高考英語全國卷中感謝信寫作導練

李華軍

一、文體概述

感謝信是指在日常學習和生活中，受惠者給給予自己幫助、支持、關心等的人表示感謝的信件。所表達的情感必須真摯。信件通常包括以下內容：寫信的目的（表示感謝）→感謝的原因（詳細展開）→對方的作用和對自己的意義→再次表示感謝。

二、必備短語

1. take the opportunity 利用這個機會；趁機

2. It was really kind of you... 你真好……

3. return ones kindness回報某人的善意

4. with ones help/with the help of sb. 在某人的幫助下

5. express ones gratitude for 因……表示感激

6. recall those beautiful days回憶那些美好的日子

7. I sincerely appreciate your help. 我真誠地感激你的幫助。

8. thanks to/because of your encouragement由于你的鼓勵

9. be patient with sb./ have much patience with sb.對某人有耐心

10. Without your help， I wouldnt... 沒有你的幫助，我就不會……

三、套用句式

1. My true gratitude is beyond any words/description. 任何語言都無法表達我真摯的謝意。

2. We are very grateful for what you did for us. 非常感激你為我們做的一切。

3. I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English. 我寫這封信是為了表達你幫我提高英語口語的謝意。

4. Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 再次感謝你的盛情招待，我非常期待不久后見到你。

5. Id like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我謹借此機會感謝你給我及時的幫助和支持。

四、習作修改 下列習作中共有10處錯誤，每句最多兩處，請改正。

Dear Kelly，

Ive been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warmly help during my stay in England. Last week， I participated on the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed yourself in your country. We pay a visit to the city museum and some places of interest， which made me have a better understanding of the English society， culture or history. Of course， I also made many new friend. Whats more， I was lucky enough stay at your home. And Ill never forget the days we spent together. Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offer me as a gift， that is of great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make the full use of it.

Welcome to China when its convenience for you ！

Yours，

Li Hua

五、課堂練習

假定你是李華，你們學校和美國一所中學簽署了教師交流協議。在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請你給Sue寫封電子郵件，要點包括：

1. 對她表達感謝之意。

2. 介紹她離開后你自己及班里發生的事情。

3. 希望了解她的近況。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Sure，

Im Li Hua， one of your students in China.

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All the best.

Yours，

Li Hua

六、課外作業

假定你是李華，你被自己心儀的大學錄取了。請你給你的外教Mrs. Wilson寫封感謝信，內容包括：

1. 對老師的辛勤工作表示感謝；

2. 感謝在校期間老師對自己的教導；

3. 表達對老師的想念以及衷心祝愿。

注意：1.詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Mrs. Wilson，

Im glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college， which I have been dreaming of.

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

參考答案與范文

習作修改

李華上周在英國參加了學校組織的“文化交流周”活動，并住在Kelly家里。這是李華給Kelly寫的一封感謝信。

1. warmly→warm 修飾名詞warm，應用形容詞。

2. on→in因participate in為固定搭配，意為“參加”。

3. yourself→myself 因主語是I，應該是“我”玩得開心，故用myself。

4. pay→paid 由Last week可知，此處描述的是過去的事情，故用一般過去時。

5. or→and 了解的應是“文化與歷史”，而并非“文化或者歷史”。

6. friend→friends 根據前面的many可知此處應用名詞的復數形式。

7. 在stay前加to 因be lucky to do sth. 為固定搭配。

8. that→which 引導非限制性定語從句，只能用which指代先行詞the dictionary。

9. 把make后的the去掉 應make full use of為固定搭配，意為“充分利用”。

10. convenience→convenient 系動詞后接形容詞作表語。

課堂練習

Dear Sure，

Im Li Hua， one of your students in China. Its almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize！This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school？ Yesterday， we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well， and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood？

How is everything with you lately？ We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

All the best.

Yours，

Li Hua

課外作業

Dear Mrs. Wilson，

Im glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college， which I have been dreaming of. Firstly， Id like to express my gratitude for your excellent teaching and your care as well as love for me！Thank you for your encouraging words， which never fail to brighten my way ahead. Its you who cheered me up. Never will I forget what you said-- doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. Without your help， I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. And I really appreciate your instruction.

I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still too busy？ How I miss you， my beloved teacher！ Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

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