李麗
一、相關短語
1. the third biggest city第三大城市
2. part of ... ……的一部分
3. break away from脫離,擺脫
4. be famous/well-known as作為……而著名
5. approximately/about大約
6. official language官方語言
7. serve as擔任,充當
8. with the development of隨著……發展
9. mild climate氣候溫和
10. as well (as)和,也
11. on the top of在……頂端
12. at the foot of在……腳下
13. try ones utmost to do sth. 盡某人最大的努力做某事
14. a harmonious society一個和諧的社會
15. be supposed to do 應該做
二、必備句型
1. Located/Situated/ Lying in the European Continent, the United Kingdom consists of four countries.聯合王國位于歐洲大陸,由四個國家組成。
2. Covering /With an area of approximately 7434 square kilometers, Guangzhou is famous as Flower City.廣州占地面積約7434平凡公里,以“花城”著稱。
3. There are many beautiful mountains and rivers as well as rich natural resources in China.中國有很多美麗的山川河流以及豐富的自然資源。
4. Sydney, the largest city in Australia, has many places of interest, among which the Opera House is well-known all over the world.悉尼是澳大利亞最大城市。有許多名勝,其中悉尼歌劇院聞名于世。
5. Hu Guangyan, surrounded by trees, is one of the tourists attractions with beautiful scenery.湖光巖是一個四周有樹木環繞的旅游景點之一。
6. Great changes have taken place in China in the past 20 years.中國近20年來發生了翻天覆地的變化。
三、典型例題
例題一:基礎寫作
假設你是某報社記者,需簡要報道中國政府進行西部大開發(China Western Development)的有關情況。
[寫作內容]
范圍:6個省,5個自治區(autonomous regions),1個直 轄市(municipality)
面積:685萬平方公里
人口:3.67億
交通建設:修建多條公路、鐵路
環境保護:退耕還林;防止污染
資源利用:開發利用其豐富的天然資源
人才引進:廣納各類專家、技術人員
[過程指導]
第一步,認真審題。
1. 審文體:介紹________,是說明文。
2. 審時態:以____________時為主。
3. 審人稱:以第____人稱為主。
4. 審要點:認真看看方框內外的信息,以便分組規劃。
第一步,認真審題。
1. 審文體:提供建議,是________文。
2. 審時態:以_______________為主。
3. 審人稱:以第______人稱為主。
4. 審要點:認真看看所提供的建議,以便分組規劃。
第二步,信息分組。
根據各信息點之間的邏輯順序等將信息點分為5組,以便用5個句子來表達。(在題中用筆圈出即可)
第三步,信息表達。
以上每組信息點用一個英語句子來表達,必要時添加恰當的主語等成分,使句子結構完整。
第四步,連句成篇。
將以上5個句子合并成一篇連貫的短文,必要時添加適當的過渡銜接詞。
第五步,檢查核對。
第六步,規范謄寫。
例題二:讀寫任務
閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Nelson Mandela ,an anti-apartheid(反種族隔離) activist and the first black president of South Africa ,was a famous freedom fighter who devoted his whole life to fighting for rights for black people in South Africa. By doing this he set an example for the rest of the world.His message was that black people should not be separated but should be treated in the same way as other people.
From 1964 to 1990, Mandela was imprisoned for 27 years for opposing South Africas white minority government and its policy of racial separation, known as racial-apartheid(種族隔離). Following his release from prison on 11 February 1990, Mandela helped lead the transition towards multi-racial democracy in South Africa.
Since the end of apartheid, many have frequently praised Mandela, including his former opponents. Mandela has received the Nobel Prize for Peace in 1993. Mandela was elected the countrys president in 1994, who held office for five years. Mandelas autobiography, Long Walk to Freedom, was published in 1994, and he had already changed the whole of society in South Africa.
[寫作內容]
1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容;
2. 以約120個詞發表你的感想和看法,內容包括:
(1)你如何評價Nelson Mandela;
(2)請舉出一個為人民爭取自由而犧牲的偉人;
(3)你覺得自由是否值得我們去追求。
[過程指導]
寫概要
1. 分析文體類別:閱讀材料為記敘文,寫概要主要是要抓住某人做了某事,結果如何。
2. 找出關鍵詞句:寫概要前,應在文中找出:
某人:__________________________
做了何事:__________________________
結果如何:__________________________
3. 組合關鍵詞句:
談看法
要點⑴:首先寫出主題句:我認為曼德拉是一位值得我們尊敬的偉人,因為他為自由之戰奉獻了他的一生精力。然后具體:他不僅給南非的黑人帶來了權力和自由,而且讓整個世界都擁有了自由和平等的觀念。
要點⑵:首先寫出主題句:很多偉人為了爭取人民的自由而奮斗一生,甚至有一些人獻出了寶貴的生命。然后舉例說明孫中山一生都致力于為舊中國的人們大眾爭取權利和自由。
要點⑶:首先寫出主題句:就我而言,自由對于全世界的人們來說都很重要。然后再提出具體的看法:沒有自由,生命將毫無意義。自由值得人們追逐。
根據以上提示,完成自己的寫作:
四、摸擬演練
練習一:基礎寫作
假如你是周凱,住在豐縣,你的英國筆友Bob來信談到他所居住的城市,并希望了解你家鄉豐縣的情況。
[寫作內容]
請你用英語寫一封回信,內容包括:
面積:2200多平方公里
人口:約93萬
歷史:至今有500多年的歷史
地理:位于長江邊,風景優美,適合居住
旅游:風景秀麗,旅游資源豐富
成就:近十年來,經濟發展迅速;新建了很多設施如學
校、醫院、住房和超市
Dear Bob,
Its very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Fengxian County.
…
Sincerely Yours,
Zhou Kai
練習二:讀寫任務
閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
In April 1956, the Tibet Autonomous Region was set up in accordance with the Central Governments decision. The Tibet Autonomous Region was formally founded in 1965, with Ngapoi Ngawang Jigme as the first chairman of the Region.
The regional autonomy system has further guaranteed the political rights of the Tibetan people, which is in marked contrast to the situation in old Tibet. The Tibetan people, like the people of all other ethnic groups throughout the country, have become the masters of their state and society, and won the political rights enjoyed by all citizens as stipulated in the Chinese Constitution and law. They elect their own deputies and exercise the power to administer state and local affairs through the people's congresses elected by them.
Since the beginning of the 1990s educational, cultural and health work in Tibet has been further improved, and this has further promoted the peoples right to education, culture and health protection. People of all ethnic groups in Tibet are constructing the new Tibet with one heart and one mind. All people, Chinese and foreign, has realized the fact that Tibet is part of China.
[寫作內容]
1. 以約30個詞概括短文的要點;
2. 以約120個詞就“西藏問題”發表看法,要點包括:
(1)西藏自古以來就是中國的領土;
(2)西藏在經濟、文化等方面的發展狀況;
(3)你認為應該怎樣去維護國家的和平統一以及為國家作貢獻。
(作者單位:徐聞縣第一中學)