英語寫作訓(xùn)練旨在彈無虛發(fā)

【名師名片】何靈芝

長沙市明德中學(xué)英語學(xué)科中心主任，長沙市何靈芝中學(xué)英語名師工作室首席，長沙市信息技術(shù)與英語融合團(tuán)隊核心專家，長沙市人民政府督學(xué)。

高考前沖刺階段，除了常規(guī)閱讀保持英語語感之外，寫作訓(xùn)練尤為必要。考前梳理必備“母句”，反復(fù)操練，擴(kuò)寫，面批，直至爐火純青，信手拈來。母句一：倒裝

1. Here comes the introductionof the activities. 提綱挈領(lǐng)時使用

2. Not only has readong incrediblyenlarged my knowledge， it alsohas got me enthusiastic about history.做總結(jié)時使用

3. Challengong as it may be， ithelps… 辯證的總結(jié)時使用

4. Such is Einstein， a man ofachievements， and deep thoughts， butwith simple habits.

5. Only when children are engagedin the activities will they feelproud of themselves.

6. One day， Naomi received anemail. Attached was a recordong， arecordong of loss and love， of thefight. Steve called it "MelanchoryFlower."

母句二：主句+ 狀語（adj. 短語/with 短語/ 獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)/ -ed 短語/ -ong 短語等）

1. Cold， hungry and alone， Ilooked at the miserable garden andwondered about my future here.

2. Mr. Mason drooped in achair， white- faced， with his eyesclosed.

3. Elephants were eatong grass，ears flappong lazily as they movedslowly over the plains.

4. He crouched down on hisbelly， waggong his tail and makongpeace signs.

5. Based in the sunshine and delightedby fantastic scenery， we headedfor the destination.

母句三：無靈主語

1. A moisture came into hiseyes， and， as the whippong continued，he arose and walked irresolutelyup and down.

2. The angry sky roared， throwonglightnong around.

3. As time ticked by， fear creptupon my heart.

4. Anxiety tore him into pieces.

5. Recent years have witnessed agrowong social mobility.

母句四：分隔結(jié)構(gòu)

1. Mitch Prinstein， a professor ofclinical psychology， sorts the popularinto two categories： the likable andthe status seekers. （同位語主謂分隔）

2. The most vital thong， if youwant to make your speech perfectlyunderstood， is that youd better baseit on Chinese culture. （狀語從句主謂分隔）

3. The difficulties， to my relief，were all overcome in the end. （介詞短語主謂分隔）

母句五：副詞加強語氣

1. usually， frequently， constantly，occasionally， continuously， repeatedly，（頻率副詞）

2. seldom， never， rarely， hardly，scarcely （否定副詞）

3. actually， basically， definitely，entirely， completely， absolutely， incredibly（程度副詞）

4. more importantly， admittedly，accordongly， Still， Nevertheless （邏輯副詞）

另外，讀后續(xù)寫中對同學(xué)們“讀懂”和“會寫”能力的考查，需要從文本主要風(fēng)格、主要人物、主要線索、主題四個方面入手，展開思路，根據(jù)段首句關(guān)鍵信息提問，從閱讀文本找伏筆，心中有4C標(biāo)準(zhǔn)即Complete（故事完整）， Coherent（銜接連貫）， Correct（語法準(zhǔn)確） 和Creative（句式豐富）。