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1. 睡覺前我經(jīng)常聽音樂來放松。

【誤】I often relax by listen to music before bed.

【正】I often relax by listening to music before bed.

【析】此句中by是介詞，表示方式，介詞后面可以跟名詞、代詞、動(dòng)詞?ing形式等。

2. 這位老人從網(wǎng)上學(xué)會(huì)了做蛋糕。

【誤】The old man learned to make cakes from online.

【正】The old man learned to make cakes online.

【析】online可作形容詞，也可作副詞。此句中online是副詞，前面不需要加介詞。

3. 我父母不喜歡吃海鮮。

【誤】My parents dislike to eat seafood.

【正】My parents dislike eating seafood.

【析】dislike作動(dòng)詞時(shí)意為“不喜愛；厭惡”，后面跟動(dòng)詞時(shí)一般要用動(dòng)詞?ing形式。

4. 她對(duì)這部電影感到厭煩，所以離開了。

【誤】She got boring with the movie so she left.

【正】She got bored with the movie so she left.

【析】boring意為“沒趣的；令人厭倦（或厭煩）的”，通常表示事物的性質(zhì)或特征；bored意為“厭倦的；煩悶的”，通常用來描述人的感受。

5. 他正在車站等他叔叔。

【誤】He is waiting his uncle at the station.

【正】He is waiting for his uncle at the station.

【析】wait意為“等待”，wait for sb. / sth.表示“等待某人或某物”，wait to do sth.表示“等待做某事”。

6. 我和妹妹都在學(xué)習(xí)國畫。

【誤】Both my sister and I am learning Chinese painting.

【正】Both my sister and I are learning Chinese painting.

【析】both... and... 表示“兩者都；不僅……而且……”。當(dāng)連接的兩個(gè)并列成分在句中作主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞常用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

7. 盡管螺螄粉聞起來很糟糕，但是很多人喜歡吃。

【誤】Though luosifen smells terrible， but many people enjoy eating it.

【正】Though luosifen smells terrible， many people enjoy eating it.

【正】Luosifen smells terrible， but many people enjoy eating it.

【析】though作從屬連詞引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句時(shí)，一般不能與并列連詞but連用。

8. 蘇珊送給杰克一個(gè)火車模型作為生日禮物。

【誤】Susan gave a model train for Jack as a birthday gift.

【正】Susan gave a model train to Jack as a birthday gift.

【析】“給某人某物”要用give sb. sth.或give sth. to sb.。

9. 這是我父親最貴的一件外套。

【誤】This is my father’s the most expensive coat.

【正】This is my father’s most expensive coat.

【析】形容詞最高級(jí)前有形容詞性物主代詞或名詞所有格等修飾時(shí)，省去定冠詞the。

10. 只要媽媽同意，我就會(huì)參加海倫的派對(duì)。

【誤】As long as my mother will say yes， I will go to Helen’s party.

【正】As long as my mother says yes， I will go to Helen’s party.

【析】as long as引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句時(shí)，若主句為一般將來時(shí)，從句中常使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來時(shí)。

11. 今天的報(bào)紙上有一些好消息。

【誤】There are some good news in today’s newspaper.

【正】There is some good news in today’s newspaper.

【析】news意為“新聞；消息”，是不可數(shù)名詞。當(dāng)它單獨(dú)用作主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞必須用單數(shù)形式。

（作者單位：河北省滄州市教育局石油分局機(jī)關(guān)中學(xué)）