崔益俊
摘要:以前的小學生練書法,大都以紅模字為底本。稍有長進就用字帖練習。很多人認為,這不是非常了不起的方法,但許多人之所以能寫出雅致勁爽的好字,甚至成為一代書法大家,卻不能不說這是兒時這種練字笨辦法的功勞。
關鍵詞:好詞好句;模仿;內化;網絡;大數據
英語作文也需要模子。但是教材中的作文教學安排卻難以讓人滿意。鄭樹棠先生指出:英語教材中的微技巧部分,如寫作技巧,教材編寫得不盡科學,有許多值得商榷之處。
所以作者在長期的高中英語寫作教學中,提取歸納出好詞好句示范教學法。本文只是從本人教學實踐中截取部分。同時好詞好句需要教師善于在網絡資源和大數據中搜集,本文提供了一些資源平臺。
一、在教學中應用
1.高級詞匯替換法(常見詞匯)
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(低端)Learning English is important.
(高端)Learning English is of greatimportance/significanceleonsequence
(高端)It is vitallessential to learn English.
(高端)It counts/matters if you learn English well.
(高端)Great importance should be attached to learning English.
(高端)Learning English plays an important part/role in life.Good
(低端)It is good to get up early.
(高端)It was amazing that the boy was able to solve the problemso quickly.
(高端)What a fantastic mountain scene!
(高端)That was an impressive performance from such a youngtennis player.
(高端)You look splendid in that outfit.
(高端)The view from the top of the mountain is breathtaking.
(高端)You look totally awesome in that dress.------Cause
(低端)I hope the children haven't caused you too much trouble.
(高端)The fire resulted in damage to their property.
(高端)Last month's bad weather was responsible for the cropfailure.
(高端)The jump in food price gives rise to a lot of complaint
(高端)Smoking can lead to lung cancer.
2.句子連貫
(散句)He is a good teacher.He is loved by all his students.
(緊湊)He is a good teacher who is loved by all his students.
(緊湊)He is such a good teacher that he is loved by all hisstudents.
(緊湊)He is such a good teacher as is loved by all his students.
3.模仿名言警句
(名言)Ask not what your country can do for you,ask what you cando for your country.(肯尼迪)
(模仿)Ask not what your school can do for you,ask what you cartdo for your school.
(名言)Where there is a will,there is,way.
(模仿)Where there is health油ere is wealth.
4.增強語氣句型
(低端)You should be careful about what you say.
(高端)You cant be too careful about what you say.
(低端)By working hard;you can make it to your dream university.
(高端)Only by working hard can you make it to your dreamuniversity.
(低端)Listen carefully in class.
(高端)Do listen carefully in class.
二、在網絡和大數據中搜集
2.1 世紀世紀正在經歷一場巨大的變革,現代人類淹沒在海量的大數據之中,數字在爆炸式地擴張。北京外國語大學中國外語與教育研究中心顧問劉潤清說:教師不再是知識的唯一占有者和提供者,而變為課堂的組織者和學習的引導者。英語描寫這一變化更有趣:教師從月弘刻變成Guide,從Sage on the stage變成Guide on theside,從teacher變成helper,councilor,facilitator等;大數據具有四大特征,分別為容量大(volume)、種類多(Variety)、速度快(Velocity)、價值高(Value)。因此.教師不僅是一個好的教學者,也應該是一個好的學習者和信息搜集者。
巧婦難為無米之炊,如果老師的資源有限,是不可能收集到好詞好句的。作者在長期的英語教學中,學會了各種各種搜索引擎的使用,各種電子網絡字典查詢。以下是關于英語好詞好句的來源的網站鏈接。
http://dj.iciba.com/愛詞霸句酷,例句地道正宗,需要注意其出處。一般辭典例句比較好。
http://www.jukuu:com/句酷網。海量例句,任由選擇,注意同上。
http://www.thefreedictionary:coml世界著名字典,例句地道。
hops://cn.bing.com/dict?FORM=Z9LH3必應搜索引擎的辭典(微軟出品),雙語例句,權威地道。
httpl/dict.youdao.com/有道辭典,國內著名學習平臺,海量英語內容,集英語學習和字典為一體。
www.macmillandictionary.com麥克米蘭字典,國際權威字典。
dietionary.cambridge.org劍橋英語字典,國際權威。
三、結語
英語寫作是一個復雜的社會心理行為,高中英語寫作能力不足各異,這需要刻意訓練,模仿加訓練形成內化。
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