學校生活與課外活動

安徽宿州市泗縣一中 吳安運

◎文體概述

學校生活涉及在校學習的課程和學校、班級或學生會等舉行的各項比賽或課外活動，如聚會、野餐、燒烤、春游等；還包括學生的穿著、發型、預習、復習、討論、歸納等學習活動及教師的教學方法等。高考作文可能會從以下角度命題：

1.就學生的穿著、發型、行為舉止等發表看法。

2.就預習、復習、討論、歸納等課堂學習活動和教師教學方法等發表看法。

3.就任課教師開展評教活動發表看法。

4.就學校在節假日該不該補課發表看法。

5.就學生該不該參加課外各種形式的訓練，如鋼琴培訓、外語培訓、勤工儉學等發表看法。

體裁以應用文為主，如可能會要求考生就某項比賽寫一份通知，或就聚會、野餐、燒烤、春游等課外活動寫活動安排或日記。

◎寫作模板

I'm a student.I study in __________.I have a wonderful school life.Now let me tell you something about my school life.I get up at about_____________every weekday.I have breakfast at___________ .My classes begin at___________.After classes,.I always have lunch __________.After school, .I go to library __________.On Saturday and Sunday, __________.How do you like my school life?Could you tell me something about yours?→綜述→日常活動→詢問對方情況

模板范文

I'm a student.I study in Beijing No.4 Senior High School.I have a wonderful school life.Now let me tell you something about my school life.

I get up at about 6:30 every weekday.I have breakfast at 7:00.My classes begin at 7:20.After classes,I play games with my classmates.I always have lunch at home with my parents.After school,I often play basketball or football with my friends.I go to library every Tuesday and Friday.On Saturday and Sunday,I often study the piano.

How do you like my school life?Could you tell me something about yours?

◎經典句型

1.Recently we have had a heated discussion as to whether we should have term exams.最近，我們就是否應該進行學期考試進行了激烈的討論。

2.The extracurricular activity is a necessary part of the school life.課外活動是學校生活不可缺少的一部分。

3.There are varieties of out-of-class activities in our school,which we can take part in after class.我們學校有多種多樣的課外活動，我們課后可以參加。

4.The meeting will be held on the first floor of the school library and last ten days,from June 10th to 20th.這次會議將于6月10日至20日在學校圖書館一樓舉行，為期十天。

5.As a student,I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.作為一名學生，我堅決支持這次活動，因為它既有意義又有用。

6.Only by reading widely can we gain more knowledge and broaden our horizons.只有博覽群書我們才能增長知識，開闊視野。

7.We should take/seize every possible opportunity to acquire more useful knowledge and get fully developed.我們應抓住一切可以利用的機會去獲取更多的知識并得到全面的發展。

8.Not only did it improve their spoken English,but also it brought them much fun.這不僅提高了他們的英語口語，也給他們帶來了許多樂趣。

9.We gathered at the school gate and started out at seven o'clock.We got a warm welcome on/upon our arrival.我們在校門口集合，7點出發。一到那兒，我們就受到了熱烈的歡迎。

10.A child poor at math may be talented in painting.一個數學差的小孩兒可能是繪畫天才。

11.I prefer to fail rather than cheat in the exam.我寧愿考不及格，也不愿意考試作弊。

12.I'm determined to do well in my lessons so as not to let my parents down.為了不讓我的父母失望，我決心把功課學好。

13.A large number of students find that after long hours of study,they can relax both physically and mentally by taking part in school activities.許多學生發現參加學校活動可以使他們在長時間學習之后放松身心。

14.We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books,newspapers or magazines to the students in the lower grades.我們高三的學生們被號召把我們用過的書、報紙及雜志贈送給低年級的同學們。

15.As for me,we have benefited a lot from this activity,not only broadening our horizons,but also developing our interest in science.依我看，我們在這次活動中收獲很大，它不僅開闊了我們的視野，而且培養了我們對科學的興趣。

16.So far we have conducted/carried out a variety of activities on English learning,such as watching English films,holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students.迄今為止，關于英語學習我們已經開展了多種多樣的活動，如觀看英文電影、舉行圣誕晚會以及與外國學生聚會等。

◎典題鏈接

（2019屆安徽省江南名校高三大聯考）假定你是紅星中學高三（1）班學生李華，你校將在下周五舉辦 “校園文化節 （Campus Culture Festival）”系列活動。請給你班留學生Jim寫封郵件，邀請他參加。郵件的內容包括：

1.介紹你選擇的活動內容；

2.說明參加該活動的理由；

3.詢問是否愿意參加該活動。注意：

1.詞數不少于100；

2.郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Jim,

I'm writing to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival” in our school.

