2020年考研英語（一）作文試題評析

賈從永

Directions：

The student union of your university has assigned you to inform the international students about an upcoming singing contest. Write a notice in about 100 words.

Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not use your own name in the notice. （10 points）

2020年考研英語（一）的小作文考查通知的寫法，這是從2005年開始考小作文以來的第四次[前三次為2010英語（一）、2015英語（二）、2016英語（一）]。從格式上說，一則通知包括四個(gè)部分：1）標(biāo)題，位于通知上方的正中央，一般可寫Notice;2）日期，寫在標(biāo)題右下方;3）正文，一般寫三個(gè)段落;4）落款，寫在正文之下中間偏右的位置，本文落款可寫The Student Union。

這則通知的內(nèi)容是告知外國留學(xué)生將要舉行一次歌唱比賽。我們把這則通知的正文寫成三段：第一段表明寫這則通知的目的——告知留學(xué)生將要舉行一次歌唱比賽，歡迎他們參加;第二段介紹這次歌唱比賽的一些詳細(xì)信息，比如比賽的時(shí)間（要具體到幾點(diǎn)幾分）、地點(diǎn)、形式、評分、獎(jiǎng)品等;第三段號召留學(xué)生參加歌唱比賽，并告訴他們報(bào)名和聯(lián)系方式。

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Notice

Dec. 21， 2019

A singing contest is going to be held next month to enrich the campus life of the international students. You are welcome to participate！

The event will take place in the auditorium on the main campus from 6：00 to 8：00 p.m. on January 19 （Sunday）， 2020. Singing in any language is okay. A panel of six judges will rate the performance of each contestant on a scale ranging from 1 to 10. The prize for the top three winners is an earphone worth $200.

If you are fond of singing， please email us for an entry form by January 12， 2020. Our email address is studentunion@yahoo.com.

The Student Union （113 words）

Directions：

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture. In your essay， you should

1） describe the picture briefly，

2） interpret the implied meaning， and

3） give your comments.

在下筆寫漫畫作文之前，我們要仔細(xì)觀察漫畫，因?yàn)榕迓嫷脑⒁鈱τ趯懞寐嬜魑闹陵P(guān)重要。在上面這幅圖畫中，左邊的女生正在認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，心里想著“盡早完成才放心”;而右邊的那個(gè)男生卻坐在書桌前磨磨蹭蹭，想著“不到最后不動(dòng)手”。我們結(jié)合圖畫下方的“習(xí)慣”二字，可以看出，這幅漫畫的寓意是“養(yǎng)成良好習(xí)慣（對學(xué)習(xí)）很重要”。

這篇作文可以寫三個(gè)段落。第一段先描述漫畫，然后指出漫畫的寓意。描述圖畫要簡潔，一般兩句話足矣。第二段論述習(xí)慣對學(xué)習(xí)的重要影響。我們可以從正反兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行論證：先指出不良的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，比如拖延，會(huì)造成學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)成績不佳;反之，良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣有助于學(xué)業(yè)成功，比如，總是留出時(shí)間先完成作業(yè)是學(xué)習(xí)成績優(yōu)異的秘訣。第三段先總結(jié)全文，指出好習(xí)慣不但對取得好成績重要，對長大后過上有意義的生活也很重要。最后建議大家養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣，改掉壞習(xí)慣。

下面請看參考范文：

In the picture above， a girl is working assiduously， trying to finish her homework as soon as possible. A boy， however， is procrastinating before his desk， waiting until the last minute to study. Obviously， the picture is aimed at emphasizing the importance of good habits for success at school.

Indeed， habits play a key role in a students academic performance. Some students struggle in school without understanding why. More often than not， this is because they have some bad habits. The most common is procrastination. They always put off their homework till the last minute， preferring to eat snacks， watch TV or play a game before settling down to their homework. Inevitably， they pay a heavy price for putting things off. Good study habits， on the other hand， contribute tremendously to academic success. For instance， always setting aside time to finish homework first is a recipe for academic excellence.

Good habits are not only important for our school performance， but for living a fulfilling life as an adult. So its imperative that we build good habits and get rid of bad ones. （186 words）

語言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. A boy， however， is procrastinating before his desk， waiting until the last minute to study. （然而，一個(gè)男孩正在課桌前磨磨蹭蹭，等到最后一刻才學(xué)習(xí)。）waiting是現(xiàn)在分詞短語，作狀語，表示伴隨動(dòng)作。

2. Indeed， habits play a key role in a students academic performance. （確實(shí)，習(xí)慣在學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)成績中起著關(guān)鍵的作用。）indeed確實(shí)。副詞indeed用在句首時(shí)，表示支持或強(qiáng)調(diào)剛說過的話。

3. More often than not， this is because they have some bad habits.（這往往是因?yàn)樗麄冇幸恍牧?xí)慣。）more often than not往往，多半，通常。

4. They always put off their homework till the last minute， preferring to eat snacks， watch TV or play a game before settling down to their homework.（他們總是把作業(yè)拖到最后一刻，喜歡先吃零食、看電視或者玩一會(huì)兒游戲才專心寫作業(yè)。）settle down to安下心來做，專心致志于。

5. For instance， always setting aside time to finish homework first is a recipe for academic excellence.（例如，總是留出時(shí)間先完成作業(yè)是學(xué)習(xí)成績優(yōu)異的秘訣。）a recipe for（某事的）秘訣。

6. So its imperative that we build good habits and get rid of bad ones.（所以我們必須培養(yǎng)好習(xí)慣、改掉壞習(xí)慣。）Its imperative （that）必須做某事，后面的從句多用虛擬語氣。