我和慈善工作

I remember watching TV and seeing other children suffer in other parts of the world when I was five or six years old.I would say to myself,“When I grow up and get rich,I will save kids all over the world.”

At 17,I started my career,and by the age of 18,I started my first charity organization.I went on to team up with other organizations in the following years, and met, helped, and even lost some of the most beautiful souls like six-year-old Jasmina Anema who passed away in 2010 from leukemia（白血病）. Her story inspired thousands of people to volunteer as donors. In 2012, when Grandmother lost her battle with cancer, I had the very reason and the driving force to volunteer for others.

We're all humans.And we all just want a chance:a chance in life,a chance in education, and a chance in the future, really. When we do some voluntary jobs, our mission is to impact as many lives as possible,but it starts with just one.

People make it seem too hard to do charity work.The truth is that you don't have to be rich to help others. You don't need to be famous. You don't even have to be collegeeducated. But it starts with your neighbor, the person right next to you, the person sitting next to you in class, and the kid down the block in your neighborhood. You can just do whatever you can to help in any way you can.And today,I want to challenge each of you to make a commitment to help one person,one organization,or one situation that touches your heart.My grandmother used to say,“If you've got a dollar,there's plenty to share.”

Activity A Reading for understanding

Ⅰ.Text-centered chunks

team up with other organizations 與其他組織合作

pass away 去世；離世

lose one's battle with cancer 在與癌癥的抗?fàn)幹惺×?/p>

the very reason 正是這個原因

driving force 動力；驅(qū)動力

impact as many lives as possible 影響盡可能多的生命

do charity work 做慈善工作

make a commitment to do 許下承諾去做……

touch one's heart 觸動某人的心靈

Ⅱ.Text-centered sentences

一、定語從句

I went on to team up with other organizations in the following years, and met, helped,and even lost some of the most beautiful souls like six-year-old Jasmina Anema who passed away in 2010 from leukemia. 在接下來的幾年里，我繼續(xù)與其他組織合作，遇到、幫助，甚至失去了一些最美麗的靈魂，比如2010 年因白血病去世的6 歲的賈絲米娜·阿內(nèi)瑪。

【點石成金】該句中，went on、met、helped和lost四個動詞是并列謂語，描述接下來的幾年間“我”在慈善事業(yè)方面的一些經(jīng)歷。who引導(dǎo)一個定語從句，修飾先行詞sixyear-old Jasmina Anema。

【運(yùn)用遷移】我在過去的幾年間認(rèn)識并幫助了一些需要幫助的兒童，比如6 歲失去雙親的簡和與癌癥抗?fàn)? 年卻在2022 年去世的瑪麗，她們的故事都深深地觸動了我的心靈。

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二、it作形式賓語

People make it seem too hard to do charity work.許多人以為做慈善工作太難了。

【點石成金】“make it+adj.+to do sth”是一個比較常見的句型。該句型中，it充當(dāng)形式賓語，形容詞充當(dāng)賓補(bǔ)，這里的形容詞也可以用比較級或者最高級，to do sth 是真正的賓語，有時也可以在to do sth前加上for sb。

【運(yùn)用遷移】他們應(yīng)該讓我們更清楚地知道如何操作這臺機(jī)器。

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Activity B Reading for writing

假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，在國際志愿人員日（International Volunteer Day）來臨之際，請你代表學(xué)校起草一份倡議書，號召全體同學(xué)積極參加志愿活動。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.至少需要使用一個本文中解析過的句式；4.注意段落內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系。

Dear boys and girls,

I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students'Union.

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Yours,

Li Hua

寫作導(dǎo)引

本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇倡議書，要求向全校學(xué)生發(fā)起積極參加志愿活動的倡議，并且需要使用定語從句或it 作形式賓語的句式。這些寫作要求和所給語篇的主題語境是緊密相關(guān)的。我們可以通過整合同主題閱讀材料的內(nèi)容和語言，梳理寫作思路和積累素材。

一、語篇解碼

（一）主題歸納What is the text mainly about?

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（二）結(jié)構(gòu)梳理與內(nèi)容分析

Fill in the blanks with only one word according to the text.

The charity work and I●At 5 or 6,I hoped to 1. kids when growing up.My personal experience ●At 17,my career 2. .●At 18,my first charity organization was 3. .●An 4. in life, in education or in the future is desired by My opinion about charity everyone.●Aiming at 5. as many lives as possible, voluntary work just People's 6.starts with one.●People always think it is 7. to do charity work.about charity Conclusion Appeal●Actually,8. people can also do charity work.Everyone can do 9. he/she can do to help in any way.All of you commit yourselves to 10. people in need.

二、素材積累

本文是基于“志愿活動”主題的閱讀和寫作，我們可以通過模仿、學(xué)習(xí)并運(yùn)用閱讀中的語言表達(dá)，如詞塊和句型，積累寫作的語言素材。

（一）倡議的背景、原因或目的

1.It is obvious that as people live in an age of abundance,more and more people have their private cars.顯而易見的是，人們生活在一個富足的時代，越來越多的人擁有私家車。

2. To fulfil our obligation to protect the environment, we are supposed to follow the following ecological codes.為了履行我們保護(hù)環(huán)境的義務(wù)，我們應(yīng)該遵守以下生態(tài)行為準(zhǔn)則。

3. I am writing this letter to call on everyone to pay attention to the present disasters caused by human activities.我寫這封信是為了呼吁大家注意目前由人類活動造成的災(zāi)難。

（二）倡議的具體內(nèi)容

1.It is time for us to take action.是我們采取行動的時候了。

2.It is necessary for us to be aware of/realize the importance of... 我們有必要意識到……的重要性。

3. We are supposed to try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.我們應(yīng)該努力平衡社會實踐和學(xué)習(xí)之間的關(guān)系。

4.It would be better if you...如果你……，情況會更好。

5.It is suggested that...建議……

6.Only in this way can we...只有通過這種方式，我們才能……

（三）表達(dá)希望或再次發(fā)起倡議

1.Don't let your tear be the last drop of water in the world.不要讓你的眼淚成為世界上的最后一滴水。

2.I'm here again to call on all of us to save the natural resources instead of destroying the environment.我再次來到這里，呼吁我們所有人保護(hù)自然資源，而不是破壞環(huán)境。

三、寫作支架

本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇倡議書，根據(jù)任務(wù)的要求，語篇結(jié)構(gòu)可定位為“倡議背景和內(nèi)容+倡議原因+發(fā)起倡議”。文章的框架如下：Dear boys and girls,

With the advent of...,I am writing to...（倡議背景和內(nèi)容）

Being a volunteer is of great benefit. First of all, voluntary work makes it...for us to...In addition,we are supposed to...by doing voluntary work.What's more,voluntary work enables us to...,which will...(倡議原因)

So I'm here again to appeal to all of us to...(發(fā)起倡議)

Yours,

Li Hua

四、語篇過手

根據(jù)以上提供的主題、主題表達(dá)和語篇結(jié)構(gòu)，寫出一篇倡議書。第一段介紹倡議的背景和內(nèi)容，第二段介紹倡議的具體原因，第三段發(fā)起倡議。總詞數(shù)控制在80左右。

同時，學(xué)習(xí)運(yùn)用前文閱讀中出現(xiàn)的定語從句或者it 作形式賓語的句式。尤其要注意表達(dá)的內(nèi)在邏輯關(guān)系，如段落內(nèi)部是對比關(guān)系還是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，需要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。