Yours,

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1.審題立意

該篇書面表達以書信體裁作為考查方式。書信體裁是學生常見的一種書面表達形式。從內容上看，本文要求考生根據題目要求寫封邀請信，邀請對方來學校參加“校園文化節”。但題目并沒有給出具體的活動，這是本篇習作的一個難點，同時也是重點所在。這要求學生在寫作前認真審題，做到心中有數，知道要寫什么，怎么寫，怎樣才能寫好。

認真審題之后，我們就要擬定一個自己選擇的活動，這是全文的核心。這個活動的選擇是我們自己想象出來的，我們可以根據自己的愛好，同時抓住文化這一主線挑選出這樣的一個活動來。然后，敘述自己挑選它的緣由。最后詢問對方是否感興趣，并邀請對方參加。這是全文的主要脈絡，但要寫得出色，必須在結構上、內容上多下功夫。為了提高書面表達的得分檔次，學生在寫作時也要注意自己的語言表達，可以使用一些長短句和必要的過渡詞，使文章銜接自然。

2.寫作要點

（1）介紹活動的大體情況；

（2）你所選擇的活動；

（3）闡述選擇該活動的理由；

（4）誠邀對方參加。

3.注意事項

（1）側重所選擇的活動及理由這一主要方面；

（2）主次分明，語言簡練，脈絡清晰。

【佳作賞析1】

Dear Jim,

I am writing to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival” in our school.You can experience interesting activities here.

As a member of Environmental Protection Association in our school,I will choose the activity where we collect the trash and use it to create some practical gadget like vases and baskets.①After that,we will display our works.As far as I am concerned,it is of great significance and benefit.②Not only can it dig out the hidden value of the used things and rubbish,but also it can make us students pay more attention to the effects of what we produce in daily life.③

Are you curious about the festival?It will be really great if you can come and join us.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮點分析：全文結構嚴謹，過渡自然，語言運用富于變化，顯得老練嫻熟。此外，作者還非常熟練地使用了倒裝語序和be+of+n.等諸多高級句式和結構，為文章內容的充實提供了保障和基石。特別是利用垃圾轉廢為寶的這種環保理念非常值得稱道，也為我們上了一節環境保護、利用資源和節約資源的教育課。總之，這是一篇優秀的習作。

①這是一個長句，后一分句中使用了where引導的定語從句，修飾the activity，運用準確。

②這里作者使用了be+of+n.的高級結構，表明該活動非常有意義。

③not only置于句首時，其后需部分倒裝。這里作者使用得精準，且語句內容豐富，是全文的一個亮點句。

【佳作賞析2】

Dear Jim,

I am writin g to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival”in our school.It is very popular with us students.①

It's to be held next week,and then you will experience various kinds of activities from papercutting to making sweet dumplings.②This year,as a crazy fan of Chinese classical music,I will go in for the show of a classical concert,from which I definitely will enjoy a lot.③As you know,it's music that sometimes makes us relaxed and reduces our pressure and worries.④In addition,there will be an exhibition of different kinds of Chinese classical instruments,such as zheng,drum,flute and so on.

I have no idea whether you are interested in it,if so,please let me know.⑤Looking for your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮點分析：本文開門見山表達了寫信目的，點明主題——邀請對方參加“校園文化節”。寫作內容豐富，作者嚴格按照寫作要求，布局謀篇合理，語言組織精密。文中多個復雜句式的使用體現出作者扎實的語言功底。此外，be popular with、various、definitely等詞匯的精準使用，使文章亮點頗多，讀之有味。

①此句開門見山，直接表明寫信的目的——邀請Jim參加“校園文化節”活動，這是書信體裁較為常見的一種開篇方式。

②這是一個由and連接的并列句，其中前一分句中be to do是將來時的一種表達方式，活動被舉辦屬被動，故作者用to be done；后一分句中from...to...列舉了豐富的活動內容。

小貼士此句還可以這樣表達：

It is going to take place next week,and then you will experience different kinds of activitiesfrom paper-cutting to making sweet dumplings.

It is going to be held next week,and then you will experience a variety of activities from paper-cutting to making sweet dumplings.

③介詞from和關系代詞which構成的定語從句在這里運用得自然地道。

④本句含有It is...that強調句型，強調音樂的重要性和好處。該句式的正確使用體現出作者較好的語法功底。

⑤這是一個主從復合句，其中從句部分為省略表達if so,該結構看似簡單，但能熟練運用則體現了作者英語語言運用地嫻熟。

●標準范文

Dear Jim,

I am writing to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival” in our school.

This year the festival will provide various activities.As a lover of traditional culture,I'd like to choose kite-flying.There will be pictures,poems and proverbs about kites when the time comes.We will also have the chance to learn how to make kites from folk artists.Besides,a competition for kite-flying will be held.I'm sure we'll develop our awareness of traditional culture and practical ability during this activity.

If you are interested in it,please let me know.Hope to meet you at the Campus Culture Festival.

Yours,

Li Hua

◎小試牛刀

假定你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過重陽節（the Double Ninth Festival）。請給外教露西寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內容包括：

1.出發及返回時間；

2.活動：包餃子、表演節目等。注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.結束語已為你寫好。

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua