A Spring Outing

A Spring Outing

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One day in March, my friends and I went to Baiquan Hill.In the morning, we got on the bus.Two hours later, we saw the hill through the windows.How high it was! When we came out of the bus, we jumped and laughed.The air was fresh and the birds sang sweetly.We ran to the hill.There were a lot of trees on the hill, it looked green.Because it was spring, the fowers were out all over the hill.They made the hill very beautiful.When we climbed the hill, we heard the sound of water.“Look! It’s a waterfall!” somebody shouted.We saw a big waterfall and a river.Some of us played with water and some even caught fsh.There were lots of fsh in the river.One hour later, we arrived at the top.Though we felt tired, we were very happy.We sat on rocks and drank some water.Some students felt hungry and we began to cook.

After lunch, some students sang songs and others flew kites.We saw the kites flying in the blue sky.We felt very comfortable.We stayed there till afternoon.When we got home, it was already dark.

It was really a happy day for us!

江蘇省連云港市羅陽中學 八年（1）班 張盼

陳傳光老師點評：

張盼同學按照時間順序介紹了自己在百泉山的所見所聞，以及她和朋友們的活動與感受。文章用詞得當，條理清晰。