高中英語書面表達寫作技巧指導

李平梅

摘 要：高中英語書面表達的教學效果不理想，本文介紹一種形象易懂的“高富帥”三招寫作方法以改變學生書面表達的寫作困境，提高教學效果。

關鍵詞：書面表達;改進

書面表達是語言學習的輸出環(huán)節(jié)，也是一種創(chuàng)造性的活動，是學生學習的難點，更是老師教學的難點。一方面，沒有扎實的語言基礎、足夠的語言輸入和良好的寫作習慣，學生的習作猶如脫韁的野馬，不受英語詞法、句法和語法的約束，自由馳騁在漢語思維下的發(fā)揮，導致一篇習作錯誤百出，學習效果差。另一方面，教師的教學任務繁重，無法對所有學生的所有作文逐一批改，學生的錯誤表達和寫作習慣得以固化，教學效果極差。有什么方法可以改變這種教與學的困境呢？那就是把英語寫作與改結合起來，先改錯，再改進。

下面介紹“高富帥”的三招寫作技巧，讓同學們的習作“脫貧致富”起來：

第一招用詞：低級淘汰，高級替代（高）

Chang’e was the first person who arrived there.

→Chang’e was the first person who set foot there.

第二招造句：脫貧致富，復起來（富）

富1代：用上定語從句或非謂語動詞

In China， we believe that there is a beauty on the moon. Her name is Chang’e.

→In China， we believe that there is a beauty on the moon，whose name is Chang’e.

→In China， we believe that there is a beauty named Chang’e on the moon.

富2代：用上狀語從句或獨立主格結構

New Year is around the corner. We are going to hold a New Year party for you. It is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.

→As New Year is around the corner， we are going to hold a New Year party for you， which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.

→New Year being around the corner， we are going to hold a New Year party for you， which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.

富3代：用上名詞性從句或并列句

Chang’e-4 probe has landed on the moon successfully. People in China are so excited .

→People in China are thrilled at the news that Chang’e-4 probe has landed on the moon successfully.

→Chang’e-4 probe has landed on the moon successfully and people in China are so much thrilled .

富4代：用上強調(diào)句或倒裝句

①The dream of flying to the moon inspires Chinese people to make continuous attempts to explore the moon.

→It is the dream of flying to the moon that inspires Chinese people to make continous attempts to explore the moon.

②Our club’s works will be displayed， and we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field .

→Not only will our club’s works be displayed， but we alse have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field .

第三招卷面書寫：干凈整潔，帥哥美女來（帥）

注意單詞拼寫正確，書寫規(guī)范，使用衡水體，字跡工整，卷面整潔，正確使用標點符號，卷面干凈整潔美觀。

以上三招簡稱“高富帥”，用一句話概括即寫作詞匯高級、句式豐富、卷面美觀。掌握這三招，學生的寫作水平可以有效實現(xiàn)從難產(chǎn)到順產(chǎn)乃至高產(chǎn)的突破。