2022年高考熱門話題寫作預(yù)測(cè)（4）：人物與描寫

四川 蔣建平

Part 1 激活·素養(yǎng)解讀

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Part 2 晨讀·素材積累

Ⅰ. 讀典題·知考向

你校準(zhǔn)備在新建的“名人長(zhǎng)廊”中為名人畫像配上英語介紹，以便讓同學(xué)們有更多的機(jī)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)英語。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇100詞左右的短文介紹郎平。

1. 郎平個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介；

2. 自己的看法。

◆范文晨誦

Lang Ping, who was born on Dec. 10th,1960, is a famous volleyball coach and we all admire her very much. She began to practise playing volleyball when she was 13 and joined the national team later. She was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards. In 2016, she took the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games and won the gold medal. She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in the history of volleyball in

China.

In a word, Lang Ping's spirit of never giving up inspired so many people. We all praised her role in winning the hard-earned gold medal.

◆模板提煉

人物傳記

第一段：

（1）總體介紹人物，包括姓名、身份、地位和主要成就等。

Dian_Fossey_was_regarded_as_one_of_the heroines of the 20th century. （總體介紹人物）Her love for the mountain gorillas in Africa taught people about dangers these animals are facing. Dian was an outgoing and kind person,and able to gain valuable data about their lives by becoming a companion to them.

（2）通過概括性的語言來描述人物的特征。常用定語從句來寫：

①Einstein, who discovered the “Relativity Theory”, is well known in the world.

② Howard Carter is one of the most famous explorers (that)_the_world_has_ever known.

③Shakespeare, who was a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.

④Thomas Edison, born in America, was a great scientist and inventor.

（3）開頭常用句式

①Advances in science help all humanity.科學(xué)的進(jìn)步有助于全人類。

②Professor Green, known to the world as a scientist, is not only diligent but also warmhearted.

格林教授是一位聞名世界的科學(xué)家，他不僅勤勉，而且熱心。

③He is a scientist of high prestige.

他是一位有聲望的科學(xué)家。

第二段：

（1）具體介紹人物，包括成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷、教育情況、興趣愛好、性格品質(zhì)、工作經(jīng)歷、感人事跡、突出成績(jī)、功過是非等。

（2）具體介紹人物（主題句），按時(shí)間順序介紹人物的一生，用議論性的語言刻畫人物。

Dian_Fossey_was_born_in_California_in

1932._She_graduated_from_university_in_1954 and worked...（具體介紹人物）

（3）主體段落常用句式

①So like any diligent scientist, he set about trying to derive one.

所以，像其他勤奮的科學(xué)家一樣，他自己嘗試著推論出一個(gè)來。

②Her name was Marie, and she was an official scientist, studying the properties of magnetism for her doctorate in physics.

她的名字是瑪麗， 她是一位正式的科學(xué)家，為獲得物理學(xué)博士學(xué)位而研究磁性質(zhì)。

③As the last great scientist of the classical period, he was the first to draw a map that was based on all available knowledge, rather than guesses or imagination.

他作為古典時(shí)期最后一位偉大的科學(xué)家，成為以知識(shí)水平為基礎(chǔ)， 而不是憑猜測(cè)或想象，繪制出地圖的第一人。

④She quit all worries and devoted herself to the study of science.

她擺脫了一切煩惱，潛心研究科學(xué)。

⑤This is an age not only of great science;it is an age of great scientists.

這不僅是一個(gè)偉大的科學(xué)時(shí)代，這也是一個(gè)偉大的科學(xué)家時(shí)代。

⑥Like all good students of science, he believes that the universe is well understood and we know our place in it.

像所有學(xué)習(xí)科學(xué)的好學(xué)生一樣，他相信人類完全能夠了解宇宙，也了解人類在其中的位置。第三段：

（1）總結(jié)評(píng)價(jià)人物，包括影響、啟示等方面。

Dian Fossey is still alive in our hearts to this day. Thanks to her research, we now know more_about_mountain_gorillas..._Without_her work, there would be very few mountain gorillas left today.（總結(jié)評(píng)價(jià)人物）

（2）總體評(píng)價(jià)常見表達(dá)：

still live in one's heart 一直活在某人心里

set a good example to 為……樹立了一個(gè)好的榜樣

sing high praise for sb 對(duì)某人贊不絕口

think highly of sb 對(duì)某人評(píng)價(jià)很高

be regarded as 被認(rèn)為是；被當(dāng)作是

remember sb forever 永遠(yuǎn)記得某人

let us realize that... 讓我們意識(shí)到……

have a great effect on sb 對(duì)某人有很大的影響

teach us that... 教我們……

（3）結(jié)尾常用句式

①The scientist deserves recognition for his talent.

這名科學(xué)家的才華值得稱贊。

②Finally, Einstein arrived at a conclusion that the maximum speed in the universe is that of light.

最終，愛因斯坦得出了一個(gè)結(jié)論，宇宙中的最快速度為光速。

③Yuan Longping not only won the battle against hunger, but he could also export his crops abroad.

袁隆平不僅贏得了對(duì)抗饑餓的戰(zhàn)斗，而且還將自己的農(nóng)作物出口到國(guó)外。

◆靚句積累

1. 郎平因努力練習(xí)而獲得了很多榮譽(yù)。

（基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)）Lang Ping won a lot of awards because she was hard-working.

（高級(jí)表達(dá)）Lang Ping was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards.

2. 莫言，本名管謨業(yè)，出生在山東一個(gè)普通的農(nóng)民家庭。

（基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)）Mo Yan's real name is Guan Moye. He was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province.

