兩類常見命題形式的書面表達指導與仿真練習

陳光偉

第一類有要點

真題鏈接

（2018年全國Ⅰ卷）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發郵件向你詢問有關習俗。請你回復郵件，內容包括：

1. 到達時間;

2. 合適的禮物;

3. 餐桌禮儀。

注意：1. 詞數100左右;2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

寫作點撥

此類別需嚴格按照要點順序寫作，每個要點需要有一定的拓展，必要時每個要點單獨成段。建議在第一段寫清楚書信目的。

仿真練習

（一）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry參加學校的書簽設計比賽，想在書簽上加入中國元素，發郵件向你詢問。請你回復郵件，內容包括：

1. 列舉部分中國元素;

2. 你最喜歡的一項;

3. 預祝成功。

注意：1. 詞數100左右;

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

（二）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry發郵件向你詢問有關筷子的習俗。請你回復郵件介紹，內容包括：

1. 形狀、材質;

2. 用途;

3. 注意事項。

注意：1. 詞數100左右;

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

（三）假定你是李華，本校英語報正在醞釀改版，請你給校報編輯寫一封郵件，表達你的觀點。內容包括：

1. 建議去除的欄目;

2. 建議增加關于中國文化的欄目;

3. 增刪的理由。

注意：1. 詞數100左右;

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

第二類無要點

真題鏈接

（2016年全國Ⅰ卷）假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：1. 詞數100左右;

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

寫作點撥

此類別可發揮空間較大，考生應在完成情景說明中所有寫作要點的前提下，多思考如何通過增加相關性大的細節提升寫作的真實性。

仿真練習

（一）假定你是李華，你通過學校推薦將作為交換生暑假去澳大利亞珀斯（Perth）學習，請給寄宿家庭（host family）Mr. Thomas寫一封郵件，告知到達時間并詢問相關準備。

注意：1. 詞數100左右;

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

（二）假定你是李華，春節前夕從倫敦希思羅機場（London Heathrow Airport）乘坐航班回國后發現遺失物品。請給航空公司寫一封電子郵件，說明情況并尋求幫助。

注意：1. 詞數100左右;

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

參考范文

第一類有要點

（一）

Dear Terry，

Informed that you want to use some Chinese elements in the bookmark design competition， I am gladly writing to share with you some of my ideas.

To begin with， pandas， cheongsam， Tai Chi， Chinese calligraphy， paper-cutting or even some Chinese characters are very typical and sure to win attention. Among what I mention above， Chinese calligraphy is my favorite because it has a long history and profound meaning. Besides， it is a type of art that has been widely practiced not only in China， but also generally held in high esteem across East Asia and even the world.

Hopefully these suggestions would help and all the best in the competition. Looking forward to hearing your good news.

Yours，

LiHua

（二）

Dear Terry，

How are you doing？ In your last letter， you asked me about chopsticks. Now， I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

To begin with， chopsticks are shaped pairs of equal-length sticks and are commonly made of bamboo， plastic， or stainless steel. They are held in the dominant hand， between the thumb and fingers， and used for cooking， serving or picking up food.Traditionally， it is poor etiquette to tap chopsticks on the edge of ones bowl; only beggars make this sort of noise to attract attention. It is also impolite to spear food with a chopstick. Anything too difficult to be handled with chopsticks is traditionally eaten with a spoon.

Hopefully， the information above would be helpful.

Yours，

LiHua

（三）

Dear editor，

Informed that our school English newspaper is being reformed， Im writing this email to share with you my opinions.

First， it is suggested that the entertainment column can be removed because I hold the view that the columns should be designed to have more positive effects on our study. In addition， a column concerning Chinese culture should be taken into account because the progress inacquiring Chinese culture contributes to deepening our understanding of who we are as well as broadening our horizons.

What have been mentioned above are my personal ideas. I am in the hope that my advice will meet with your approval.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

第二類 無要點

（一）

Dear Mr. Thomas，

Im Li Hua， an exchange student from China. I am glad to receive the letter from school today and know that you will be my host family during my stay in Perth. To my delight， I find we share many common interests， like going to movies， attending concerts， cooking， etc. It will be my honor to live with you， and I believe we are going to have some great time together.

I will arrive in Perth on July 25th and get to your place the next day. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can better prepare myself for my stay there.

Looking forward to seeing you！

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

（二）

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am writing to report the loss of my wallet， hoping you could do me a favor.

On February 1st， 2019， right before the Chinese Spring Festival， I flew on your flight BA039 from London Heathrow Airport to China. I well remember it was with me when I boarded the plane but gone on my arrival in Beijing， so I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 pound， my ID card， and a family photo in it.

I appreciate it if you could help me check if anyone has happened to find it and sent it to the Lost and Found. Thank you and looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

責任編輯 蔣小青