做最好的自己

安徽省合肥市第46 中學九年級︵22︶班 尹 睿

尹睿同學，活潑開朗，愛好廣泛。他喜歡讀書、跑步、打籃球、彈吉他等。學習成績優(yōu)秀，曾兩次獲得學校獎學金，多次獲得學校“方正通達”之星稱號。下面是他的一篇英語習作：

To begin with,I am happy to introduce myself.Just like other persons,I have some advantages as well as disadvantages.I don’t have a handsome face,but I do have big eyes and black hair.In a way,I’m thought to be just a common person if you see me for the first time.However,as the saying goes,don’t judge a person by his looks.From my point of view,the thought which a human has is more important.

In the past fifteen years,I’ve met lots of difficulties.However,along with them,the willpower,which used to hide at the bottom of my heart,turns up in my mind,because of which my character becomes strong.Besides,as a child,I also have many hobbies,such as playing badminton,reading classical works.In my free time,no sooner has the homework been finished than I put my heart into the hobbies.If my memory is correct,it’s already five years since I first play badminton.In my opinion,nothing can be more delightful than playing it.Also,my family members are fond of reading.So I like it as well.It makes me happy.

Next I’ll talk about my study.As we know,almost everyone meets different kinds of troubles.As far as I’m concerned,no matter how hard the trouble is,do not give up,do your best.I believe that the difficulty will be solved.Every time I follow the ways above,I always get success.Although I sometimes fail,I have no regrets,that’s important.

Last but not the least,my school gives me a fantastic environment to study in.It has a quiet library,which includes mountains of books.Another thing is the huge playground where most students enjoy themselves.My school is always full of joy.

In a word,no pains,no gains.Just try to be the best of myself,that’s me.So what do you think of me?Hope we can be good friends.

教師點評：

本文是一篇記敘文。作者首先介紹了自己的外貌、愛好等，然后敘說了自己愛讀書的家庭、海量圖書館以及能進行多種活動的巨大的學校運動場。作者重點介紹了自己的觀點、意志和克服困難的決心和態(tài)度，這些才是做最好的自己的關鍵所在。

文章的段落層次清晰，句式結構靈活，語法運用正確，遣詞造句精準，顯示出了小作者扎實的英語語言功底。