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幾乎每一個老師都強調學生應當記筆記, 然而學生對此看法不一, 請閱讀下表內容, 寫一篇短文。

詞數：120左右。

學生習作：

As we all know, almost every teacher asks their students to take notes in the① class. However, different students have different opinions.

Some students think taking notes itself is a means of strength② knowledge. Besides, taking notes makes it is③ possible for students to go over their past knowledge. Whats more, taking notes helps students to know the system of knowledge.

On the other hand, some students think taking notes makes students unable to concentrate on listening to the teacher, which have④ a bad effect on their study. Whats worse, it spends⑤ a lot of time to take notes.

In my opinion, taking notes is useful for our study, but we must pay more attention to listening to the teacher. If necessary, we can learn to take notes brief⑥.

修改說明：①此處不表示“在教室里”而表示“在課堂上”, 因此應去掉the。②of為介詞,后面應接動名詞作賓語, 因此strength應改為strengthening。③此處it為形式賓語, 因此is為多余詞, 應刪去。④此處which代表整個主句內容, 因此謂語動詞應用單數, have應改為has。⑤此處表示“花費時間”且用it作形式主語, 因此spends應改為takes。⑥take notes為行為動詞, 應用副詞修飾, brief應改為briefly。

點評：本篇書面表達習作為觀點介紹文,小作者根據寫作要求從支持記筆記者觀點、反對記筆記者觀點和自己觀點等角度介紹文意, 文章條理清晰, 思路明確, 有較強的整體美感。As we all know, However, Besides, Whats more, On the other hand, Whats worse, In my opinion of me, but等過渡性詞匯的準確貼切使用使文章敘述更清楚, 思路更連貫, 邏輯更嚴密。定語從句、賓語從句、非限制性定語從句、并列句、條件狀語從句等高級表達方式的運用使文章表達方式更多, 表達效果更好, 表達檔次更高。所有這些成為本文不可缺的亮點。然而美中不足的是, 本文也存在一些語言語法方面的錯誤, 如冠詞錯誤、非謂語動詞錯誤、多余動詞錯誤、主謂語一致錯誤、易混動詞誤用錯誤、形容詞副詞混用錯誤, 表明小作者語言表達能力有待于進一步提高。然而從總體上講本文仍屬一篇成功之作, 值得廣大讀者借鑒。

參考答案：

As we all know, almost every teacher asks their students to take notes in class. However, different students have different opinions.

Some students think taking notes itself is a means of strengthening knowledge. Besides, taking notes makes it possible for students to go over their past knowledge. Whats more, taking notes helps students to know the system of knowledge.

On the other hand, some students think taking notes makes students unable to concentrate on listening to the teacher, which has a bad effect on their study. Whats worse, it takes a lot of time to take notes.

In my opinion, taking notes is useful for our study, but we must pay more attention to listening to the teacher. If necessary, we can learn to take notes briefly.