初中英語優(yōu)秀作文兩篇

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寫作任務1：現(xiàn)如今許多學生認為青少年只要好好學習就行，做不做家務無所謂，你同意這種觀點么？為什么？請以 Must We Do Chores？為題寫一篇80字左右的作文，談談你的看法。

Must We Do Chores？

Many teenagers think that doing chores is a waste of their time.But I don't think so. Teenagers these days depend on their parents too much.I think we should help our parents with housework. Here are my reasons：

First， doing chores can help to develop children's independence. Next， it also helps them to understand the idea of fairness. At last， it is not enough for teenagers to just get good grades at school. And anyway， study is very important， but it's not everything. As a saying goes，“No pains， no gains.”We must learn how to look after ourselves.

In a word， the earlier kids learn to be independent， the better it is for our future.Just do it！

教師點評：“青少年是否應該幫忙做家務”是初中階段英語作文中比較熱門的話題之一。本文采用中考最流行的三段式結構。第一段開宗明義，引出主題，并擺出自己的觀點“青少年應該做家務”。第二段分四點來論證自己的觀點。第三段總結全文并有一定的升華和號召。除了結構清晰，要點明確外，本文在邏輯詞的運用上也非常豐富準確，如First，next，at last，and anyway，in a word等。此外，本文的行文流暢，語法正確，能將平時所學的句型、詞組靈活應用于作文之中，并有一定的諺語積累，足以見得該生扎實的語言功底。

寫作任務2：隨著人類文明的發(fā)展，人類活動范圍的越來越大，取而代之的是野生動物們的生存環(huán)境日益惡劣。請以Saving the Animals為題寫一篇80字左右的作文，談談你的看法。作文中請包含以下內容：1.野生動物生存危機的原因。2我們應該如何保護他們。

Saving the Animals

As we all know animals are our best friends. But nowadays， their numbers are getting smaller and smaller. Humans always cut down many trees and kill the animals，so their living places become smaller and smaller. And anyway， they don't have enough food to eat. As a result， their living environment becomes worse and worse.Some animals are even endangered in the world.So we must treat them well

.How can we protect them？We can go to school to teach children about the importance of saving the animals. People must stop killing them and cutting down the forests.We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more animals than now. As a saying goes，“Doing is better than saying.” Just do it！

教師點評：“動物及環(huán)境保護”是全世界共同關注的話題，也是初中階段英語作文中比較熱門的話題之一。本篇作文規(guī)定了寫作內容，第一段需要學生大概闡述野生動物出現(xiàn)危機的原因，第二段需要寫我們應該怎樣做。本文能緊扣寫作要點，恰當使用邏輯詞語，各要點間連貫流暢，行文通順，短語地道，句式豐富，最后一句的諺語引入也恰到好處，發(fā)揮了一定的號召鼓舞作用。