（高級(jí)表達(dá)）Mo Yan, whose real name is Guan Moye, was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province.

3. 當(dāng)他還是一個(gè)年輕的農(nóng)民時(shí)，出于對(duì)文學(xué)的強(qiáng)烈熱愛， 他致力于各種中國(guó)古典文學(xué)，并逐漸練習(xí)寫故事。

（基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)）While he was working as a young peasant, out of a strong passion for literature, he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories.

（高級(jí)表達(dá)）While working as a young peasant, out of a strong passion for literature, he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories.

Ⅱ. 讀詞句·積語料

一、話題表達(dá)

核心詞匯：

1. independent adj. 自立的

2. optimistic adj. 樂觀的

3. ambitious adj. 雄心壯志的

4. energetic adj. 精力充沛的

5. sensible adj. 明智的；合理的

6. strong-minded adj. 意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的

7. stubborn adj. 固執(zhí)的

8.considerate adj. 考慮周全的；體貼的；體諒的

9. diligent adj. 勤奮的

10. modest adj. 謙虛的

11. handsome adj. 英俊的

12. good-looking adj. 長(zhǎng)得好看的

13. outgoing adj. 外向的

14. friendly adj. 友好的

15. committed adj. 盡心盡力的；堅(jiān)定的

16. thoughtful adj. 深思的；體貼的

17. talented adj. 有才能的

18. straightforward adj. 簡(jiǎn)單的；坦率的

高頻短語：

1. win the award 獲獎(jiǎng)

2. be active in 對(duì)……很積極；積極參加……

3. commit oneself to 某人致力于……

4.a strong/burning passion for 對(duì)……強(qiáng)烈的愛

5. be in good health/shape 身體健康

6. medium build 中等身材

7. get good grades 獲得好成績(jī)

8. gain/win the first prize/place 獲得一等獎(jiǎng)/第一名

9. treat others in an honest way 真誠(chéng)地對(duì)待別人

10.devote all one's life to science 某人奉獻(xiàn)一生給科學(xué)

11. gain a scholarship 獲得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金

12. be devoted to 致力于……；專注于……

13. be enthusiastic about 對(duì)……充滿熱情；熱衷于……

14. be gifted at/in 對(duì)……有天賦

15. be honoured as 被譽(yù)為……

16. be skilled in 在……方面熟練

提分靚句：

1.without引導(dǎo)虛擬語氣

Without Qian Xuesen's devoted work on missiles and rockets, China wouldn't have become such a powerful country/so powerful a country in the world in a short time. 沒有錢學(xué)森在導(dǎo)彈和火箭方面全心全意的工作，中國(guó)就不會(huì)在短時(shí)間內(nèi)成為世界上一個(gè)如此強(qiáng)大的國(guó)家。

2. that引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句

The hybrid rice that Yuan Longping developed has decreased the number of the hungry people around the world greatly. 袁隆平研究出的雜交水稻大大降低了世界上饑餓人口的數(shù)量。

3. as +身份

Lang Ping won the Olympic championship as a player and coach. 既是選手又是教練的郎平獲得了奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)冠軍。

4. in the history of

She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympic championship in the history of volleyball in China. 她是中國(guó)排球史上第一個(gè)獲得奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)冠軍的人。

5. devote oneself to +名詞

She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country. 她投身于科研，對(duì)國(guó)家做出了巨大的貢獻(xiàn)。

6. be awarded... for...

She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement. 她因她的科學(xué)成就被授予了諾貝爾化學(xué)獎(jiǎng)。

7. “It is/was +被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+ that+其余部分”強(qiáng)調(diào)句型

It is because of the scientific spirits that the great scientists have made such outstanding achievements. 正是因?yàn)榭茖W(xué)精神, 這些偉大的科學(xué)家才取得了如此杰出的成就。

8. so位于句首引起的倒裝句

So poor was his family that he had to drop out at the age of 12. 他的家庭如此貧困以至于他十二歲時(shí)就不得不輟學(xué)。

9. although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句

Although it happened three years ago, I never forgot the evening party. 盡管那發(fā)生在三年前，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記那場(chǎng)晚會(huì)。

10. “not only... but also”引起的倒裝句

Not only should we show respect for the great scientists, but also we should learn the scientific spirits from them. 我們不僅要尊重這些偉大的科學(xué)家, 而且還要學(xué)習(xí)他們的科學(xué)精神。

二、續(xù)寫金庫(kù)

外貌與神態(tài)描寫

1. Indeed, his sunburnt face and arms and his strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers, for whom he has struggled for the past five decades. 事實(shí)上，他曬黑的臉和手臂，以及他強(qiáng)壯的身體，就像他在過去50年為之奮斗的數(shù)百萬中國(guó)農(nóng)民一樣。

2. Alee became happy now and a gentle smile spread over her face. Alee現(xiàn)在開心了，整張臉洋溢著溫和的微笑。

3. His face split into a wide smile. 他的臉上綻放出燦爛的笑容。

4. Her eyes were glued to the screen. 她目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著屏幕。

5. He gave a glimpse of... from the corner of his eye. 他用眼睛的余光瞥了一眼……

6. With tears streaming down her face,words failed her. 眼淚順著她的臉流下來，她說不出話來。

Part 3 晚練·素養(yǎng)檢測(cè)

你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請(qǐng)你以“My most respectful teacher” 為題， 寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 人物簡(jiǎn)介；

2. 尊敬的原因。

注意:

1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

My most respectful teacher

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders._______________________________