A Letter to Sam

張超

Dear Sam，

Im so glad to tell you something about our school， one of the most well-known schools in China.

Our school was founded in 1951. It lie① in the southeast of Hebei Province. It is famous in② its good quality in teaching. Now it has about 1，800 students who are working hard for our country. The number of teachers are③ more than 100. The teachers teach very well and work hard to help the students. During the past 60 years， a great number of students have graduated from our school. Many of them have made great successes in their own field. We are all proud for④ them.

I hope youll have a chance to visit our school in the near future.

Yours，

Zhang Qi

河北省阜城縣古城中學八年級（3）班 張琪

點評

1. 優點：

本文覆蓋了所有的提示要點，表達自然流暢，結構嚴謹。小作者在行文時有意識地使用了定語從句、賓語從句等一些較復雜的句子結構，句與句間使用了一些連詞，使文章結構連貫，層次井然，體現了小作者扎實的寫作功底。

2. 需要修改的地方：

①lie應改為lies。因為句子主語是單數名詞our school，謂語動詞應用第三人稱單數形式。

②in應改為for。be famous for是固定短語，意思是“以……而著名”。

③are應改為is。the number of...意為“……的數目”，作主語時，謂語動詞要用單數形式。

④for改為of。be proud of...為固定短語，意為“因……而自豪”。

3. 評分：

按中考英語作文滿分20的評分標準，本文修改前可得18分。endprint