安全與急救話題作文探究（一）

楊慶春

話題分析

安全是我們日常生活、學習和工作的根本保障，尤其是學生的安全牽動著每位老師和家長的心。安全與急救這個話題包括交通安全、校園安全、活動安全、網絡安全等方面，涉及學生在面對地震、火災、水災、踩踏事故、野浴溺水、突發疾病、校園暴力等災難和意外事故時如何自救逃生與自我保護。安全問題越來越受到人們的關注，這自然也勢必成為中考寫作的熱門話題。

命題預測

安全與急救這一話題與日常生活學習聯系緊密，取材廣泛，從寫作體裁上看，我們可以寫成記敘文、說明文、議論文或應用文等不同文體。這要求學生必須掌握各種文體的寫作技巧和方法。歷年中考試題中都有安全與急救方面的書面表達題，常常要求學生借助文字提示或圖表提示來進行作文。

近三年來各地中考命題多出現如下話題：

1. 保護安全： 2019年四川南充（How to keep safe）、2019年貴州安順（Protect ourselves at school; How to protect ourselves）、2019年湖南懷化（Protect ourselves， cherish our lives）、2019年廣西河池（Keep away from the danger！）、 2018年湖北十堰（How can we make ourselves safe？）、2017年山東濰坊（How to protect our lives）、2017年黑龍江龍東圖表作文（How we protect ourselves）;

2.交通事故：2017年江蘇徐州圖表作文（交通事故）;

3. 突發事件：2017年湖南益陽（珍愛生命，預防溺水）;

4. 安全教育：2019年湖南邵陽、2019年四川涼山、2018年山東德州（安全教育）;

5. 遵守安全規則：2017年四川成都圖表作文、2018年湖北恩施圖表作文（遵守安全規則）。

常用句式

★可用在段首的句子：

It is very important to keep safe.

I have to tell you something about safety.

Camping is interesting， but sometimes is dangerous.

The danger is around us.

As a student， how to keep safe is very important.

More and more people realize the importance of safety.

Value life， value yourself， have a good life.

How will we prevent such serious accident？

★可用在段中的句子：

I was so careless that I hurt myself.

In case of an accident， bicycle riders should know how to give first aid.

To my surprise， she hurt herself seriously.

Try to stay there and don’t move.

Stop your bike， let the person cross the road first.

You should wait until the traffic light turns green.

If we can do all these well， we’ll have a safe and happy life.

It’s dangerous to go swimming only by yourself.

Everyone should follow the traffic rules.

Ask/shout for help， when you are in danger.

We should learn from the brave hero.

We have to know how to escape from the fire.

When you are in danger， you have to shout loudly for help.

Almost every year in summer， many people are reported dead from drowning accident.

If a person has an accident， he needs medical care before a doctor can be found.

When you give first aid， you must pay attention to three things.

First we should check the wound to say how serious it is.

★可用在段尾的句子：

We must not swim alone in rivers and lakes.

In a word， we should try our best to behave well.

We live only once， we must cherish life.

In a word， we must try our best to protect and value our lives！

All in all， we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.

Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times！

We must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.

In a word， this young man is the one who is respected a lot！