李華軍
一、文體概述
發言稿主要用來交流思想、表達感情、發表看法;也可以用來介紹自己的學習情況和經驗等。寫發言稿時,要注意三點:1. 觀點要鮮明。2. 條理清楚。3. 語言簡潔明快。寫作分“三步走”:自我介紹并表明發言稿的主題→發言稿的具體內容→進行總結并提出期望。
二、必備短語
1. be qualified for 勝任
2. study efficiently高效地學習
3. get actively involved in class上課積極參與
4. effective learning methods有效的學習方法
5. enjoy a colorful life享受豐富多彩的生活
6. take responsibility to do sth.負責做某事
7. get on/along well with sb.與某人友好相處
8. on behalf of our school代表我們學校
9. develop/form/acquire a good habit of..養成……的好習慣
10. express ones warm welcome to sb.向某人表示熱烈歡迎
三、套用句式
1. It is my great honor to have a chance to speak here. 能有機會在這里發言是我極大的榮幸。
2. Welcome to the English speech competition/lecture. 歡迎來到這次英語演講比賽/講座。
3. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. 用真誠和忠誠我們創造一個和諧的環境。
4. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful life here. 我相信在這你將用努力會享受豐富多彩的生活。
5. I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! 我希望我上面所講的對你們有幫助!
四、習作修改 下列習作中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
Good afternoon, everyone.
Welcome to our school! High school students are facing with a choice between arts or science. It was not easy choice for me to make. After carefully consideration, though, I decided on science as my main subject of study. The reasons are as follow.
First, science graduates are in great demand than arts ones in China. Second, the science major can helpes me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe in I will have a brighter future as a science student. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, which influence on me has a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reasons that I finally made your choice.
Thanks!
五、課堂練習
假定你是星光中學的高中畢業生李華,母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“What to learn in senior high school?”的英語沙龍活動,特邀請你結合自身經歷談談自己的體會。請根據以下提示準備一份英語發言稿。
1. 學會學習:方法,習慣等;
2. 學會做人:真誠,友善;
3. 學會其他:考生自擬。
注意:1. 詞數100左右。
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
3. 開頭語和結尾已為你寫好。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you
六、課外作業
假設你是某大學的學生李華,你校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席,負責規劃、組織俱樂部的相關活動,你欲參選,請按以下提示,寫一篇競選演講稿。
1. 個人的優勢介紹(如性格、特長等);
2. 組織校內的活動的設想(如舉辦講座、英語晚會等);
3. 組織校際交流活動的設想(如舉辦辯論賽、演講比賽等);
4. 表達競選的愿望。
注意:1. 詞數100左右。
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
3. 開頭語已為你寫好。
參考詞匯:副主席vice president 競選run for
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua,
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Thank you!
參考答案與范文
習作修改
本演講稿是關于高中生對文、理科的選擇。作者首先表明選擇理科,然后闡述了選擇理科的理由。
1. facing→faced 因be faced with固定搭配,意為“遇到,面臨”。
2. or→and 因between A and B為固定搭配,意為“在A與B之間”。
3. 在easy前加an 因choice是單數可數名詞,表示“一個”選擇,要用不定冠詞。另外,make a choice (作出選擇)可看作一個固定短語。
4. carefully→careful 修飾名詞,應用形容詞。
5. follow→follows 因as follows是習語,不管句子的主語是單數或復數。
6. great→greater 后面的than提示我們此處應用形容詞的比較級。
7. helps→help 情態動詞后用動詞原形。
8. 把believe后的in去掉 因此處的believe表示“相信,認為”,后接賓語從句,不用in,故刪除。
9. which→whose 先行詞my physics teacher與從句中influence有所屬關系,表示“我物理老師(對我)的影響”,用關系代詞whose 引導定語從句。
10. your→my 根據主語I可知,此處是我最終做出了“我的”決定。
課堂練習
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
Thank you!
課外作業
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. Im outgoing and get on well with my classmates and teachers. I am skilled at organizing all kinds of activities. Id like to run for the vice president of the English club in our school. I know as the vice president, I must do the following things for the club: I will try to make it known to every student and more students involved in the activities organized by the club. Whats more, to improve our English and get more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities at school like lectures and English parties and inter-school ones such as English debate competitions and speech contests. I hope all of you will vote for me.
Thank you!
責任編輯 蔣小青