My Remote Control Car

I have a remote control car.

My dad gives it to me on my birthday.

When I press the button， the car starts running.

It can go straight， and turn left or right.

It can sing a lot of songs.

It is really cute and cool.

江蘇省泰州市海陵學校三（2）班 楊宗軒

指導老師 胡 潔：

兩位同學能熟練運用“I’m ... I have ...”等句型，語句通順，條理清晰。第一位同學從自身出發，重點展示自己的興趣愛好；第二位同學則聚焦一輛遙控小汽車，凸顯對它的喜愛之情。