楊琴
一、相關短語
1. suffer from illnesses患病
2. take in=absorb 吸收
3. lack(n.)of /lack(vt.)nutrition 缺乏營養
4. result from /result in/bring about導致
5. turn to /ask a doctor for help看醫生
6. see a doctor 看醫生
7. take medicine 吃藥
8. be in hospital 住院
9. keep the balance of nutrition保持營養平衡
10. live/lead a healthy life 過著健康的生活
11. give your body a complete workout 完全放松自己
12. be rich in /full of /filled with vitamins 富含維生素
13. regular exercise有規律的鍛煉
14. perform various types of exercise 做各種各樣的鍛煉
15. attach the importance to ... 重視……
16. at the risk of... 有……的危險
17. be beneficial to /do good to 有利于……
18. do harm to /be harmful to 有害于……
19. prevent sb. from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事
20. keep an optimistic attitude towards life保持樂觀的生活態度
21. decrease the possibility of... 降低/減少……的可能性
二、必備句型
1. When it comes to health, what most people think of first is healthy body.提到健康,大部分的人首先想到的是身體健康。
2. Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.時至今日,對污垢的態度仍然有很大的差距。
3. Its necessary for us to keep healthy both physically and mentally.對于我們來說保持身心健康是必要的。
4. Its my advice that parents should attach the importance to childrens eating habit.我建議, 父母應該重視孩子們的飲食習慣。
5. I think it important /vital to form a good eating habit.我認為形成好的飲食習慣是很重要的。
6. There is no doubt that health is more important than wealth.毫無疑問,健康比財富更重要。
三、典型例題
例題一:基礎寫作
明天你班將舉行關于“飲食習慣對健康的影響”的主題班會上。
[寫作內容]
請寫一篇英語短文準備明天發言,內容包括:
好的飲食習慣:有益于健康,能減少患疾病的可能性
均衡飲食:提供人們所需的不同維生素,吸收各種各樣的營養,增強抵抗力
規律飲食:防止人們患胃病的危險,有助于消化
挑 食:導致某種維生素的缺乏,有害人們健康
無規律飲食:導致營養失調
[過程指導]
第一步,認真審題。
1. 審文體:本文是________文。
2. 審時態:以_______________為主。
3. 審人稱:以第______人稱為主。
4. 審要點:認真看看寫作內容中的信息,以便分組規劃。
第二步,信息分組。
根據各信息點之間的邏輯順序等將信息點分為5組,以便用5個句子來表達。(在題中用筆圈出即可)
第三步,信息表達。
以上每組信息點用一個英語句子來表達,必要時添加恰當的主語等成分,使句子結構完整。
第四步,連句成篇。
將以上5個句子合并成一篇連貫的短文,必要時添加適當的過渡銜接詞。
第五步,檢查核對。
第六步,規范謄寫。
例題二:讀寫任務
閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
The problem of food safety has been becoming worse and worse nowadays.
Last month, one of my classmates came back from supermarket with a large bag of food. Because of having found a new style of tinned food in the food store, she was very glad. Several other roommates were invited to enjoy it. Unfortunately, after finishing the food, all of my three friends felt sick had stomachaches, their faces having become paler and paler. Due to sensitivity to that kind of tinned food, I escaped that suffer. At that time, my mind went blank. I dialed the emergency number with my trembling hand, therefore they were quickly sent to hospital. The doctor said they were lucky to be out of danger because they did not eat too much of that rotten fish and were hospitalized on time.
This is the matter that happened around me which made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem.
[寫作內容]
1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容;
2. 以約120個詞就“食品安全”談談你的想法,內容包括:
(1)食品安全的重要性;
(2)用你或你朋友的經歷說明食品安全的危害性;
(3)就如何保證食品安全提出建議。
[過程指導]
寫概要
1. 分析文體類別:閱讀材料為議論文,作者用一個例子說明了食品安全的危害,最后是結論。
2. 找出關鍵詞句:寫概要前,應在文中找出并標明以下關鍵句或關鍵詞:
論點: (第一段)
論據: (第二段)
結論: (第三段)
3. 組合關鍵詞句:
談看法
要點⑴:首先寫出主題句:食品安全在生活中非常重要。然后說說重要性體現在哪些方面。
要點⑵:首先寫出主題句:作者的經歷讓自己想起類似的一次經歷。然后舉例什么人什么時候因為食品安全導致什么樣的結果。
要點⑶:首先寫出主題句:保證食品安全是必須的,重要的。然后再提出具體的建議。
根據以上提示,完成自己的寫作:
四、摸擬演練
練習一:基礎寫作
明天的英語課輪到你進行課前英語小演講。
[寫作內容]
請以“健康早餐”為主題寫一份演講稿,內容包括:
現象:(1)有些同學不吃早餐;
(2)有些同學吃早餐,但營養不均衡。
后果:(1)嚴重影響身體健康;
(2)影響學習效率。
建議:(1)早起,吃營養均衡的早餐。
(2)營養均衡的早餐包括:
含有碳水化合物的谷類,以提供每天所需的能量;
雞蛋、牛奶等提供蛋白質;
蔬菜、水果等幫助消化。
參考詞匯:谷類grain, 碳水化合物 carbohydrates,
蛋白質 protein, 消化 digestion
Im very much honored to give you a speech on healthy breakfast. ...
練習二:讀寫任務
閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Taiwan on Tuesday fined a leading supplier more than $1.6 million for selling hundreds of tons of “gutter oil(地溝油)” and setting off a food safety scare that spread from the island to Hong Kong and Macau.
Chang Guann Company, the cooking oil company involved in the scandal(丑聞), got the huge fine as well as an order from the authority to pull all of its oil products from store shelves, even product that had passed food safety tests. The boss of the company apologized to the general public by kneeling down twice, which didnt stop the scare from getting worse.
The scandal has damaged the reputation of more than 1,000 companies and severely damaged the image of Taiwanese food overseas. Hundreds of tons of mooncakes, pineapple cakes, bread, instant noodles and Chinese steamed buns and dumplings have been removed from shelves. Lots of restaurants have apologized to customers for having unknowingly used the gutter oil. No one is able to estimate how big the losses will be.
[寫作內容]
1. 以約30詞概括上文的主要內容。
2. 以約120詞對食品安全問題進行議論,內容包括:
(1)你如何看待這起地溝油事件;
(2)食品安全問題的嚴重及形成的原因;
(3)如何解決食品安全問題。
(作者單位:開平市第一中學)