My Mother, My Goddess

胡陸璐

My mother looks young.

Her eyes are very big and bright.

Her hair is black and short.

She always wears a pair of glasses.

She likes shopping and cooking.

She cooks nice food for us every day.

She keeps our home clean and tidy.

指導老師 姜琴琴：

孩子們感情真摯、細膩，于平凡中見真情。作品語言平實質樸，于細節中寫出父母對孩子無私的愛，也表達了孩子對父愛和母愛的贊美。主題鮮明，行文流暢。