話題作文指導分析

楊慶春

[話題作文]

親愛的同學們，請你們以“My English Study”為題，談一下兩年來學習英語的心得體會。要點包括：你們在英語學習中所遇到的困難、解決的辦法以及學習感悟。

要求：

1. 語言流暢，表達準確，內容充實，可適當發揮;

2. 詞數不少于90詞。

[詞匯儲備]

★單詞

fail， master， carefully， difficulty， memory， realize， especially， something， language

★短語

listen to， keep on， give up， as much as possible， step by step， make great progress， the more...the more... ，

take note， pay attention to， take part in， be confident， be afraid of.

[句型薈萃]

★開頭句

1. Let me tell you something about it.

2. Since I have been in my middle school， I have learnt a lot in many ways especially in English.

3. English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well？

★主題句

1. The more carefully you listen， the more useful information you can get.

2. In order to learn English well， we are supposed to take part in all kinds of activities.

3. It is very important for us to be confident.

4. In English class， we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary.

5. When I entered the middle school， I had so many difficulties with my English.

★結尾句

1. In a word， only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

2. Without them， there will be no my success. Thank you！

3.Only in this way， can we improve our English.

4. I believe as long as we remember all these ways， we will surely make great progress in English in the end.

[思路導航]

本文是一篇命題式記敘文。文章要求以“My English Study”為題寫一篇英語短文，談談我們在英語學習中遇到的困難、解決的方法以及感悟。

此話題屬于語言學習范疇，學生有多年的英語學習經歷，有許多親身經歷的素材可寫，所以本文十分貼近學生生活實際。

就本文寫作而言，首先要研讀所給提示信息，了解寫作要求，掌握提示要點，篩選寫作素材。其次，要謀篇布局，合理安排文章段落，尤其是開頭和結尾段。最后要總結全文，做到首尾呼應，并作點評表達自己的感悟和提出合理建議?？傊?，在寫作時，同學們要重點描述自己的學習經歷，并作適當發揮。同時注意文章說理要清楚，語言表達要流暢，句式運用要多樣，文章用詞要準確。

人稱應以第一人稱為主。在講述自己過去學習經歷時需要用一般過去時態。

[參考范文]

My English Study

Since I have been in my middle school， I have learnt a lot in many ways especially in English. Now， let me tell you something.

When I entered my middle school， I was not very familiar with English because it was a foreign language. I didn’t have the courage to study it well. During my first year at school， my grade dropped so much that I was very concerned.

I didn’t know how to deal with it. However， my teachers helped me a lot. They chatted with me and encouraged me. It makes me realize that it’s easy to do anything if you want. After that， I started to work hard in order not to disappoint my teachers and parents.

At last， I succeed in learning English and achieved high grades in my English examination. I am really grateful to my teachers who have given me great help. Without them， there will be no my success. Thank you！