Should Teenagers be allowed to choose their own clothes？

竇睿

Nowadays， more and more middle school students are not happy about their parents choices because their parents dont allow them to choose their own clothes. This brings about a lot of worries to the teenagers. I know the feelings they get. I also dont agree with their parents. I think teenagers are growing up and they have had their own thought. They should be allowed to make their own decisions.

Parents may be afraid of their children to be bad in grades. They think their children might not pay attention to the lessons when they choose their own clothes. In my opinion， its not serious to do that， they just want independent and to tell others they are old enough to make a decision.

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