話題寫作：計劃與愿望

安徽泗縣一中 吳安運

◎文體概述

計劃與愿望涉及的內(nèi)容非常廣泛。 試卷命題者可能圍繞以下主題來命題：

1.策劃一次班會；

2.為父母或老師的生日做準備；

3.為假期旅游制訂計劃；

4.申請組建足球隊、籃球隊、舞蹈隊或樂隊及其理由；

5.向老師、校長或家長尋求活動建議；

6.寫一份廣播通知，安排假期的學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)；

7.就“你理想的大學(xué)、專業(yè)、職業(yè)”發(fā)表看法；

8.某教授來你校做專題報告，請你以學(xué)生會主席的身份寫一份書面通知，告知報告的時間、地點、內(nèi)容和具體要求等。

◎?qū)懽髂０?/h2>

I dream of being a(n) ________.I love the job and believe ________.Firstly, ________.Secondly, I have more chances and time to .Thirdly, ________.Lastly, ________.Above all, ________would be more and more important, together with.That's why I love to be a(n) ________.→說明原因→具體計劃→總結(jié)模板范文I dream of being a teacher.I love the job and believe it is the best one in the world.Firstly, being a teacher, I have more chances to enrich myself in dealing with my students'questions.Secondly, in students' eyes, teachers are trusty and respectable and this is what I value a great deal.Lastly, different students have different characters and ideas, from which I can benefit a lot.Above all, education and teachers would be more and more important.That's why I love to be a teacher.

◎經(jīng)典句型

1.I plan/intend/mean to do sth.

我計劃/打算做某事。

2.I wish (sb) to do sth.

我希望（某人）做某事。

3.I would appreciate it if…

假如……的話，我將不勝感激。

4.He planned to go abroad for further studies.

他計劃出國深造。

5.So I am determined to meet the challenge.

因此，我準備迎接挑戰(zhàn)。

6.There will be a football game in our school this week.

本周，我們學(xué)校將有一場足球比賽。

7.As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked.

當(dāng)我是一個孩子的時候，我總希望自己快快長大，以便能擁有我想要的任何東西，做我想做的任何事情。

8.I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful.To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university.

我希望在將來為父母和社會做更多事情，使我的生活更有意義。 為了實現(xiàn)這個目標，我必須盡最大努力通過高考，進入一個好大學(xué)。

9.What's more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, being able to do some washing and cleaning by myself.

另外，因為我遠離父母，對我來說有必要學(xué)著獨立，能自己洗衣服、打掃衛(wèi)生。

10.I've received your e-mail, asking me about my plan for the summer vacation.Now let me tell you something exciting.

郵件已收到，你在郵件中問我這個暑假的計劃，現(xiàn)在我就告訴你一些令人振奮的事情。

11.It will be a good chance to help the visitors to get to know about the culture of Beijing.

這將會是一次幫助游客了解北京文化的好機會。

12.I won't miss seeing the great inventions and achievements on display and I can experience different cultures as well as exchange ideas with people around the world.

我不會錯過展出的偉大發(fā)明及成就。我還能感受不同的文化，也可以同世界各地的人們交流思想。

13.If possible, I'd like to stay at the home where there are students of my age so that I can communicate with them easily.

如果可能的話，我想居住在有同齡學(xué)生的家庭，這樣我和他們交流起來比較方便。

14.Think twice before you do.

三思而后行。

15.Great hopes make great men.

偉大的抱負造就偉大的人。

16.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.

抱最好的愿望，做最壞的打算。

◎經(jīng)典命題

假定你是李華，6月27日和28日是你期末考試后的第一個周末，請你制訂一個周末活動計劃， 并用英語給你的英國網(wǎng)友Alan 寫一封電子郵件，說明你的活動安排，主要活動內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動安排；

2.你對活動的期待。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總

詞數(shù)。

Dear Alan,

Yours,

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1.審題立意

本篇書面表達是提綱式應(yīng)用文寫作，要求學(xué)生根據(jù)所給信息，給英國網(wǎng)友Alan 寫一封電子郵件，說明期末考試后的第一個周末的活動安排。 寫作時，應(yīng)嘗試使用一些高級詞匯或復(fù)雜句式，并要力求銜接緊密流暢，以提升文章的檔次。

2.注意事項

①第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般將來時為主。

②對所給要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

③保持行文連貫，使文章富有條理性和邏輯性。

【佳作賞析1】

Dear Alan,

I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend.Because it's the first weekend after my final exam, I plan to make it meaningful.①

On June 27, I will spend the whole morning reading a book at home, which attracts me most.②In the afternoon I will go out with my family and friends.We're going fishing by a river and then going boating, which is my favourite sport.On June 28, we will go to the park nearby to collect litter.③I think it's our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.④

It's going to be a fantastic weekend! I'm looking forward to it.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮點分析：

本篇習(xí)作按時間順序介紹了周末的活動安排，內(nèi)容全面，邏輯清晰，用詞準確，語言精練。寫出了規(guī)范的復(fù)合句，正確使用了不定式、動名詞等非謂語，提高了文章檔次。

①because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。

②固定搭配spend...doing sth使文章出彩和地道。

③不定式作目的狀語,表明“到附近的公園去撿垃圾”的活動安排目的。

④用it作形式主語，代替不定式短語。

【佳作賞析2】

Dear Alan,

I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend.I have worked out a plan.Below are the details.①

Reading always brings me pleasure.②I'll stay at home reading a storybook that interests me most on the morning of June 27.③After lunch, I plan to go out with my family and friends.We'll see the film named The Fate of the Furious and then have supper together.On June 28 we will go to the park nearby.Instead of relaxing ourselves, we'll collect litter there,which is a very meaningful activity.④

I can't wait for the weekend to come! ⑤

Yours,

Li Hua

亮點分析：

本文段落主題明確，層次分明，語言表達熟練而準確。 使用instead of、 relax、 can't wait等高級詞匯和短語，增添了文章光彩。 多次使用非謂語動詞，如動名詞作主語、現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語等， 這充分展示了作者深厚的語法功底。倒裝句恰當(dāng)?shù)膽?yīng)用提高了文章的可讀性。

①倒裝句的運用為文章增色， 同時引出下文。

②動名詞作主語的使用恰到好處，提高了文章的檔次，為“在家讀書”做了鋪墊。

③現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語、that引導(dǎo)的定語從句等展現(xiàn)了作者對英語復(fù)雜句式的熟練掌握。

④短語介詞instead of恰當(dāng)?shù)乇磉_出“到公園”不是為了放松而是“撿垃圾”。

⑤表達出作者對本次活動的期盼，迫不及待的心情溢于言表。

◎小試牛刀

為了實現(xiàn)中華民族的偉大復(fù)興，作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該把個人夢想融入偉大的“中國夢”中， 做一名 “中國夢” 的踐行者。 請以“My dream”為題，寫一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你的夢想是什么；

2.你將如何努力來實現(xiàn)它。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

My dream