陳呂蘭
一、相關(guān)短語
1. travel spot /travel attraction 景點
2. places of interest 名勝
3. be known as 作為……而出名
4. be famous/well known for... 以……著名
5. ...is the home of/...is home to... 是……之鄉(xiāng)/樂土
6. ...enjoys the reputation of... 有……美譽
7. date back to/date from... 追溯到……,遠在……年代
8. have/with a history of... years 有……年的歷史
9. have/with a population of... 有……人口
10. cover/have/with an area of... 占地……面積
11. be made up of/consist of由……組成
12. with green hills and beautiful rivers有蔥綠的山和美麗的河流
13. be covered with/by被……覆蓋
14. be surrounded with/by被……包圍
15. be rich in/be high in/be abundant in... 富產(chǎn)……
16. a place rich/abundant in... 一個富產(chǎn)……的地方
17. account for 30% of the total占總量的30%
18. be located in/on/to; lie in/on/to; be situated in/on/to 位于
19. take a short trip短途旅行
20. go on a hiking trip 去遠足
21. a multicultural country 多元文化的國家
22. traffic accident 交通事故
23. traffic light 交通燈,紅綠燈
24. traffic jam 交通堵塞
25. traffic rules/regulations交通規(guī)則
26. turn left(right) 向左(右)拐
27. speed up 加速
28. slow down 減速
29. convenient transportation 便利的交通
二、必備句型
1. No wonder that it attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign tourists every year. 難怪它每年吸引成千上萬的外國游客。
2. It attracts a good many tourists from every corner of the world and tourism plays an important role/part in its economy.它吸引著來自世界各地的眾多游客,并且旅游業(yè)在其經(jīng)濟方面起重要的作用。
3. It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, and has mild climate. 它自然資源得天獨厚, 有豐富的煤和金礦, 而且氣候溫和。
4. The reason for such a situation is that most citizens hold the view that they dont have too much extra money for tour due to high living expenses and pressures in their lives.這種狀況的原因是大多數(shù)市民覺得物價太高,生活壓力大,沒有太多的錢出游。
5. The traffic accident was caused by/was due to drunk driving. 這起車禍起因于醉酒駕駛。
6. Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.那些違反交通規(guī)則的人應(yīng)該受到懲罰。
7. The accident delayed all the traffic for an hour and caused the damage of $80,000. 這次事故阻礙交通達一個小時,造成8萬美元的經(jīng)濟損失。
8. The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized. 交通安全的重要性無論怎樣強調(diào)都不為過。
9. In conclusion, a good citizen should obey traffic regulations. 總而言之,好公民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。
三、典型例題
例題一:基礎(chǔ)寫作
上周,你市的一家報社對國慶長假期間市民的休閑方式進行了一項調(diào)查。調(diào)查情況如下:
休閑方式比例
長途旅行:30%;短途旅行:30%;在家休息:40%
原因分析
(1)大多數(shù)市民覺得物價太高,生活壓力大,沒有太多錢出游;
(2)一部分市民認為國慶期間游客太多,太擁擠;
(3)一部分市民則認為,可利用國慶放假好好休息一下,以放松自己。
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1. 調(diào)查的時間、對象和主題;
2. 休閑方式的百分比情況;
3. 原因分析。
[過程指導(dǎo)]
第一步,認真審題。
1. 審文體:本文屬于________文。
2.審時態(tài):調(diào)查和調(diào)查結(jié)果用__________時,原因分析用__________時。
3.審人稱:以第_____人稱為主。
第二步,信息分組。
根據(jù)各信息點之間的邏輯順序等將信息點分為5組,以便用5個句子來表達。(在題中用筆圈出即可)
第三步,信息表達。
以上每組信息點用一個英語句子來表達,必要時添加恰當?shù)闹髡Z等成分,使句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整。
第四步,連句成篇。
將以上5個句子合并成一篇連貫的短文,必要時添加適當?shù)倪^渡銜接詞。
第五步,檢查核對。
第六步,規(guī)范謄寫。
例題二:讀寫任務(wù)
閱讀下面的報道,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
GUANGZHOU: This South China city is getting tough with (強硬對待)pedestrians who violate traffic regulations.
Any pedestrian who crosses against a red light or jumps over a road divider will be fined between 20 yuan and 50 yuan. Those not able to afford the fine will be forced to watch a video on traffic safety.
