真誠(chéng)話語(yǔ)暖人心

浙江寧波市鄞州高級(jí)中學(xué) 陳 時(shí)

難詞探意

1.compliment/'kɑ?mpl?m?nt/n.稱贊；問(wèn)候

2.intuitively/?n'tu??t?vli/adv.直覺(jué)地

It is what we say and do to show compassion to others that can make somebody else's day extra special.I believe that a simple compliment can mean a lot more than one can think.We all know that gratitude is the best attitude.When our heart is filled with gratitude,it intuitively appreciates and thanks others.

I was a high school student in Kenidy School,located not far off Haidemood Park.It is a common high public school,you know.The students come from the nearby neighborhood and not all of them will go to good colleges.The teachers come and go all the time,but they don't just pass like the wind,leaving no trace.Many of them are devoted to their work and appreciated by their students.I was one of them who was blessed by those dedicated teachers.

The last semester in my final year of high school,I had a kind teacher whom I can never forget.I was not necessarily the best student when it came to writing tests.Actually,I had to work extra hard to get good marks,although I enjoyed learning.Anyway,this class that I truly enjoyed still had me struggle to do well on my tests.My teacher willingly helped me and was always willing to answer my questions,and I greatly appreciated it.He was a remarkable teacher,always reaching out to students and helping them achieve their greatest potential.Never did he show any impatience to us.

Although I have left school for a long time,many happy memories still stuck to my heart.I remember the day of my writing final exam,just as usual,I was the last one still writing in the exam room,reviewing my exam paper,while everyone else had already finished and left the room.After turning in my exam paper,there were only two in the room,the teacher and me.

Language Study

Ⅰ.Useful sentence structures for creating a story

1.It is what we say and do to show compassion to others that can make somebody else's day extra special.

譯文：正是我們對(duì)別人表示同情時(shí)所說(shuō)的話和所做的事情，使別人的一天變得格外特別。

分析：本句是一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句，強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)what we say and do to show compassion to others。在我們表達(dá)突出重點(diǎn)時(shí)，強(qiáng)調(diào)句是非常有效的手段。

2.The students come from the nearby neighborhood and not all of them will go to good colleges.

譯文：這些學(xué)生來(lái)自附近的社區(qū)，他們中不是所有人都能上好大學(xué)。

分析：本句使用了半否定結(jié)構(gòu)。在講述故事的時(shí)候，有時(shí)候需要委婉的語(yǔ)氣，敘述不能太過(guò)絕對(duì)，這時(shí)可以用半否定結(jié)構(gòu)。半否定結(jié)構(gòu)是由表示數(shù)量的代詞all、both或every等組成的詞組和not或no構(gòu)成的。

Ⅱ.Words that can be used to describe the characters or feelings of a person

1.compassion n.同情；憐憫

2.compliment n.稱贊；問(wèn)候

3.gratitude n.感激；感謝

4.appreciate v.感激；欣賞

5.devoted adj.忠誠(chéng)的；全心全意的

6.bless v.祝福

7.dedicated adj.專用的；專注的；獻(xiàn)身的

8.willing adj.樂(lè)意的；自愿的

9.remarkable adj.非凡的；了不起的

10.impatience n.無(wú)耐心；急躁

Reading Check

閱讀上面的短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。注意：

1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。

Paragraph 1：

Just before I left the room,I turned around and said something that I had meant to say.____________________________________________________

Paragraph 2：

He seemed really touched and appreciated my simple comment._____________________________________________________________________

寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)引

一、析結(jié)構(gòu)，理要點(diǎn)

二、依背景，巧構(gòu)思

本文的故事脈絡(luò)很清晰，續(xù)寫(xiě)故事的脈絡(luò)發(fā)展時(shí)一定要關(guān)注文章開(kāi)始的背景介紹。第一、二段的背景介紹是作者表達(dá)的重點(diǎn)，而本文的故事正文則是對(duì)這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的說(shuō)明。

作者參加自己的畢業(yè)寫(xiě)作考試，在考試結(jié)束，離開(kāi)考場(chǎng)時(shí)，對(duì)老師說(shuō)了幾句話。根據(jù)兩個(gè)提示句，第一段主要是作者對(duì)老師說(shuō)的話，以及當(dāng)時(shí)的情景。這里故事發(fā)展比較明確，也比較簡(jiǎn)單，寫(xiě)作時(shí)主要描寫(xiě)作者當(dāng)時(shí)的心境。

根據(jù)第二段的段首句可知，這里是老師聽(tīng)到作者感激的話語(yǔ)時(shí)的反應(yīng)。根據(jù)文章的背景介紹，這里主要描述老師的情緒變化和情感態(tài)度。