
劉本龍,杭州市學科帶頭人,對高考有深入研究。在《中小學英語教學與研究》《英語世界》《瘋狂英語》《英語周報》等省級和國家級報刊上發表文章300多篇,參與編寫英語教輔資料書8本。
書面表達作為高考試卷中的主觀性試題,其分值占全卷的1/6到1/5,歷年來備受廣大考生關注。書面表達主要考些什么?筆者分析了近三年全國各省、直轄市的高考書面表達題,歸納出常考的十類話題。
一、近三年高考書面表達內容的主要類型統計表
從表格可以看出,高考書面表達的內容貼近考生實際生活,寫作話題真實,讓考生有內容可寫,也給考生留下了一定的發揮空間。話題的熟悉度和相對的開放性使各層次考生均能發揮自己的寫作水平,展示其語言運用能力。2014年有兩道書面表達題要求考生利用想象力和創造力完成,符合實施素質教育,培養考生創新能力的要求。
二、書面表達備考建議
1. 了解近三年全國各地高考書面表達所涉及的內容和體裁,把握高考動向,做到心中有數,考試不慌張。
2. 根據每年高考作文不同的題材和題型,選幾篇相應的范文,大量反復閱讀這些范文,總結其行文模式和基本句型。對常用的行文規范和基本句型要爛熟于心,并靈活地運用到作文練習中,提高寫作水平。
3. 每周進行兩篇限時作文訓練,對照老師給出的書面表達的范文,看看自己文章中的要點是否齊全,結構是否完整,時態是否正確,銜接是否連貫,等等,不斷修改,寫作能力就會不斷提升。
4. 翻看以前寫的作文,找出問題,并分析問題的原因,這樣可以避免在高考中犯同樣的錯誤。
三、2015年書面表達題猜想
1.生活哲理類
昨天為了慶祝母親節,高二(3)班開展了以“感恩父母”為主題的班會活動(自制禮物、給父母寫信、“感動父母”金點子比賽等)。假如你是校英語報記者李華,請按下列要點用英語寫一則100~120詞的新聞報道。標題已給出,不計入總詞數。
注意:(1)時間、地點、活動宗旨、活動等內容;
(2)同學們的表現;
(3)對本次活動的感想或評論。
范文:
Students of Class 3 Grade 2 held a class meeting in the classroom to celebrate Mother's Day yesterday, the theme of which is “expressing thanks to our parents.” Apart from making gifts by themselves, students wrote letters to their parents and organized a competition in which the one who came up with the best way to move his or her parents would win.
Students made gifts and wrote letters with concentrated attention. Some even did theses things with tears in theirs eyes. Besides, a great many good ideas were put forward to help their parents.
This wonderful activity gives us teenagers a great opportunity to learn to care about our parents. From the activity, we learn that it's time for us to do something for our parents in return for their great love.
2.校園學習和生活類
最近,關于高考改革,有的地方出臺了關于降低高考英語總分的決定。你認為降低高考英語總分有必要嗎?請簡要闡述你的觀點,并說明你的理由。
要求:詞數120左右。
范文:
Recently, the reform of the college entrance exam has been carried out in many provinces, some of which announced that they would decrease the scores of English exam, causing a heated discussion in public.
From my point of view, it is an inevitable tendency that we should focus more on Chinese rather than English. Thus, I believe it is necessary to decrease the scores of English exam. For one thing, as Chinese, we must spend more time in learning our mother tongue as well as Chinese traditional culture. For another thing, there is an obvious difference between the English education between cities and villages. Decreasing the scores of English exam can show the further equality of the college entrance exam.
To sum up, we are looking forward to a more reasonable and fair way of selecting out the talents.
