話題21. 熱點(diǎn)話題

黃玉紅

一、相關(guān)短語

1. use the solar energy 使用太陽能

2. it is convenient for sb. to do sth. 方便某人做某事

3. develop technology 發(fā)展技術(shù)

4. use clean energy 使用清潔能源

5. pollute the environment 污染環(huán)境

6. family plan 計(jì)劃生育

7. poat a grent threat to 對(duì)……造成一大威脅

8. with living conditions improved 隨著生活條件的改善

9. economic development and social security 經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展和社會(huì)安全

10. the demand of the society 社會(huì)需求

11. meet the needs of the people滿足人類的需要

12. adopt effectives measures 采取有效措施

13. fake food 偽劣食品

14. have stomachache 胃/肚子痛

15. escape from death脫離生命危險(xiǎn)

16. illegal businessman 不法商家

17. make profits 牟利

18. food hygiene 食品衛(wèi)生

19. female university student 女大學(xué)生

20. lack of safety awareness缺乏安全意識(shí)

21. potential risks 安全隱患

22. illegal vehicles 黑車

二、必備句型

1. Both of them have advantages and disadvantages. 兩者都有優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。

2. I suggest that we （should） develop technologies to increase the power for solar cars and use clean energy for common cars. 我建議我們應(yīng)該發(fā)展技術(shù)去增加太陽能汽車能量并且應(yīng)該讓普通汽車使用清潔能源。

3. Nowadays， overpopulation has become a problem we have to face. 如今，人口過剩已成為我們不得不面對(duì)的問題了。

4. Only by adopting effective measures， can human society develop steadily and have a bright future.只有通過采取有效的措施，人類社會(huì)才能穩(wěn)步發(fā)展和有一個(gè)燦爛的未來。

5. Not only did he immediately call the ambulance， but also carried them quickly to hospital. 他不但馬上叫來了救護(hù)車，而且快速地送他們?nèi)メt(yī)院。

6. It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve these illegal vehicles. 該是有關(guān)當(dāng)局采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧﹣斫鉀Q黑車的時(shí)候了。

7. Its of great importance for girl students to learn how to protect themselves. 女生學(xué)會(huì)如何保護(hù)自己很重要。

三、典型例題

例題一：基礎(chǔ)寫作

假設(shè)你是學(xué)校太陽能汽車研究小組成員，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文，對(duì)比介紹太陽能汽車和普通汽車。主要信息如下：

[過程指導(dǎo)]

第一步，認(rèn)真審題。

1. 審文體：說明文。

2. 審時(shí)態(tài)：以_______________為主。

3. 審人稱：以第______人稱為主。

4. 審要點(diǎn)：認(rèn)真看看方框內(nèi)外的信息，以便分組規(guī)劃。

第二步，信息分組。

根據(jù)各信息點(diǎn)之間的邏輯順序等將信息點(diǎn)分為5組，以便用5個(gè)句子來表達(dá)。（在題中用筆圈出即可）

第三步，信息表達(dá)。

以上每組信息點(diǎn)用一個(gè)英語句子來表達(dá)，必要時(shí)添加恰當(dāng)?shù)闹髡Z等成分，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整。

第四步，連句成篇。

將以上5個(gè)句子合并成一篇連貫的短文，必要時(shí)添加適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡銜接詞。

第五步，檢查核對(duì)。

第六步，規(guī)范謄寫。

例題二：讀寫任務(wù)

閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

The large number of our population has become one of the most serious problems of our society. According to a recent survey of the national bureau of statistics， there are more than 1.3 billion people in our country， which account for about 1/5 of all the people in the world.

Overpopulation（人口過剩） has brought about a series of negative effects to our economic development and social security. In the first place， too many people impose a heavy burden on our environment. As a result， we suffer from a shortage of fresh water and natural resources. in the second place， as the supply of labor greatly exceeds the demand of the society， many people become unemployed. This is a source of social unrest. Last but not least， we have to manufacture all kinds of products to meet the needs of the people， which causes environment pollution to our lakes and land.

