金麟

Animals are our friends.
I love animals and my favourite animal is rabbit.
It is big and round.
It has two long ears and a short tail.
It can jump and run quite fast.
Rabbits like to eat carrots.
I like rabbits very much. What about you?
江蘇省太倉市實驗小學三(1)班 金? 麟
指導老師 金? 怡
學生在描寫葡萄時,不僅用了陳述句,還用了疑問句、感嘆句,讓文章顯得更生動。描寫動物時,能抓住動物的主要特征,從外貌、行為、飲食喜好等多方面介紹,體現了孩子們生活中的觀察力。