2019年全國中學生英語能力測評高二年級組初評試題選析（五）

VI. Error Correction （短文改錯） （共10處錯誤;每處錯誤1分，計10分）

There are altogether 10 errors in the following passage. The errors are： missing words， unnecessary words and wrong words. Please correct them as follows： for a missing word， mark its position with the sign “∧” and write it; for an unnecessary word， cross it out with the symbol “＼”; for a wrong word， underline it and write the correct word. An example of how to correct the error is provided below.

下文中共有10處錯誤，錯誤涉及缺詞、多詞與錯詞三種。請根據以下要求修改文中出現的錯誤：

缺詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并寫出該詞;

多詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉;

錯詞：在錯詞下劃一橫線，并寫出改正后的詞。

At one time， there are about 300 indigenous （本地的） languages spoken in Australia. Only about 90 are still spoken today.

European settlers arrived in Australia in the later 1700s. Experts say that colonization had a harmful effect in indigenous languages. Now， only about 60 of them is considered “alive” and in daily use. As if older members of tribes die， other languages are likely to pass away.

In the central Australian desert nearly Alice Springs， only 20 people are fluent in Pertame， a language native to the area. But now， children are being taught it in hopes that they will not die out.

Kathleen Bradshaw and Christobel Swan are among the indigenous elders working keep Pertame alive. Swan is one of the last remaining fluent speaker of Pertame， and is also the founder of Pertame School， opened two years ago. At Pertame School， children not only learn the language， but also cook traditional food， learn history and visit places considering holy.

【解析】 解答短文改錯題從整體上要看文章的時態和觀點以及句與句之間的邏輯關系，從細節上要看詞語的固定搭配、詞性、先行詞、連接詞和非謂語動詞等。下面我們來分析一下這篇短文的十處錯誤：

1. 時態。根據句意和at one time的提示，本句應是過去時態，故are改為were。

2. 形容詞。later意為“后來，以后”;late意為“末期;晚年”，此句中修飾年代應用late。

3. 固定搭配。effect on意為“對……的影響”。

4. 主謂一致。60 of them的謂語動詞要用復數形式。

5. 連詞。as意為“當”，而as if意為“好像”。根據句意這里應該用as。

6. 介詞。此處應用介詞near。

7. 代詞。此處是指前面的Pertame，且前面的it也是提示。

8. 狀語。keep Pertame alive做目的狀語，前面要加to。

9. 名詞。one of 后面的名詞要用復數形式。

10. 非謂語動詞。此處consider與places是被動關系，故應用considered。

VII. Writing （寫作） （共2題;A題滿分10分，B題滿分20分，計30分）

（A） Look at the poster about the rules of Photography Studio A. Please describe these rules in no fewer than 90 words.

（A） One possible version：

The Studio has a relaxed atmosphere， but there are some rules. Everyone is expected to take care of equipment because it's very expensive. To protect the equipment you have to leave your food outside the studio. You're allowed to wear casual clothes and drink coffee. But don't forget to put the money of the coffee in the box. You're permitted to bring one visitor but he / she must sign the visitors' book. Finally， using mobile phone is banned here since this disturbs people who are working. Hope you'll have a good time in the studio.

（94 words）

【解析】 本題的答題要點在于考生可以把所提供的要點合理組合，用正確的詞語和句式進行表達。首先考生應該仔細觀察圖片，理清所給信息：

地點：Photography Studio A

必須做到的事情：照看好設備;不能帶食物進去

可以做的事情：穿便服;喝咖啡（但是要付咖啡錢）;帶參觀者

絕對不可以做的事情：打電話

如果考生只是簡單進行要點羅列并不能得到高分，而一定要將要點組合排列使之更有層次性，并適當增添細節使文章內容更為豐富。如所給范文中就添加了為什么這樣做和為什么不可以這樣做的原因，另外范文還將可以做的事情的順序提前置于必須做的事情之后，使文章的行文更為流暢合理。

（B） Today， social networks have changed our lives a lot. We're used to visiting Weibo， Wechat or other online social networks. What do you think of this trend？ Write an essay in no fewer than 110 words to express your opinion.

（B） One possible version：

For many of us， visiting Weibo， Wechat， or other online social networks has become a regular part of our daily activities. However， we may not have noticed the significant ways that social networks have changed our lives.

First of all， they have changed the way we get our news. These days， we often only read the news or stories that our friends post online. Second， our relationships have changed. Now， it's easier to keep in touch with new friends and find old friends that we haven't seen for a long time. Third， many of us share thoughts with our online friends such as how we feel about failing exams.

Are these changes good or bad？ That's for each person to decide. But one thing is certain—as more people join social networks and as new networks continue to appear， we can expect more changes in the future.

（147 words）

【解析】 全國中學生英語能力測評的作文（B）篇一般都為一則要求考生根據相關話題提出觀點并進行論證的思辨性議論文。所給話題大多與考生的生活和學習息息相關，讓考生可以有感而發，有話可寫。在寫這種作文的時候，考生要注意在第一段旗幟鮮明地提出自己的觀點，然后在接下來的二、三段對自己的觀點進行論證，最后一段進行總結。在寫文章的時候，考生要注意使用自己熟悉的詞語，并盡量采用豐富的句式以提高自己的作文檔次。