計劃與愿望

廣東 彭明芳

激活·素養解讀

一級目標__________________________________語言能力文化意識______思維品質學習能力二級目標________________________________1.學會有邏輯地談論計劃與愿望；2.運用名詞性從句以及定語從句，闡述自己的計劃和愿望，并提出自己的觀點，寫一篇關于職業夢想的演講稿。_________________________________________培養為夢想堅持不懈、努力奮斗、勇于探索的品質。_______________________1.掌握語篇段落之間以及段落內的邏輯關系；2.培養梳理概括、整合遷移信息的思維品質，并能表達職業夢想、選擇原因及實現途徑，真切地表達自己對職業夢想的信念。_______________________________能夠從閱讀文本中提取寫作的素材，如優美的句型、豐富的詞塊、文本的要點，并形成有效的寫作支架。

實踐·讀寫整合

My dream career

我的職業夢想

1Since I was a child, I have been addicted to books.I can't go a single day without reading something.As time goes by, I am definitely sure that my dream career is to become a professional writer like Shakespeare and J.K.Rowling.

2In order to make my dream come true, I have made it a rule to pick up a pen and just let my thoughts out every day.As a child, I used to write stories.As a teenager, I was encouraged by my teachers who told me that I had an innate (與生俱來的) talent for writing.They knew how passionate I am about writing, and how that passion slips through my fingertips to the paper.In my freshman year, I tried to figure out whatA Midsummer Night's DreamandThe Tragedy of Julius Caesarwere about.Macbethwas much easier to understand in my sophomore year.Gradually, I can be inspired by anything: an expression,a song and a movie.Once I get inspired, it's like the wheels turning faster and faster as I think out one possible story after another.I'm working so hard to make a breakthrough in the competitive world of publishing.

3I don't really know the reason why I love writing so much.But what I know is that I want to write and leave something behind.I always feel that there is something in my mind about putting a story down on paper for friends across the globe to read and understand,and about finding just the right words to describe what I can see so clearly in my head.Through writing, I have found true happiness and the value of life, which means a lot to me.

4Now, I have realized my dream career and become a professional writer.As the old saying goes, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”I think the secret to achieving a dream career is that we need not just talent,but passion and perseverance,which are essential to us.

Activity A Reading for understanding

語篇解碼

（一）主題歸納

What is the text mainly about?

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（二）結構分析與信息梳理

Fill in the blanks according to the text with only one word for each blank.

My dream career__________________________________What is my dream_____________________career?I have been 1.______ to books.My dream career is to become a 2.______ writer.________________________I have made it a 3.______ to pick up a pen and just let my thoughts out every How do I realize my dream career?day.As a child, I used to write stories.As a teenager, I was 4.______ by my teachers.As a college student, I tried to 5.______ out the works of Shakespeare.Gradually, I can be 6.______ by anything and think out one possible story af-______________________________________________________________________________________________ter_another.

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Activity B Reading for writing

一、詞塊積累

be addicted to 沉溺于

as time goes by 隨著時間的流逝

make one's dream come true 使某人的夢想實現

let one's thoughts out 表達某人的想法

have a talent for 在……方面有天賦

slip through one's fingertips to the paper 從某人的指尖滑落到紙上

be inspired by 被……鼓舞

think out 仔細思考；全面思考

make a breakthrough 有所突破

leave something behind 留下一些東西

in the competitive world of publishing 在競爭激烈的出版界

realize a dream career 實現一個職業夢想

be essential to 對……必不可少

二、典句賞析

1.賓語從句

I always feel that there is something in my mind about putting a story down on paper for friends across the globe to read and understand, and about finding just the right words to describe what I can see so clearly in my head.我總覺得，把一個故事寫在紙上，讓世界各地的朋友閱讀和理解，找到合適的詞語來描述我腦海中清晰可見的東西，是我心中的一件大事。

【點石成金】該句有兩個賓語從句，第一個賓語從句由that 引導；第二個賓語從句由what 引導。

【例句仿寫】只有當我們明白自己熱衷的是什么的時候，我們才知道自己將來要做什么。

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2.定語從句

I think the secret to achieving a dream career is that we need not just talent, but passion and perseverance, which are essential to us.我認為實現職業夢想的秘訣是我們不僅需要天賦，還需要熱情和毅力，這些對我們來說是至關重要的。

