My Seasons

洪鋮悅

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring， the weather is cool and wind， I can fly kites when it has wind. And I can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China， but not long time.

I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes， its often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows， everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman， skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season， because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

【簡評】這篇短文是描述我的四季，在寫法上，是根據春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替來寫的，先講明每個季節的特征，之后再寫在這個季節中的主要活動或比較有代表性的活動。同時講一些自己的真實感受，最后闡述自己最喜歡的季節。在實際寫作的時候，我們還可以先寫出自己喜愛的季節及主要的活動內容，之后再去講其他季節，還可以多講解一下地域的季節特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黃，農民在收割等等，這樣寫出來的四季更貼近實際。這篇習作講的是我的四季，是比較慣常的一些行為，所以我們最好采用一般現在時和情態動詞結合活動的寫法。即在什么季節，天氣如何，我們可以做什么。

指導教師：車宏逸