3. 社會熱點類
一則關于溫州市區某小區的住戶們花26萬元買來“高音炮”對抗廣場舞音樂的消息在網上廣為流傳。假如你是高中生李華,你也是廣場舞噪音污染的受害者,請寫一封投訴信給相關部門,反應此問題。信的內容應包括以下幾點:
(1)廣場舞噪音污染現狀;
(2)廣場舞噪音污染帶來的危害;
(3)提出合理化建議或解決方案。
要求:詞數120左右。
范文:
Dear Sir,
I am writing the letter to complain about the noise pollution from the square dancing in our district. Every day, various teams of middle-aged and old people come to the square for dancing, with the loud music on all day long. The people living nearby can hardly stand it.
The noise pollution from the square dancing has a bad influence on our life. It is known to us all that the noise pollution may cause great harm to peoples hearing. Whats worse, when we want to go to sleep in the evening, we will surely be disturbed by the loud noise, which can have bad effects on our work and study the next day, especially for the students who will take part in the college entrance examination just like me. Therefore, I do hope the problem can be solved soon.
From my point of view, the government should make some rules about the noise pollution and punish the noise makers. For the people who want to dance, they may be allowed to dance in a certain place in a certain time. I will appreciate it very much if you will consider my suggestions.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 學生活動類
2014年12月31日,新華中學在校音樂廳舉辦了迎新晚會。在晚會上全校師生同臺演出,例如唱歌、跳舞、演小品、變魔術等,最后齊唱歌曲《明天會更好》。假如你是校英語報記者李華,請按下列要點用英語寫一則120~150詞的新聞報道。
(1)時間、地點、人物、活動;
(2)師生們的反應;
(3)對事件進行評論。
參考詞匯:小品witty skits 魔術magic tricks
范文:
On the evening of December 31, 2010, the party to celebrate the New Year was held in the Concert Hall of XinHua High School. Working together on the stage, the teachers and students presented us with a lot of wonderful and interesting performances. For example, they cooperated with each other to perform witty skits as well as singing and dancing. They also played magic tricks, which came as a surprise. What amazing programs! All the evening the audience couldnt help laughing!
At the end of the party, all the performers sang the song “tomorrow will be better”. All the people present at the party thought highly of it ,saying that they would never forget it.
The New Year party is a great success. Undoubtedly, the party conveys us the message that this is a whole brand new year.
5.想象創新類
每個人都希望擁有一所溫馨、舒適的房子。你想擁有什么樣的房子呢?請用英語描述你夢想中的房子。
注意:詞數120左右。
可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
范文:
My dream house is a villa which lies on the coast. There are two yards in the villa. The front yard is a garden with many beautiful flowers and plants for the four seasons. There is a swimming pool in the back yard, as my family are fond of swimming. On the first floor, there is a big hall when you enter the gate.
On the right of the hall is a sitting room where we can relax, have a rest, watch TV and enjoy entertainments. On the left there is a computer room and a study belonging to me. The villa will be equipped with the modern equipment, such as security alarms controlled by computers, vision phones, automatic doors. That house is what I dream.
6.環保類
今年以來,我國東部多地出現持續霧霾天氣(smog),極大地影響了人們的健康與生活。請根據提示,寫一篇文章。
(1)描述目前的霧霾現象及其危害;
(2)分析霧霾形成的原因;
(3)提出至少兩條治理霧霾天氣的建議。
注意:上下文連貫,行文流暢;詞數120左右。
范文:
Recently, the smog has occurred continually in most parts of East China, which has done great harm to peoples daily life. A large number of traffic accidents happen on account of the heavy smog weather and quite a lot of flights have to be put off. Besides, more and more people become ill because of the poisonous air caused by the smog.
What leads to the smog whether? For on thing, the various pollutions especially the air pollution caused by the factories and cars should be to blame. For another thing, the earth is becoming warmer and warmer due to humans activities such as cutting down trees and putting more carbon dioxide.
Its time we should realize the importance of protecting the environment and take some measures to reduce the smog weather. The government should make some laws to protect the environment. Everyone should be encouraged to go to work or school with the public traffic instead of private cars, such as the bus and the underground. Together, individuals can make a difference.