【點石成金】which 引導定語從句，指代passion and perseverance，目的是強調實現職業夢想的關鍵不僅僅只是天賦，熱情和毅力也是必不可少的。

【例句仿寫】他不僅學習數學很有天賦，也有毅力解決數學問題，從不放棄，這才是他成功的關鍵。

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三、寫作遷移

假定你是李華，你校將以“My dream career”為主題，舉辦英語演講比賽。請你根據以下要點寫一篇英語演講稿。

1.你的職業夢想；

2.選擇的理由；

3.如何實現。

注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.至少需要使用一個本文中解析過的句式；

4.注意段落內的邏輯關系。

Dear teachers and fellow students,

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Thank you for listening.

寫作導引

? 激活思維

本次的寫作任務是寫一篇演講稿。在演講稿中，學生需要談談自己的職業夢想、選擇的理由及如何實現，并且需要使用賓語從句或定語從句。這些寫作要點和要求與所給語篇的主題語境是緊密相關的。我們可以通過整合同一主題的閱讀材料的內容和語言，梳理寫作思路和積累素材。

? 素材積累

本次的寫作任務是基于同一主題的語篇閱讀下的寫作，我們可以通過學習、模仿并運用閱讀中的語言表達，如詞塊和句型，積累寫作的語言素材。

（一）自我介紹，說明演講主題

1.I feel honored to give you a speech, whose topic is promoting public awareness of protecting the ocean, which is now a top priority.我很榮幸能為你們做一次演講，本次演講的主題是提升公眾保護海洋的意識，這是當前的重中之重。

2.It is my great honor to be here to share with you my opinions on “Be smart online learners”.我很榮幸能在這里與大家分享我對“做聰明的網絡學習者”的看法。

3.Today I want to talk to you about a very important subject.今天我想和你們討論一個非常重要的話題。

（二）陳述演講具體內容，表達觀點

1.The reason why we should protect our environment immediately can be listed as follows.我們應該立刻開始保護環境的理由列舉如下。

2.There is no doubt that/There is no denying that physical exercise is very important to our physical and mental health.毫無疑問的是，體育鍛煉對我們的身心健康很重要。

3.What I strongly suggest is that we should set aside some time and exercise on a regular basis, making it part of our daily routine.我強烈建議我們應該留出一些時間，定期鍛煉，讓它成為我們日常生活的一部分。

4.More importantly, it is helpful for us to consult reference books or ask teachers when we encounter some difficulties.更重要的是，當我們遇到困難的時候，查閱參考書或者問老師是非常有幫助的。

5.In addition, I think it would be beneficial if you could read some Chinese books and magazines, which will help you to improve your reading ability.此外，我認為如果你能夠閱讀一些中文書籍和雜志，這將會非常有益，將有助于提升你的閱讀能力。

6.If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.如果我們把這些事情做好，我們就能夠健康快樂地成長。

（三）總結演講內容，表達感謝

1.I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening! 我希望上面提到的能對你有所幫助！謝謝你的聆聽！

2.Let me conclude my speech with the following comments.讓我用以下評論來總結我的演講。

3.From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that learning English is really important to us.通過以上討論，我們可以得出結論，學習英語對我們而言非常重要。

4.All in all, devoting my life to exploring space is meaningful to me.總而言之，奉獻我的人生去探索太空對我而言是非常有意義的。

? 寫作支架

本次的寫作任務是寫一篇演講稿。根據任務中的要求，語篇結構可定為“點明演講主題+演講的具體內容+總結觀點”。文章的框架如下：

Dear teachers and fellow students,

I am Li Hua.It is my great honor to be here to share...with you（點明演講主題）

My dream career is to become...Since I was a child,...When I grow up, what I want to pursue is...In order to realize my dream,...There is no doubt that...In addition,...(演講的具體內容)

All in all, devoting my life to...is meaningful to me.(總結觀點）

Thank you for listening.

? 語篇過手

根據以上提供的主題、主題表達和語篇結構，寫一篇演講稿。第一段點明演講主題；第二段陳述演講的具體內容——你的職業夢想、選擇的理由及如何實現；第三段總結觀點。詞數80左右。

同時，學習運用前文閱讀中出現的賓語從句或者定語從句。尤其要注意文章的內在邏輯關系，以及語言的準確性、流利性和得體性。