句式翻譯練習(xí)。
(1)I am so fond of exercising that I spend most of my spare time on it,from which I can benefit a lot.
(2)When taking sports,I may forget everything troubling me a lot.
(3)Taking sports regularly not only helps me relax myself but also is good for my physical and mental health.
(4)It is by doing exercise that I have more chances to learn how to cooperate with others.
3. 連句成篇
Dear Tom,
I have received your letter asking me something about my favorite hobby in my spare time. Now I am writing to share it with you.
Taking sports is my favorite hobby. I am so fond of exercising that I spend most of my spare time on it,from which I can benefit a lot. Fist of all,when taking sports,I may forget everything troubling me a lot. Whats more,taking sports regularly not only helps me relax myself but also is good for my physical and mental health. Last but not least,it is by doing exercise that I have more chances to learn how to cooperate with others. Isnt it a great pleasure to take sports?
What is your favorite hobby? I am longing for your sharing with me.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
六、課外作業(yè)
Dear Sir,
Im Li Hua,an 18-year-old boy from our city. I am delighted to learn that you need a part-time tour guide who can speak English fluently. So I am writing to apply for it.
I am fairly interested in this job. For one thing, I am expert at speaking English. I am so crazy about English that I often devote myself to practicing my spoken English in my spare time. Therefore, I have the confidence that I can communicate well with foreigners in English. For another, not only can I broaden my horizons, but also I have more chances to make more friends if I can get the job.
I sincerely hope that I can be accepted as a member of your company.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
(作者單位:廣東河源市東源縣附城中學(xué))
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