地點介紹類寫作

廣東 涂麗平

?文體感知

地點介紹類說明文的寫作內容通常包括該地點的地理位置、面積、人口、氣候特征、歷史、特產等，也可適當融入人文風貌，簡單介紹該地區的民間風俗及人們的生活方式等，但要抓住該地區的主要特征，描寫詳略得當，不用面面俱到。

?寫作指導

Step 1 謀篇布局

1.時態：一般描述用一般現在時和現在完成時，涉及歷史典故則用過去時。

2.人稱：以第三人稱為主。

3.說明順序：一般從基本情況（地理位置、人口、面積等）到延伸內容（文化等）。

4.文章結構：

Step 2 寫作技能

一、詞塊積累

climate 氣候

surround 圍繞

pleasant 令人愉快的；友善的

be famous/well-known for 以……著名

special local products 特產

special snacks 特色小吃

delicious dishes 美食

warm in winter and cool in summer 冬暖夏涼

traditional cultures and customs 傳統文化和習俗

scenic spots/tourist attractions 旅游景點

places of interest 名勝古跡

natural scenery 自然風景

lie in/be located in/be situated in 位于……；坐落于……

have/cover/with an area of 占地面積為……

have/with a population of 有……人口

have/with a long history of 有……的悠久歷史

steep hills 陡峭的山坡

have a great influence on 對……有很大的影響

beautiful countryside 美麗的鄉村

be rich in 盛產……

be home to 是……之鄉

such as 例如

the local culture and customs 當地文化與習俗

attract millions of visitors 吸引了成千上萬的游客

convenient transportation 交通便捷

二、美句背誦

1.Xi'an is a beautiful city with a long history.西安是一座有著悠久歷史的美麗城市。

2.I feel proud to make a brief introduction to this city to you.我很榮幸能向你簡要介紹一下這座城市。

3.The city dates/goes back to over 3000 years.這座城市的歷史可以追溯到3000 多年前。

4.Chongqing lies in/is located in/is situated in southwestern China.重慶位于中國西南部。

5.The city is a city with not only a long history but also many places of interest.這座城市不僅有著悠久歷史，還有很多名勝古跡。

6.The city has a population of over 30 million.該城市有3000多萬人口。

7.Beijing, China's capital, is renowned for its ancient landmarks like the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, and the Temple of Heaven.北京，中國的首都，以其歷史悠久的故宮、長城和天壇等地標而聞名于世。

8.Paris is known as “The City of Lights” and stands as the heart of French culture and fashion, with the Eiffel Tower rising at its center.巴黎被稱為“光之城”，是法國文化和時尚的中心，埃菲爾鐵塔矗立于其市中心。

9.My hometown is a peaceful small town surrounded by lush forests and hills, away from the hustle and bustle of the city.我的家鄉是一座被郁郁蔥蔥的山林所環繞的寧靜小鎮，它遠離都市的喧囂。

10.I was born in a warm coastal city with golden beaches and clear blue waters.我出生在一座溫暖的海濱城市里，那里有著金色的沙灘和清澈的海水。

11.I grew up in a picturesque country village with winding rivers and a rich history.我是在一個風景如畫的鄉村長大的，那里有著蜿蜒的小河和悠久的歷史。

12.St.Petersburg is the cultural capital of Russia, interwoven with numerous canals and bridges, and its historic buildings and museums attract tourists from all over the world.圣彼得堡是俄羅斯的文化之都，眾多運河和橋梁交織在一起，其歷史建筑和博物館吸引了全世界的游客。

13.It covers an area of more than 20,000 square kilometers with a population of about 5 million.它占地面積超過2萬平方千米，人口約為500萬。

14.Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi, where the climate is pleasant.桂林位于廣西的東北部，那里氣候宜人。

?典例鏈接

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Susan 要在暑假來你所在的城市旅游，請你寫信向她介紹這座城市。內容包括：

1.城市概況；

2.城市特色。

注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Dear Susan,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【佳作欣賞】

Dear Susan,

I'm so glad to hear that you are coming to Guilin during your summer vacation.I'd like to give you a brief introduction to Guilin.

Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi, where the climate is pleasant.It covers an area of more than 20,000 square kilometers with a population of about 5 million.Guilin is famous for its beautiful scenery and all kinds of delicious food, such as Guilin rice noodles and chilli sauce.Of all the scenic spots, the Seven Star Park, Lijiang River and Elephant Trunk Hill are the most attractive.You can visit the scenic spots in the city on free buses.

Looking forward to your arrival.

Yours,

Li Hua

?即時訓練

假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry 要來你的家鄉參觀，請你寫一封郵件向他介紹你的家鄉并表示歡迎。要點如下：

1.交通方式推薦；

2.你家鄉的景點推薦；

3.表達祝愿。

注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Dear Terry,

__________________________________________

__________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua