My Dream
___I had a dream last night. It was a funny dream!
___In my dream, Sun Wukong was flying in the sky. I said to him: “Sun
Wukong! I want to fly too!” Sun Wukong said: “O.K. I will help you!” He blew(吹)
one breath(氣)and I began to rise(升起)slowly(慢慢地). Then I was flying into
the sky. I was very happy and excited. I shouted(喊), “Ah! I flew in the blue
sky! Thank you! Sun Wukong.” He said to me: “You’re welcome! As long as
you are happy, I’ll be happy, too! I have an incantation(咒語)which can let you fly.” Later I learned the incantation so that I could fly with Sun Wukong. We two flew in the sky very freely(自由地). Suddenly, he asked me: “Do you want to ride a dragon(龍)?” I replied(回答)immediately(馬上), “Yes, I do. That must be very fun!” So Sun Wukong beckoned(召喚)a dragon. Then we rode on the dragon and flew everywhere freely in the sky. I saw mountains and seas. They’re very beautiful!
But all of a sudden, I fell off the dragon. I woke up. It was my mum who woke me up. How disappointed(失望的)!
I made up my mind—I will fly into the blue sky as a spaceman in the future. Wait for me, Sun Wukong!

劉彥喆
甘肅省蘭州市西固區蘭煉一小 六年級
指導老師:楊俊芳
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