“提出希望或呼吁”文段寫法

一、句式模版

寫這類要點的文段時可能用到以下句式：

1. Actually， I do hope that... can / would/ will do sth..../ 事實上，我真的希望……會做某事

2. Please think about my idea/ proposal/ suggestion that... 請考慮一下我的想法/提議/建議

3. It is high time that sb. did/ should do... We need... 該是……做某事的時候了，我們需要……

4. Let’s do sth. so as to/ in order to do... 為了……，讓我們做……

5. It is time for sb. to do sth.該是某人做……的時候了。

6. Do sth. and sb./ sth. will...做……，……將會（就會）……

7. I wish sb. to do sth... 我希望某人做……

8. It would be a good/great idea to... 做……是個好主意。

9. We would be appreciate it if sb. can... 如果某人做……，我們將會不勝感激。

10. Do not hesitate to... 別猶豫，做……

二、段落模版

1. We do hope that the local government sets a limit on the number of the tourists to the historical sites everyday. Besides， tourists should try to avoid visiting the sites in the peak seasons and follow the local guidance. 我們真希望當地政府限制每天游覽歷史古跡游客的數量。此外，游客應盡量避免在高峰期游覽景點，同時還要聽從當地的指導。

2. Parents， please think about my idea that parents should not look at their kids’ diaries without their permission. If you want to learn about them， it would be a good idea to talk with them like friends. We would appreciate it if parents make every effort to communicate with their children. 父母們，請考慮一下我的建議：父母未經孩子許可不要看他們的日記。如果你想了解他們，與他們像朋友一樣交談將會是個好主意。我們很欣賞那些盡一切努力去和孩子們溝通的父母。

3. As food safety is closely related to every one of us， I sincerely hope that the manufacturers should take effective measures to ensure the safety of everything they produce. What’s important， it is high time that the government should play a significant role in the supervision of food safety and punish those who fail to produce safe foods. 食物安全關系我們每一個人，我真心地希望生產廠家能采取有效措施保證他們生產的每一樣食物的安全。而且，該是政府監管食物安全和嚴懲那些生產不安全的廠家的時候了。

三、真題例析

深圳二模：表達你對他（劉風）的希望。（2010屆）

思路分析：從閱讀材料和前3個要點來看，你應該希望劉風能正確面對考試失敗，不要被失敗擊倒，要振作起來，做一個充滿活力的人，可以用祈使句來加強語氣。

參考范文：Liu Feng， I really hope that you can lead an active and happy life. Be brave and confident and you will succeed one day. Just as the saying goes， failure is the mother of success. So do not hesitate to try again.

四、段落練習

1. 呼吁中學生提高安全意識。

2. 希望老師要多表揚、少批評學生。

3. 希望政府能采取措施治理環境污染問題。

五、綜合練習

閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

London hosted the Olympic Games in 1908， 1948 and 2012. The 2012 Summer Olympics made London the first city to have hosted the modern Games of three Olympiads. London is the only city in the United Kingdom to have ever hosted the Olympics. The United States is the only country to have hosted Summer Olympics on more occasions than the UK.

The opening ceremony of the 2012 Summer Olympics was held on 27 July and called“Isles of Wonder”. Oscar—winning director Danny Boyle was its artistic director， with the music directors being the electronic music duo Rick Smith and Karl Hyde of Underworld. During the Games， Michael Phelps became the most decorated Olympic athlete of all time， winning his 22nd medal. Great Britain achieved its highest record of gold medals since 1908， finishing third in the medal table. Saudi Arabia， Qatar and Brunei entered female athletes for the first time， meaning every country has sent a female competitor to at least one Olympic Games. With women’s boxing included， the Games became the first at which every sport had female competitors.

“Inspire a Generation” has been revealed as the official motto for the London Olympics. With the Games just 100 days away， the slogan was officially announced at a ceremony at Kew Gardens by London organizing committee （LOCOG） chairman Lord Coe and chief executive Paul Deighton.

Unpaid volunteers known as Games Makers performed a variety of tasks before and during the Games. Sebastian Coe said in February 2012，“Our Games Makers will contribute a total of around eight million volunteer hours during the Games and the Games simply wouldn’t happen without them”.

[寫作內容]

1. 以約30詞概括短文的主要內容；

2. 以約120個詞就“倫敦奧運會‘激勵一代人’的口號”發表看法，要點包括：

（1）你是否贊成“一位著名而偉大的運動員能激勵一代人”的說法；

（2）說說體育運動對身體健康的重要性；

（3）呼吁同學們要積極參加體育運動。

[寫作要求]

作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

[評分標準]

概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。

參考范文

段落練習

1. Actually， I do hope middle school students will pay more attention to their personal safety because safety is the first thing in our life. Try to be cautious and careful about the potential dangers around us and protect ourselves from being hurt.

2. Dear teachers， please think about my suggestion of more praise and less criticism to your students， which will benefit teachers and students a lot. It’s time for you to praise your students on their progress. That way， you will build up their confidence.

3. It is high time that the government took effective measures to settle the problem of environmental pollution. People would be pleased if the government could take the public health into consideration and create a cleaner and more pleasant environment for the public.

綜合練習

London hosted its third summer Olympics with an excellent opening ceremony and the charming slogan “Inspire a Generation”. Besides， women’s boxing was first included and the volunteers contributed a lot to the Games.

Personally， I fully agree with the statement that an excellent and great athlete can inspire a generation simply because young people can learn a lot such as perseverance and hard work as well as determination from their sport idols， which will surely inspire them a lot. What’s more， the athlete or medalist does encourage more young people to take part in the game he / she plays.

Actually， sports or exercise plays a very significant role in people’s health. For one thing， doing sports can certainly build you up. In addition， taking exercise will strengthen your muscles， which keeps you fit and healthy. It can also keep you away from diseases like high blood pressure， heart attack， and diabetes as well.

Senior students have a lot of school tasks to do， so I do hope that we students take an active part in doing sports， which helps to relax ourselves and enable us to put our heart into our study. Therefore， boys and girls， do not hesitate to take exercise to stay young and healthy.

（作者單位：河源市東源中學）

責任編校 蔣小青