Serious though the problem seems， we have to take some measures to tackle it. on the one hand， the government should carry out more strictly the policy of family planning， thus reducing the total number of population. on the other hand， all the people should realize the harms of overpopulation.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 以約120個(gè)詞就“如何控制人口”發(fā)表看法，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）人口快速增長的原因；

（2）人口過剩的危害性；

（3）如何控制人口。

[過程指導(dǎo)]

寫概要

1. 分析文體類別：閱讀材料為議論文，作者首先指出人口的數(shù)量已經(jīng)成為世界上最嚴(yán)重的問題之一，然后論述人口過剩給經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展和社會(huì)安全帶來的消極影響，最后再談如何采取措施控制人口。

2. 找出關(guān)鍵詞句：寫概要前，應(yīng)在文中找出并標(biāo)明以下關(guān)鍵句或關(guān)鍵詞：

提出問題：____________________________（第一段）

分析問題：____________________________（第二段）

解決問題：____________________________（第三段）

3. 組合關(guān)鍵詞句：

談看法

要點(diǎn)⑴：首先寫出主題句：人口快速增長的事實(shí)。然后具體分析為什么人口會(huì)增長得如此之快：效率是成功的秘訣，可以做更多事，提高工作效率。

要點(diǎn)⑵：首先寫出主題句：列舉他人的經(jīng)歷。然后設(shè)想他人如何合理利用時(shí)間取得成功：在期末考試來臨時(shí)參加一個(gè)英語口語比賽，通過制定好詳細(xì)的計(jì)劃，合理安排好時(shí)間，早上練習(xí)口語，晚上復(fù)習(xí)功課，最后取得了意想不到的成功。

要點(diǎn)⑶：首先寫出主題句：我會(huì)制定好計(jì)劃合理利用時(shí)間進(jìn)行高考備考。然后再進(jìn)一步說明：勞逸結(jié)合。

根據(jù)以上提示，完成自己的寫作：

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四、摸擬演練

練習(xí)一：基礎(chǔ)寫作

[寫作內(nèi)容]

假如你是李華，請(qǐng)就食品衛(wèi)生問題，給某報(bào)社英文欄目編輯寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：

主要事由：你的鄰居因食用從市場買回來的偽劣食品中毒

具體癥狀：肚子痛；嘔吐；臉色蒼白

幫助經(jīng)過；（1）鄰居經(jīng)過；

（2）打電話叫救護(hù)車；

（3）送他們?nèi)メt(yī)院；

（3）治療幾小時(shí)，脫離生命危險(xiǎn)。

呼吁各界：（1）重視食品衛(wèi)生與安全；

（2）打擊牟取暴利的不法商販。

參考詞匯：偽劣食品 fake food 衛(wèi)生 hygiene

Dear editor，

Im writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident.

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I do hope the whole society shall begin taking actions to protect peoples life safety..

Yours，

Li Hua

練習(xí)二：讀寫任務(wù)

閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

A college student was abducted（誘拐） and held as a sex slave for four days following two cases in which other female students were killed， police said over the weekend.

A 22-year-old woman surnamed Jin was abducted on Aug 21 and held as a sex slave for four days in Ji'nan， Shandong province. She was rescued on Aug 25. Jin had left Qingdao in Shandong province by rail for her home in Tai'an， also in Shandong. While changing trains， she hired an illegal motorcycle and was abducted by the motorcycle driver， surnamed Dai. The 52-year-old did not take her to the train station， but raped（強(qiáng)暴） her in a motorized tricycle and locked her up in his rented room. He beat and raped her many times until she was rescued， officers said.

In the past two weeks， two other female college students have been killed while making trips.

Police said Chongqing student Gao Yu， who missed a licensed taxi and took an illegal taxi， was killed by the driver of the illegal taxi during a dispute over the fare on Aug 19.

Gao Qiuxi， a student from Jiangsu province， was reported missing on Aug 12， on her way home from school. Nanjing police said on Thursday that Gao had been robbed and killed on Aug 12.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 以約120個(gè)詞就“女大學(xué)生的安全問題”發(fā)表看法，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）談?wù)勀愕淖x后感；

（2）女大學(xué)生容易受傷的原因；

（3）女生應(yīng)如何保護(hù)自己。

（作者單位：汕尾市城區(qū)新城中學(xué)）