中考作文真題寫作導航

曲永華

中考作文無論怎么考，不外乎包含以下幾類：觀點看法類、說明闡述類、活動介紹類、咨詢建議類、人物描寫類以及敘事描寫類。無論是哪一種考試形式，都要厘清自己的寫作思路，要認真審題：1.看文章的體裁;2.看文章話題，也就是題材;3.看用第幾人稱為主去寫;4.看用什么時態為主;5.考慮段落布局，一般為三段式;6.認真修改。下面選取全國各地2021年中考作文進行剖析解讀。

一、（2021·江蘇·鹽城）初中三年，我們都有一些難以忘懷的經歷。學校英語俱樂部將組織題為“An Unforgettable Experience”的征文比賽。請你根據提示，寫一篇短文參賽。

1. What was the experience？

2. What have you learned from it？

注意事項∶

1.詞數∶ 100 詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）;

2.文中不能出現真實姓名、校名等信息;

3.文章必須包含所有要點，可適當發揮，使短文連貫、通順。

An Unforgettable Experience

Looking back on the past three years， everyone had some unforgettable experiences.

思路引領：

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。

2.體裁：記敘文。

3.題材（話題）：個人活動與人際交往。

4.人稱：第一人稱為主。

5.時態：一般過去時為主。

6.段落布局：作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題——難忘的經歷;第二段介紹令自己難忘的經歷;第三段介紹自己的感受和學到了什么。

7.修改：要把提示材料都寫進去。保證語句連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。

滿分范文：

An Unforgettable Experience

Looking back on the past three years， everyone had some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget the experience of being a volunteer for the Asian Games held in our city.

Being one of the three volunteers selected from our school， I felt excited and proud. To make sure that I could provide the best service， I practiced in my spare time， especially my spoken English. When the day finally came， I felt a little bit nervous because I was afraid of making any mistakes. Fortunately， I performed well and was spoken highly of by the volunteer organization.

I learned that we should be confident and hard-working. It was the first time that I had been a volunteer for such an important event， which made me proud ever since.

亮點圈畫：請在作文中圈畫亮點詞、短語、句子，然后背誦下來，以便學以致用！

二、（2021·湖南·永州）每個人心中都有一個閃亮的名字，如張桂梅、鐘南山、你的媽媽×××……假如你是李華，請給你的英國筆友Linda寫一封電子郵件，介紹你心目中的一位英雄。

注意事項：1. 信中必須包含英雄的基本信息和主要事跡; 2. 信中不得出現自己的校名和姓名;3. 80詞左右（首段已給出，不計入總詞數）。

Dear Linda，

How are you getting on？ I’m writing this email to share a story with you.

That’s all. Thanks for listening.

思路引領：

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。

2.體裁：應用文（寫信）。

3.題材（話題）：家庭、朋友與周圍的人。

4.人稱：第一人稱和第三人稱相結合。

5.時態：以一般現在時為主。

6.段落布局：作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題——我最欽佩的人;第二段介紹這個人為何讓你欽佩，寫出幾個實例;第三段介紹自己要向他學習，也要做一個讓人欽佩的人，實現自己的夢想。同時，為自己最欽佩的人祈福。

7.修改：寫作時要與已給出的開頭和結尾融合起來，可以適當地發揮;要運用正確的英語表達方式，要選用恰當的詞匯、短語、句式，為文章增色;要把提示材料都寫進去，做到要點齊全，保證語句連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。

滿分范文：

Dear Linda，

How are you getting on？ I’m writing this email to share a story with you.

The person I admire most is my mother. She is in her forties. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have troubles in my study， she always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to challenge these problems. And I always succeed in solving them. As a doctor， she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. she often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.

I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.

That’s all. Thanks for listening.

亮點圈畫：請在作文中圈畫亮點詞、短語、句子，然后背誦下來，以便學以致用！

三、（2021·四川·廣安） 習近平主席在全國教育大會上強調，中學生要做德智體美勞全面發展的社會主義建設者和接班人。某中學正在開展“做一名新時代的合格中學生”活動。假如你是學生會的李揚，請根據以下要點，向全校同學寫一篇倡議書。

要點提示：1. 愛國、愛家、誠信、友好;2. 努力學習，實現夢想;3. 參加體育鍛煉，保持身心健康;4. 熱愛大自然，保護環境，與動物和諧相處;5. 積極參加各種活動，如打掃教室，幫助父母做家務等。

注意事項：1. 字跡工整、書寫規范，包含全部要點，可適當發揮;2. 文中不得出現真實的學校、班級名稱;3. 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯：keep one’s promise（守信）， nature （自然）， environment （環境）， get on well with （和諧相處）， take an active part in（積極參加）

Dear schoolmates，

I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student.

思路引領：

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。

2.體裁：應用文（演講稿）。

3.題材（話題）： 社會行為。

4.人稱：第一人稱。

5.時態：主要采用一般現在時。

6.段落布局：作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題——學校正在開展“做一名新時代的合格中學生”活動;第二段介紹從哪些方面應該怎么做一名新時代的合格中學生，并給出建議;第三段呼吁同學們趕快行動起來，爭取成為一名新時代的合格中學生。

7.修改：寫作時要與已給出的開頭融合起來，可以適當地發揮;要運用正確的英語表達方式，選用恰當的詞匯、短語、句式，為文章增色;要把提示材料都寫進去，注意過渡詞銜接;要做到要點齊全，保證語句連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。

滿分范文：

Dear schoolmates，

I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student.

First of all， we must love our country and home. We should be honest and keep our promise. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. Secondly， it’s our duty to study hard and we should try our best to achieve our dreams. Next， taking exercise can make us keep healthy. After that， we are supposed to show love to nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends， so we should get on well with them. What’s more， we should get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities， such as tidying up the classroom and helping our parents with housework.

Come on！ I believe we can make it.

亮點圈畫：請在作文中圈畫亮點詞、短語、句子，然后背誦下來，以便學以致用！