寫作試題
國內某英文報紙設有一個求助信箱(Letter to Dr. Helper),請根據下列學生現狀調查分析表中列出的信息,以高三學生王勇的名義用英語給Dr. Helper 寫一封信。
注 意
1. 詞數:100左右;
2. 信的開頭和結尾已給出,不計入要求的字數。
Dear Dr. Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure...
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong
寫作改析
Dear Dr. Helper,
I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours to do{1} my homework at home.
Our{2} teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have no{3} time to do we want{4}. Besides, we even don’t have enough sleep. There seems to have{5} three causes about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many{6}homework and the high expectations from the parents and teachers. We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we don’t{7} have the chance to go to the{8} university. I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk{9}. I am looking forward to get{10} your advice.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yong
評 語
此篇習作是篇中檔作文。基本完成了此作文題要求表達的要點。語言銜接比較自然,部分錯誤不會太影響讀者的理解。從所出現的錯誤來看,建議加強介詞、非謂語動詞以及固定搭配的學習。
{1}doing{2}We{3}any{4}what we want{5}be
{6}much{7}won’t {8}去掉the{9}talk to{10}getting
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