如何寫提建議的英語作文

提建議，也是中考英語作文常考話題。寫此類作文時，可以先提出具體問題，然后用含有should或shouldn't等句子提出相應的建議。

1.寫作目標

假如你的朋友Tom遇到了一些問題，請根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文，說明他的問題及解決辦法。

2.素材積累

【教材原句】

（1）Students these days often have a lot of worries.（開頭句） （2）I don't know what to do about going to Mike’s birthday party tomorrow night.（開 頭句） （3）If we do that，more people will want to play the games.（中間句） （4）Also，I’m not sure how to go to the party.（中間句） （5）Can you give me some advice please？（結(jié)尾句）

【課外典句】

（1）I hope you can give me some advice on what to do with my worries.（開頭句） （2）I won't leave until they ask me to do.（中間句）

（3）I should do anything as they ask me to do.（中間句） （4）If you can come，you'll have a good time.（結(jié)尾句）

3.思路點撥

首先要開篇點題，指出Tom有三個問題；然后分層敘述他的問題及解決方法；最后提出希望，希望他盡快解決問題。寫作時以第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主。

4.寫作提綱

開篇點題：My friend Tomhas three problems.

分層敘述：One problem is... I think he should...If he ...he wil... His second problemis..Idon't think he.. His third problem is...I thinkhe should...

總結(jié)全文：I hope he can solve all his problems soon and .

5.妙筆生花

My friend Tom has three problems.His first problemis that he is too heavy.Ithink he should eat less junk food and more vegetables.If he does more exercise，he willbe thin.

His second problem is that he is always late for school.Idon't think he should stay up late.If he buys an alarm clock，he may never be late.

Histhird problemis that hehada fight with hisbestfrienda few daysago.Itwas just a misunderstanding.I think he should have a talk with his best friend and try to work things out.

I hope he can solve all his problems soon and have a happy life forever.

6.實戰(zhàn)演練

（1）（2024·內(nèi)蒙古·呼倫貝爾盟）

假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Mike飽受肥胖的困擾，他向你求助，詢問如何保持健康。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，給他回復一封郵件。

要點提示：

① 多吃水果和蔬菜；

② 堅持每天鍛煉，但是要適量；③ 保證充足的睡眠，不熬夜；④ 其他…

要求：

① 詞數(shù)90左右（郵件的格式、開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

② 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；

③ 文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名等個人信息。

Dear Mike，

I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight.I’d like to share some goodways to keep healthywith you.

I hope these rules will be useful to you.

Yours， Li Ming

參考范文：

Dear Mike，

I' m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I'd like to share some good ways to keep healthy with you.

First，you should eat more fruits and vegetables.You shouldn't eat fast food，such as hamburgers and chips.Eating too much of them may be harmful to your health.Second，do exercise every day.Find out your favorite sport and keep doing it.But remember not to do too much at one time.Third，get enough sleep.As a teenager，you should sleep for at least 8 hours every day.Never stay up too late.Finally，you should try to do things that make you happy such as talking with your friends and enjoying a relaxing movie.

I hope these rules will be useful to you. Yours，

Li Ming

（2）（2024·吉林）

當我們遇到自己無法解決的問題或煩惱時，應該學會積極向他人尋求幫助。請以\"AskingforHelp\"為題，用英語寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容包括：① 積極應對問題或煩惱的必要性;

② 尋求幫助的益處；

③ 結(jié)合生活經(jīng)歷，簡述你或他人尋求幫助的一個事例;

④ 提供尋求幫助的方法（至少兩個）。

寫作要求：① 語言流暢，層次清晰，內(nèi)容可以適當發(fā)揮；

② 詞數(shù)90左右，開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

③ 書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；

④ 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名和學校名稱。

Askingfor Help

There might be some problems or worries in life.

參考范文：

Askingfor Help

There might be some problems or worries in life.When we meet problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves，we should learn to actively get help from others.It’s important to ask for help，and it will help you relax.

Lastyear，my English grammar was weak.Because of this problem，my English was not good.So Iwent toask my English teacherfor help.With the helpof my teacherand my own efforts，my English score has improved.Now I've really learned how to learn lessons myself.

In a word，it is normal to have problems.When we meet problems，we should ask people around us for help，such as teachers，classmates or parents.In addition，we should also search the Internet for solutions.