李瓊霞
【寫作任務】
隨著科技的發展,機器人將逐漸走進我們的生活。請發揮你的想象力,以“Robots in the future”為題,介紹一下你心目中理想的未來機器人,要點包括:
1. 未來機器人的重要性;
2. 未來機器人的特性;
3. 未來機器人的功能。
【寫作指導】
1. 審題定調
這是一篇典型的想象類文章,是一種創造性的寫作,屬于開放式的作文。這類寫作通常只給出一個主題或是一些不完整的素材,讓學生在此基礎上發揮想象力,自由發揮與創造。要寫好這類文章,首先要從實際生活出發,借助已有的知識展開合理的、豐富的想象;其次,寫作內容要具體,要根據題目的要求和提示豐富文章內容,切記說空話。
2. 確定主體內容
根據題目要求,文章應包括以下內容:首先,要點明機器人在人類未來生活中的重要性;然后發揮想象力描述一下未來機器人的特性;最后說明未來機器人的各種功能。
針對這篇習作,可以把全文分為四段:
第一段:提出機器人在人類未來生活中的重要性。
第二段:描述未來機器人的特性。
第三段:舉例說明未來機器人的功能。
第四段:總結未來機器人的發展會越來越好。
3. 確定人稱、時態
人稱為第三人稱;時態以一般將來時為主。
4. 常用表達
①表示事物的重要性
It will play an essential role in our daily life.
The importance of... can not be ignored.
It plays an important part in...
②表示物品的外形特征等特性
It looks like...
They are in the shape of different objects.
They can become... according to peoples various needs.
③表示事物的功能作用
What makes it outstanding is its great functions.
It is designed to...
It can do so many things for human beings, including...
【范文展示】
Robots in the future
With the development of science, robots in the future will play an essential role in our daily life.
Future robots are not only like human beings but also in the shape of different objects. For example, they can become a plane or a ship according to peoples various needs. Whats more, future robots will get energy from the sun, which is quite environmentally friendly and energy-saving.
What makes future robots outstanding is their great functions. They can do so many things for human beings, including doing all the housework at home, working as a tutor and playing with children. In addition, they can sort out the rubbish, recycling it wisely.
With the breakthrough of technology, I strongly believe that future robots will become better and better.