My Favourite Teacher

江西省萍鄉(xiāng)市蘆溪縣蘆溪鎮(zhèn)第二中心學校 徐 博 批閱：Lois Hill

指導老師：魏紫林 整理：李 娟

I have an English teacher. Her name is Wei Zilin.

She is short and thin. She has long hair, big eyes, a small nose and cherry lips.

She is young. She is kind, but sometimes strict. She is hard-working. She is very helpful. She is funny, too. Her English class is very interesting. I like my English teacher very much.

評語

This is a well-structured composition. I think your English teacher will be happy to see your description of her.

文章結(jié)構完整。我想你的英語老師看到你對她的描述一定很高興。