紀樂佳
一、相關短語
1. live in harmony with nature 與自然和諧共處
2. be kind to nature 善待大自然
3. the rules and laws of nature自然規律
4. keep ecological balance保持生態平衡
5. maintain biodiversity保持生物多樣性
6. lose the habitats失去棲息地
7. conserve natural habitats保護生存環境
8. endanger the lives of危及……的生命
9. wild animals and plants野生動植物
10. change the situation改變現狀
11. raise peoples awareness of 提高人們……意識
12. protect trees保護樹木
13. set up nature reserves建立自然保護區
14. set up wildlife parks建立野生動植物公園
15. make publicity and collect money宣傳和集資
16. a great number of houses fall down許多房子倒了
17. the whole city may fall into ruins整個城市淪為廢墟
18. with the road blocked馬路斷裂
19. water supply and electricity cut off斷水斷電
20. cause great damage造成極大傷害
21. cause great economic losses造成巨大經濟損失
22. call on people to make donations呼吁人們捐贈
23. the stricken districts災區
24. rescue...from 從……中拯救出來
25. return to normal恢復正常
二、必備句型
1. If wildlife disappeared from the earth, the environment and climate would be badly changed, the ecological balance would be broken and the biodiversity would be lost.如果野生動植物從地球上消失,環境和氣候將會變差,生態平衡會被破壞,生物的多樣性會消失。
2. We believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with wildlife. 我們相信,只要我們馬上行動起來,我們就可以和野生動植物和諧相處。
三、典型例題
例題一:基礎寫作
你是校報小記者,最近進行了一次采訪。
[寫作內容]
請寫一篇采訪報道,內容包括:
采訪時間:上周五
采訪對象:高三級地理老師許老師
采訪主題:人與自然應該如何和諧共處
采訪內容:
(1)人類與自然的關系:大自然是人類的朋友而非敵人
(2)人類應善待大自然,并學會如何與自然和諧共處
老師建議:人與自然和諧共處須做到——
(1)認識和正確運用自然規律
(2)保護環境,保持生態平衡
(3)保護各種動植物,保持生物多樣性
[過程指導]
第一步,認真審題。
1.審文體:本文是_________。
2.審時態:以_________時態為主。
3.審人稱:以第______人稱為主。
4.審要點:認真看看方框內外的信息,以便分組規劃。
第二步,信息分組。
根據各信息點之間的邏輯順序等將信息點分為5組,以便用5個句子來表達。(在題中用筆圈出即可)
第三步,信息表達。
以上每組信息點用一個英語句子來表達,必要時添加恰當的主語等成分,使句子結構完整。
第四步,連句成篇。
將以上5個句子合并成一篇連貫的短文,必要時添加適當的過渡銜接詞。
第五步,檢查核對。
第六步,規范謄寫。
例題二:讀寫任務
閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth. The most famous of these animals are dinosaurs. They lived on the earth tens of millions of years ago, long before humans came into being. There were many different kinds of dinosaurs and a number of them used to live in China. The eggs of twenty-five species have been found in Xixia, County, Nanyang, Henan Province.
Dinosaurs died out suddenly about 65 million years ago. Some scientists think it came after an unexpected incident when a huge rock from space hit the earth and put too much dust into the air. Others think the earth got too hot for the dinosaurs to live on any more. Nobody knows for sure why and how dinosaurs disappeared from the earth in such a short time.
We know many other wild plants, animals, insects and birds have died out more recently. According to a UN report, some 844 animals and plants have disappeared in the last 500 years.
[寫作內容]
1. 以約30個詞概括短文的要點;
2. 然后以l20個詞就“野生動植物瀕臨滅絕”發表看法,要點包括:
(1)分析野生動植物瀕臨滅絕的原因;
(2)你認為野生動植物消失對人類和地球將有何影響;
(3)你認為應采取什么措施來避免野生動植物在地球上消失。
[過程指導]
寫概要
1. 分析文體類別:閱讀材料為現象類說明文,作者首先指出一種現象(生物滅絕),然后轉述科學家提出有關這種現象的可能原因,最后根據最近的報道提出“許多不同種類的生物瀕臨滅絕”的現象。
2. 找出關鍵詞句:寫概要前,應在文中找出并標明以下關鍵句或關鍵詞:
社會現象:____________________________(第一段)
轉述原因:____________________________(第二段)
近來報道:____________________________(第三段)
3. 組合關鍵詞句:
談看法
要點⑴:首先寫出主題句:人類生活越來越好,但野生動植物卻瀕臨滅絕,原因如下。然后具體描述三個原因:首先,人們砍伐樹木,使動物失去棲息地;其次,農民使用過多的殺蟲劑,這危及野生動植物的生命;最后,為了賺錢,有些人捕殺了珍貴的野生動物。
要點⑵:首先寫出主題句和過渡句:動植物是人類的朋友,也是環境的一部分,然而,如果這些野生動植物從地球上消失,會對人類和地球有影響。然后設想如果野生動植物從地球上消失,對人類和地球的影響:環境和氣候會產生變化,生態平衡會被破壞,生物的多樣性會消失。
要點⑶:首先寫出主題句:面對現在這種情況,我們是時候采取措施來改變現狀。作為中學生,我們應該采取的措施。
然后再提出具體的看法:一方面,我們應該幫助人們提高停止捕殺動物的意識;另一方面,我們應該盡力協助建立自然保護區,比如幫忙做宣傳或幫忙集資。
根據以上提示,完成自己的寫作:
四、摸擬演練
練習一:基礎寫作
你是校報小記者,昨天,你所在的班級高三(1)班全體同學,就“自然災害災情的分析和救援的探討”進行了一次討論。
[寫作內容]
請就討論情況為校報寫一篇報道,內容包括:
災害種類:中國有許多類型的自然災害,例如:地震、洪災、和暴風雪等
災 情:(1)房屋倒塌,道路斷裂,供水供電中斷,整個城市成為廢墟
(2)許多人員失蹤、受傷和死亡
災后救援:(1)政府組織救援
(2)志愿者主動幫忙
(3)全國人民捐款,食物、水和藥品被送往災區
結 論:人類應該學會與自然和諧共處、保護環境,才能減少自然災害
The students in Class One Senior Three had a discussion about the condition and rescue of natural disasters yesterday. ...
練習二:讀寫任務
閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Planting Trees Day is an American holiday that encourages the planting and care of trees. It first occurs in America every year on the last Friday in April. On Planting Trees Day, people are to plant trees. Although it isnt a public holiday, it is no longer widely observed in America.
Similar holidays exist worldwide, in China, Planting Trees Day is on March 12. This special day began in 1979. On that day, people can plant many trees. And if we plant trees more, we must also take care of the trees by watering them until they grow up to be strong. In different countries, Planting Trees Days are on different days. Like in India, Planting Trees Day is on July 1.
Why do people plant trees? Because they want to protect the environment. There are many people who want to earn money from only cutting down trees. Therefore, more and more trees are cut by them. However, other kind people want to protect the environment and make the air clean, so they plant trees as many as they can. All these actions show that people now pay more attention to the environment. If we want to make it better, we must stop cutting down trees and plant more trees not only on Planting Trees Day.
[寫作內容]
1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容;
2. 然后以約l20個詞就“植樹的重要性”發表看法,要點包括:
(1)你讀完這篇文章后的感受;
(2)你對植樹的看法;
(3)假如將來你成了一名老師,你會怎么教導學生停止砍伐,愛護樹木?
(作者單位:汕頭市金平區金砂中學)