英語寫作“步步高”之難忘經(jīng)歷篇

諸立忠

在我們的人生歷程中，有許多事值得我們在以后的生活中去不斷地回味，對這些難忘的經(jīng)歷，我們一定想要將它們變成文字，珍藏起來。如何記述這些難忘經(jīng)歷？請看今天的寫作話題———

首先我們一起來看一則寫作實(shí)例：

放學(xué)回到家，Tony發(fā)現(xiàn)父母都不在，便開始做起了作業(yè)。直到十一點(diǎn)父母才回來，之前從沒有一個(gè)人單獨(dú)在家的13歲的他有了一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。當(dāng)門外有人走過時(shí)他害怕;聽到外面的房間好像有什么動(dòng)靜，他更是害怕，后來才發(fā)現(xiàn)是自己的小貓。

根據(jù)上面的提示以“My Unforgettable Experience”為題用第一人稱寫一則短文，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

一、分析提示，把握寫作主題

由提示及所給的標(biāo)題可知這里所描述的主題應(yīng)是“I”（Tony）第一次一個(gè)人在家時(shí)的難忘經(jīng)歷。明確主題應(yīng)為： My Unforgettable Experience。

二、構(gòu)思寫作順序

確定了主題后，接下來需要構(gòu)思好寫作的步驟。描述經(jīng)歷的文章當(dāng)屬敘事類，說明時(shí)可按事件發(fā)生的順序進(jìn)行描述。開始可說明與事件相關(guān)的人及時(shí)間，或開篇點(diǎn)題，說明這是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，隨后說明事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)及相關(guān)人物。在敘述事情經(jīng)過的時(shí)候重點(diǎn)應(yīng)突出“unforgettable”，針對這篇文章寫作的重點(diǎn)應(yīng)放在描寫當(dāng)時(shí)讓“I”感到恐懼的環(huán)境的渲染上。文章結(jié)尾可總結(jié)全文，進(jìn)一步說明這是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，突出主題。

三、寫作范文

My Unforgettable Experience

Have you got any unforgettable experience？ Well， let me tell you one of my unforgettable experiences.

One afternoon I came back from school and found that my parents weren't in. You know， I was only 13 years old. I never stayed at home alone before. So I felt a little afraid. When I was doing my homework in my bedroom， I heard someone walking outside. Then I felt even more frightened. However， just at that moment， I heard a great noise in the next room. Was anyone there？ Was it a robber or a thief？ You couldn't imagine my feeling then. I was too scared to move. Then my door opened. I found my cat enter my room. It frightened me. Then I began to laugh. I stayed at home alone until eleven when my parents returned.

I think it's my unforgettable experience because it was the first time that I stayed in a place alone.

四、范文點(diǎn)評

這篇文章敘述了作者第一次一個(gè)人呆在家的難忘經(jīng)歷，語句表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、通順，句式多變，用詞也很有講究，如幾個(gè)表示害怕的詞afraid， frightened， scared的使用避免了用詞的單調(diào)?！?br>