“The city will no longer tolerate pedestrians who break traffic rules. We must drive them to behave better on the roads,” Lu Zhengguang, a publicity director of the Guangzhou Public Security Bureau, said.
Many citizens have welcomed the action, while others are not too happy about the fines.
“People need to develop a habit of obeying traffic rules and the fines will sooner or later prove effective,” Hao Weiling, a citizen, said.
“Im a car driver. I do not like pedestrians who break the rules. It is really very dangerous.” Gu Xiaohua, an office clerk, however, is not in favor of the fines.
“Many traffic signals are not properly set, nor are the road dividers. We waste a lot of time waiting for the traffic lights to turn green.” he said.
“And, when there are so many traffic violations every day, I wonder how long this campaign will be able to last,”he said.
“Education is more important in the long term than fines.”
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1. 以約30個詞概括這篇報道的內(nèi)容;
2. 然后以約120個詞就”行人違反交通規(guī)則”進行議論,內(nèi)容包括:
(1)你是否同意處罰違規(guī)行人;
(2)舉例說明你見過的某次行人違反交通規(guī)則的行為及其后果;
(3)你覺得作為行人應(yīng)該怎樣做。
[過程指導(dǎo)]
寫概要
1. 分析文體類別:閱讀材料是新聞報道,新聞的首段是導(dǎo)語,導(dǎo)語體現(xiàn)消息的重要事實或主要內(nèi)容(強硬對待違章行人),使讀者一目了然,然后具體敘述如何處罰違章行人,接著采訪不同人對此政策的不同看法。
2. 找出關(guān)鍵詞句:
報道事實: (第一段首句)
不同人的不同看法: (第四段)
3. 組合關(guān)鍵詞句:
進行議論
要點(1):首先表明你的觀點:違規(guī)行人應(yīng)當被罰款或懲罰。然后提出理由,證明這一觀點。
要點(2):首先可用“我清楚地記得幾年前我市發(fā)生的導(dǎo)致行人死亡的可怕事件”開頭,然后再具體敘述該事故是什么人在什么地方因何原因發(fā)生的,結(jié)果如何。
要點(3):可直接回答,如:我認為行人應(yīng)該明白交通規(guī)則并嚴格遵守這些規(guī)則,才能保護自己的安全和別人的安全。
根據(jù)以上提示,完成自己的寫作:
四、模擬演練
練習(xí)一:基礎(chǔ)寫作
你參加了學(xué)校的旅游興趣小組,在匯報課上,各小組成員要介紹一個獨具魅力的旅游景點。
[寫作內(nèi)容]
請寫一篇短文介紹你所在的荔灣鎮(zhèn)(The Town of Liwan),內(nèi)容包括:
位置:廣東省東北部的名鎮(zhèn)
面積:2 830.54平方公里
人口:630,478
氣候:終年溫暖、潮濕、夏季多雨
歷史:將近2000年
名勝:建于1 200前的普寧寺,溫泉中外聞名,吸引中外游客
特產(chǎn):西瓜、柿子
經(jīng)濟:旅游業(yè)起重要作用
練習(xí)二:讀寫任務(wù)
閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Years ago it was very difficult to travel from one place to another. The journeys were often long, tiring and dangerous. Today the picture has changed. Science has improved transportation and communication facilities a great deal. Traveling has become safer, more enjoyable and above all, more economical.
Traveling—whether within ones country or abroad—brings many invaluable benefits. People travel for pleasure, business or for education and knowledge. In the world of yesterday most people were only able to read about strange and fascinating places across the mountains and seas. Later, with the coming of the cinema and television, mans curiosity about faraway places with strange sounding names was further stirred up. Today mans curiosity can be satisfied in luxurious comfort. There are first-class ships and airplanes to take him where his dreams lie.
We travel to increase our knowledge of the world in which we live. Knowledge obtained from books alone is not enough. New knowledge of different land and people enriches our mind and soul. Books generally do not give us a very true picture of lands beyond our shores. Some of them are even misleading.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1. 以約30個詞概括短文的要點;
2. 然后以約120個詞就“交通的發(fā)展給我們帶來什么”發(fā)表你的看法,要點包括:
(1)簡述古今交通方式的變化及現(xiàn)代交通給我們帶來的好處;
(2)現(xiàn)代交通給我們帶來的一些負面影響;
(3)你如何評價現(xiàn)代交通。
(作者單位:江門市江海區(qū)外海中學(xué))