My Room

I have a nice room. Come with me， please. Look， it’s white. There are some red stars and cartoon pictures on the wall. How lovely! There is a yellow desk， a yellow chair， a pink bed， a brown bookcase and a black piano in the room. My bed is small but soft. Near the bed， you can see a big bookcase. Many good books are in it. I like reading near my bookcase. It’s interesting. Look， that’s my piano. I play the piano at seven in the evening every day. What a nice room! I like it very much. What about you?

214181 江蘇省無(wú)錫市前洲鎮(zhèn)中心小學(xué)四（4）班

指導(dǎo)老師 馮麗紅

作者一開(kāi)始用nice一詞概括介紹了她房間的特點(diǎn)。為什么說(shuō)她的房間漂亮呢？我們帶著一顆好奇的心往下看吧。

“多可愛(ài)啊！”這是一個(gè)感嘆句。從這句話，我們可以體會(huì)到作者很喜歡墻上貼著的紅星和卡通畫(huà)。

interesting寫(xiě)出了作者在書(shū)柜旁看書(shū)的樂(lè)趣。

用一個(gè)單詞look，把讀者的視線一下從書(shū)柜轉(zhuǎn)移到了鋼琴上。

用了一個(gè)感嘆句，既前后呼應(yīng)，又抒發(fā)了作者對(duì)房間的喜愛(ài)之情。