學生風采展示板：Being Warm-Hearted

作者：安徽師范大學附屬中學高三（3）班 李函指導老師：任漢鼎

學生風采展示板：Being Warm-Hearted

作者：安徽師范大學附屬中學高三（3）班 李函指導老師：任漢鼎

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to address[向……致辭]you. My English name is Isabella. I’m a high school student of 17. I have some good personality traits[特點], including being warm-hearted. So here comes my topic: Being warm-hearted.

Born a warm-hearted girl, I am always eager to help everyone in need so as to fulfill[實現]my dream of creating a beautiful world, bit by bit.

For example, when the horrible Wenchuan earthquake occurred, with thousands of souls gone, I was also in deep sorrow. I had donated as much as I could, including lots of my books and lovely toys, as well as a consolation[慰問]letter with my good wishes to those unfortunate children. Later on, I received quite a few letters of thanks from them.

Besides, I always drop by to help a disabled girl in my neighborhood. Dropped out of school, she always stays at home all by herself, with no one looking her in the eye—except me. To cheer her up, I often share interesting stories with her, and try my best to teach her something I learnt at school. It’s so happy to see her face light up with a cheerful smile.

Now, you see, warm-heartedness does have some magical power. It can bring us friendship and happiness. Let’s pass it on and help more people in need! I believe, only by doing so can we create a beautiful world!

Thanks for listening!

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