2021年高考文體寫作系列4：求職信

江蘇鹽城射陽縣陳洋中學 溫從秀

素養解讀

求職信是寫信人就某一職位向收信人提出請求的信件。它通常包括三部分內容：1.闡述招聘信息的來源與所申請的職位；2.簡述個人信息；3.強調自己的能力并請求給予面試機會。求職信的語言屬于正式用語，要用詞簡潔、準確，語氣禮貌、自信，所給信息要具有可信度。

素材金庫

一、常用詞塊

1.主修……專業major in...

2.（可）勝任…… be qualified for...

3.精通……/對……掌握熟練have a good command/knowledge of...

4.申請 apply for

5.與……相處融洽get along well with...

6.對……樂觀 be optimistic about...

7.和諧的人際關系a harmonious interpersonal relationship

8.滿足你們的資歷要求meet your qualifications

9.在……方面有豐富的經驗have rich experience in.../be experienced in...

10.在你方便的時候進行面談have a personal interview at your convenience

11.開闊眼界 broaden one's vision/horizons

12.責任感/成就感 a sense of responsibility/achievement

二、常用句式

1.從你們的廣告中我得知你們正在招聘一名……

I learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a(n)...

2.如果你們能夠給我提供這樣的機會，我將十分感激。

I would really appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.

3.一旦被錄用，我將竭盡所能把工作做好。

Once hired,I will devote myself to the post.

4.我盼望著你盡快回復。

I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

5.用電話或電子郵件聯系我。

I can be reached by telephone/email.

三、寫作模板

Dear_______,

I have just read in the newspaper that_______.①I am therefore writing to be_______.2○

I am _______.③My name is _______and I am studying _______.④I can _______.⑤As for a second language,I can _______.I have some working experience as _______.⑥ I am sure I'll_______.⑦

You can _______.8○I can visit your office at any time for a talk or an interview.

Best wishes.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ping

①寫信背景

②交代寫信目的

③～④自我介紹

⑤～⑦介紹個人優勢

⑧表達期待

考題回放

假定你叫李華，你校外籍教師Angel暑假期間準備在本市開一家西餐店，要招聘若干名暑期兼職人員。請根據右圖，給Angel寫一份求職申請信，申請該工作。

Wanted!

4 middle school students

Do service work and act as a translator

Healthy and helpful

Contact:wfpub@qmail.com

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：住宿accommodation

Dear Angel,

I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply for the job.

I am looking forward to your early reply!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

寫作指導

本篇書面表達從命題形式上來看，屬于圖文結合類的寫作，要求考生根據所給的廣告給西餐店寫一封信，申請該工作。從文體上來看，屬于應用文寫作中的申請信寫作。

內容分析：

文體書信體——求職申請信申請事宜寫信目的個人簡介期待回復個人發揮成為西餐店的暑期工I am writing to be...apply for the job/position,have a good command of English,be fluent in spoken English,be free during the summer vacation,offer me some valuable work experience,the opportunity to practise my spoken English,acting as a translator,making friends and communicating with foreigners I am looking forward to your early reply.適當增加相關細節

佳作賞析

Dear Angel,

I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply for the job.

As a Senior 3 student,I have a good command of English and I am fluent in spoken English.I shall be free during the summer vacation.So I have decided to find something interesting to do and I think the job is the very thing I'd like to do.

The job will benefit me a lot.It'll offer me some valuable work experience as well as the opportunity to practise my spoken English by acting as a translator for you.Besides,I really enjoy making friends and communicating with foreigners.I would appreciate it if I'm offered the job.I believe I can be of great help to you.

I am looking forward to your early reply!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

本篇范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點。正文部分包括了寫作背景和意圖、個人身份、個人優勢、求職態度等基本要素。文章的要點安排也較符合邏輯。文章使用了一些基本的話題表達，語言較為得體和準確。段落中心句“The job will benefit me a lot.”和高級句式 “I would appreciate it if...”的使用增加了文章的得分點。

寫作評估

評價項目 評價等級 問題診斷 改進措施書寫質量 整潔美觀 偶有涂改，字跡可辨 涂改較多，字跡難辨內容要點 要點全面 基本涵蓋寫作任務 寫作要點遺漏較多行文邏輯 流暢連貫 基本流暢連貫 行文混亂詞匯豐富，句式多樣詞匯較為豐富，句式有一定變化表達單調，詞不達意語法使用 準確無誤 有些許錯誤 錯誤頻出，語言混亂綜合評分語言表達

再試鋒芒

假定你是李華,你從某網站上得知當地的博物館正在招募暑假英語講解員,請你根據以下提示,給博物館負責外國游客接待的Mr Jason寫一封英文求職信。內容包括:

1.表達意愿；

2.求職理由；

3.懇請獲準。

注意:

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯:講解員interpreter

Dear Mr Jason,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua