慰問信寫作攻略

山東東明縣東方學校 李全忠

●題型解說

慰問信是向不幸者或失敗者表示安慰的信件。 這類信件要寫得簡單、誠摯，語言要得當，多用積極、樂觀的話語減輕對方的煩惱和痛苦，并鼓勵對方在日后的生活、工作和學習中要信心滿滿。 寫信的步驟一般為：

1. 自我介紹；

2. 表示慰問；

3. 力所能及的幫助；

4. 表示鼓勵。

●句型集錦

1. I'm sorry that you failed..., which brings you great suffering.

很遺憾得知你在……失敗了，并給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。

2. I just can not tell you how sorry I was to know that...

得知你……，你不知道我有多難過。

3. I felt so sorry indeed when I was informed of...

當我得知……，我真的很難過。

4. I was shocked to hear the news that...

聽到……的消息我很震驚。

5. I wish there is something I could do to ease your pain.

我希望能做些什么來減輕你的痛苦。

6. I know there are no words that can comfort you now.

我知道現在無法用語言來安慰你。

7. Cheer up and fight against...

振作起來，和……做斗爭吧！

8. I hope you'll soon totally recover from...

我希望你很快就能從……中徹底痊愈。

9. Please don't hesitate to tell me if there is anything I can do.

如果需要我做什么，請直接告訴我。

10. Remember we won't be far away when you need any help.

記住，在你需要幫助的時候，我們就在你身邊。

11. I know there are no words that can be a comfort to you now, but you should realize that you are young with a promising future.

我知道現在無法用語言安慰你，但是你應該意識到，你還很年輕，美好的未來在等著你。

12. I'm sure you will be restored to health soon.

我相信你很快就會康復。

●模板借鑒

I'm awfully sorry to hear thatFaced with such a(n)you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are moved to tears. Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to help you.（所能提供的幫助一）. Besides,（所能提供的幫助二）.

Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won't be far away when you need any help!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

●范文初成

Dear friends,

I'm awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. Faced with such a rarely-seen natural disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to help you.I, as the chairman of Students' Union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere care for you. Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it will help you out as soon as possible. A better hometown is sure to be rebuilt soon.

Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won't be far away when you need any help!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

●小試牛刀

假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Anne得知自己身患肺癌 （lung cancer） 后處于極度的痛苦中。美國抗癌協會(ACS)決定，Anne每收到一封慰問信，就給她增加10美元的治療款。 請用英文給Anne寫一封慰問信，主要內容包括：

1. 自我介紹；

2. 得知的情況；

3. 對她表示鼓勵和祝愿；

4. 打算為她做什么。

注意：

1. 開頭和結尾已寫好，不計入總詞數；

2. 詞數100左右。

Dear Anne,

Yours,

Li Hua